Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMarch 28, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-12367Reinterpretation of the Results of Randomized Clinical TrialsPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Habibzadeh, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== After careful consideration, we have decided that a major revision of your manuscript is necessary. The reviewers have requested a more comprehensive literature review, clearer justifications and explanations with detailed statistical assumptions, better organization within the statistical methods section, and the inclusion of a discussion on limitations and empirical validation such as a systematic simulation study. Please address these concerns thoroughly in your revision, and clearly detail your changes or provide rationales for any unaddressed comments in a response letter accompanying your revised manuscript. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Jun 16 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The work is solid. However, please be advised to mention the weaknesses of this study in DISCUSSION. In particular, the crux of the author's argument is based on Eq. (1) whose assumptions might be violated. Reviewer #2: Review Comments Summary: This paper proposes an approach selecting appropriate cut-off values for a statistical test and applies it to reanalyze a collection of clinical trials. While it provides some kind of guidance on selecting significance cut-off thresholds, the paper is not well-written, and I do not recognize the necessity of publishing it. Major comments: This paper lacks a literature review on the past developments regarding the selection of significance cut-off thresholds for a statistical test. There is not a clear justification provided for using the proposed error function as an objective. Additionally, the components of the objective function are not introduced clearly. For example, while the objective function is a weighted sum of type-I error and type-II error, the weights are not well-defined or interpreted. The objective uses the information on type-II error (or equivalently, power), yet the power is seldom mentioned in the abstract and introduction. It is introduced alongside the objective error function without proper explanations. The statistical methods section lacks organization. For instance, it would be better to omit the expressions for the distribution function of t-distribution and instead provide explanations for δ before giving the distribution function. In addition, the author fails to introduce statistical assumptions necessary for performing the calculations. For example, it is implicitly assumed that two groups are independent and normally distributed with the same variance. I do not think the current level of rigor is sufficient for introducing a completely new approach without acknowledging previous developments. In addition, using t-test only may not be always appropriate. The author employs overly definitive language, which appears very weak to me. For example, the author states, ‘Frequentist statistics has internal conflict. …’ (line 31-33), yet little evidence is given to support why the Bayesian statistics is better than the frequentist statistics, even in this specific question. I strongly disagree with making such assertions without giving sound evidence because the methods proposed in this paper do not use any knowledge or setup from Bayesian’s framework. This paper only proposes a new method without giving any discussions on the limitations or drawbacks. For example, using the proposed objective function depends on tuning multiple parameters and minimizing an objective involving the power may not be the best way of controlling false-positive. There may be many other interesting aspects relevant to the research question in this paper. For example, the impact of choosing weights on the resulting optimal cut-off values, and the relationship between parameters and final optimizer (e.g., monotone or quadratic). Why the objective is a weighted sum instead of other convex shapes? The current statistics is t-test and what is the consequence of using other test statistics? Minor comments: In the background of the abstract, the author states, ‘Many researchers show that results of RCTs are mostly false-positive’ (line 15-16). In my opinion, a false-positive is defined as the event incorrectly rejecting the null hypothesis. One cannot identify a false-positive without knowing beforehand that the null hypothesis is true. Statistically speaking, a false-positive is a binary random variable with a prespecified probability α, known as type-I error rate, which is a crucial quantity that a statistician would like to control. In the discussion section (line 231-244), the author argues for viewing the parameters as a posteriori instead of priori. I think there is gap between current methods and methods capable of handling parameters as a posterior. I suggest filling in this blank in the methods section. In the discussion section (line 255-258), the author mentions that the computational intensity may be a drawback when using the Bayesian’s framework. However, in my opinion, many modern computers can already handle the computational task if the model is not overly complex, e.g., the levels of the data are not too large. This paper lacks a systematic simulation study to demonstrate the control of false-positives and false-negatives. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Reinterpretation of the results of randomized clinical trials PONE-D-24-12367R1 Dear Dr. Habibzadeh, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. 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Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: The author has carefully addressed my comments. In summary, the introduction and presentation of the methodology have been significantly improved and clarified. The language has been softened and now reads appropriately. Additionally, the limitations have been thoroughly discussed. I believe this version is well-written, with clear interpretations and a sufficient literature review of past developments. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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