Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJune 3, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-22134Exploring the Gender Gap in Young Adult Mental Health during COVID-19: Evidence from the UKPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Webster, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 26 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Ipsos MORI and Kantar are responsible for conducting the fieldwork for the survey. The UKHLS, supported by the Economic and Social Research Council and multiple Government Departments, is scientifically led by the Institute for Social and Economic Research at the University of Essex. The research data are distributed by the UK Data Service. It should be emphasized that these organizations are not responsible for the analysis or interpretation of the data.” We note that you have provided funding information that is currently declared in your Funding Statement. However, funding information should not appear in the Acknowledgments section or other areas of your manuscript. We will only publish funding information present in the Funding Statement section of the online submission form. Please remove any funding-related text from the manuscript and let us know how you would like to update your Funding Statement. 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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). 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You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Abstract: It is good if the result has statistical result Introduction: It can be good to also describe the gender gap in mental health in other countries and regions. There could be factors, such as culture, social habit, or race that influence the gender gap in mental health during Covid-19. Methods: 1. It would interest the readers to read more description about the survey. 2. It is also still important to mention important aspects of the methods such as, sampling techniques used, did all region sampled in the national study. 3. "141,107 observations from 26,335 unique participants" Does the sample size bigger than national study data? It is also different from the total number of sample in table 1 with 141,104 samples, 3 missing data. Reviewer #2: Using a subsample of the UK Longitudinal Household Survey, the authors track changes in mental heath among young adults during Covid pandemic. Employing random-effects regression analyses, they examine the impact of loneliness and domestic factors across age and gender to ascertain their contribution to the gender gap in mental health in this population. The paper reports deterioration in mental health among women relative to men, and among young adults relative to those 65+. The authors also found that loneliness played a role in widening the mental health gender gap, noting that, compared to older age groups, the mental health of young women was influenced by loneliness. The authors conclude that young adults, especially women, continue to have worse mental health compared to other age groups, with loneliness being a key driver in gendered mental health disparities. The research questions explored in this study – if repeated in a number of robust studies – can be of significance for the implementation of public health measures in times of pandemics and/or other (ecological) crises. With that in mind, this reviewer has the following to remark: 1. The Abstract: It would be of interest if the authors include the statistics to give the reader a clearer idea of their findings from the outset. 2. Results section: The authors have reported β and p of their random-effects regression models. It would have been informative to see the 95% CIs. Another point has to do with the models and the distribution of random effects. While the normality assumption is sometimes hard to ascertain, it is still important to check the extent to which the estimates could be biased if the assumption is not met. In this context, did the authors assess this issue? Did they consider potentially using models with non-normal random effects? 3. Limitation section: A last point involves the limitations. The only limitation mentioned is that the non-response rate across the survey waves was around 70%. This paper would be stronger if it incorporates other obvious limitations. I hope this review is helpful and wish the authors the very best with their research! ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Exploring the Gender Gap in Young Adult Mental Health during COVID-19: Evidence from the UK PONE-D-24-22134R1 Dear Dr. Webster, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Kamlesh Kumar Sahu Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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