Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 28, 2023 |
|---|
|
PONE-D-23-31275The effects of icon design features on user perception and preference: A case study of icons for Covid-19PLOS ONE Dear Dr. LUJIE, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== The evaluation performed by two excellent reviewers and myself has concluded that your texts requires a major revision on methodological aspects which might improve your results and its scientific contribution. Please find below the specific items that need to be addressed. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 23 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols. Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Jorge Abelardo Falcón‐Lezama, PhD Guest Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: When submitting your revision, we need you to address these additional requirements. 1. Please ensure that your manuscript meets PLOS ONE's style requirements, including those for file naming. The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and 2. We note that your Data Availability Statement is currently as follows: All relevant data are within the manuscript and its Supporting Information files. Please confirm at this time whether or not your submission contains all raw data required to replicate the results of your study. Authors must share the “minimal data set” for their submission. PLOS defines the minimal data set to consist of the data required to replicate all study findings reported in the article, as well as related metadata and methods (https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/data-availability#loc-minimal-data-set-definition). For example, authors should submit the following data: - The values behind the means, standard deviations and other measures reported; - The values used to build graphs; - The points extracted from images for analysis. Authors do not need to submit their entire data set if only a portion of the data was used in the reported study. If your submission does not contain these data, please either upload them as Supporting Information files or deposit them to a stable, public repository and provide us with the relevant URLs, DOIs, or accession numbers. For a list of recommended repositories, please see https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/recommended-repositories. If there are ethical or legal restrictions on sharing a de-identified data set, please explain them in detail (e.g., data contain potentially sensitive information, data are owned by a third-party organization, etc.) and who has imposed them (e.g., an ethics committee). Please also provide contact information for a data access committee, ethics committee, or other institutional body to which data requests may be sent. If data are owned by a third party, please indicate how others may request data access. 3. Your ethics statement should only appear in the Methods section of your manuscript. If your ethics statement is written in any section besides the Methods, please move it to the Methods section and delete it from any other section. Please ensure that your ethics statement is included in your manuscript, as the ethics statement entered into the online submission form will not be published alongside your manuscript. 4. We note that Figures 1, 2, 3, 4, 5 and table 2 in your submission contain copyrighted images. All PLOS content is published under the Creative Commons Attribution License (CC BY 4.0), which means that the manuscript, images, and Supporting Information files will be freely available online, and any third party is permitted to access, download, copy, distribute, and use these materials in any way, even commercially, with proper attribution. For more information, see our copyright guidelines: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/licenses-and-copyright. We require you to either (1) present written permission from the copyright holder to publish these figures specifically under the CC BY 4.0 license, or (2) remove the figures from your submission: a. You may seek permission from the original copyright holder of Figures 1, 2, 3, 4, 5 and table 2 to publish the content specifically under the CC BY 4.0 license. We recommend that you contact the original copyright holder with the Content Permission Form (http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=7c09/content-permission-form.pdf) and the following text: “I request permission for the open-access journal PLOS ONE to publish XXX under the Creative Commons Attribution License (CCAL) CC BY 4.0 (http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/4.0/). Please be aware that this license allows unrestricted use and distribution, even commercially, by third parties. Please reply and provide explicit written permission to publish XXX under a CC BY license and complete the attached form.” Please upload the completed Content Permission Form or other proof of granted permissions as an ""Other"" file with your submission. In the figure caption of the copyrighted figure, please include the following text: “Reprinted from [ref] under a CC BY license, with permission from [name of publisher], original copyright [original copyright year].” b. If you are unable to obtain permission from the original copyright holder to publish these figures under the CC BY 4.0 license or if the copyright holder’s requirements are incompatible with the CC BY 4.0 license, please either i) remove the figure or ii) supply a replacement figure that complies with the CC BY 4.0 license. Please check copyright information on all replacement figures and update the figure caption with source information. If applicable, please specify in the figure caption text when a figure is similar but not identical to the original image and is therefore for illustrative purposes only. 5. Please include a copy of Tables 3, 4, 5, 6 and 7 which you refer to in your text on pages 10, 20, 21 and 22. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: PONE-D-23-31275 The study entitled: “The effects of icon design features on user perception and preference: A case study of icons for Covid-19” is an interesting study with some good stimulus material and good data collection. However, there are number of problems that would prevent publication of this study in Plos One. The major problem is a hodge podge of statistics that are in search of the question. The author could have and should have been able to determine which icons were most effective on their three dimensions within the group (e.g. for example for handwashing or mask wearing). That would have been useful information. So, I will begin with the major problems with the results and then discuss other problems. RESULTS The results need a major overhaul. The result lack statistical tests and most of the results are subjective and obtained through “eyeballing.” 1. The authors could have done a factor analysis and computed reliability coefficients for each of the 3 variables: communication effectiveness, design quality, and semantic distance but this is missing. The authors have psychometrically valid data for each of these dimensions but they do not use it. Since each of these scales contain multiple semantic differential items that represent the dimension an internal reliability coefficient is necessary and easy to compute. From that point some meaningful statistical tests could have been conducted and reported. 2. We need to know if results for each dimension were aggregated and divided by the number of items that comprise the dimension or what. I cannot find scores for each dimension. This needs major revision and clarification. 3. Just reporting the top 15 icon function types is subjective; were these significantly different? 4. What does it tell is that some function types are better than others? Does it mean that we should tell people to wash hands but not check their temperature? The research question needs to be posed and then systematically answered. 5. We need statistical evidence to back the authors’ assertion that: “it can be initially determined that users prefer icons that contain specific character images, actions.” 6. Similarly, the authors assert that “It is suggested that users prefer icons associated with images when real or illustrated more concretely.” What statistical evidence supports this assertion? 7. What would be interesting would be to ascertain for each type of icon which was significantly better than others for that types. Which hand washing icon for example was the most effective using statistical tests for each dimension. 8. The authors collected some good data using rigorous data collection techniques but there is no rigorous analysis of the data as a reader would expect. 9. For aesthetics the authors state: “In terms of mean values, all samples scored between 5 and 6 (out of a total of 7) for the subjective design features, the distribution of scores over the mean did not differ much…” But without statistical tests, how do we know this is true? 10. In the correlation analysis it is unclear as to what is being correlated. This needs some major revision. 11. Ranks need some special statical procedures to deal with ordinal data. ICONS The authors did an excellent job of 120 Icons for the study that represent a number of important Covid prevention behaviors. Similarly, it is impressive that Icons were obtained from 26 countries potentially providing some cross cultural validity. THEORETICAL BASE The article need a broader theoretical base from the study of human communication to understand the basis of iconic communication. See a number of books on nonverbal communication for the conceptual and neurophysiological basis for iconic communication. The authors should provide at least a brief summary of literature on the value of icons from the literature of nonverbal communication. Their history and conceptual basis goes way beyond computer screens-they were used and studies in many contexts (e.g. traffic signs, medicine bottles, maps, product branding etc.) long before the advent of computer screens. SAMPLE Questionnaires were distributed sing the Star App buy we do not know if the participants were Chinese, European, American, global or what. This need clarification. The authors provide a good table on characteristics of participants and good age distribution. However, we still do not know where they are from? Were these all from on particular country or was it an international sample? Was it a general sample of the Questionnaire Star App, or were some parameters specified. More detail is required. Reviewer #2: Congratulations to the authors for their work on this study. The paper offers valuable insights into icon evaluation in public health. However, I have several comments and recommendations: Introduction: - Deepen the exploration of how iconography impacts public health communication. Highlight the influence of icon design on public behavior and decision-making, particularly during health crises. - Incorporate a concise review of previous studies on public health iconography, emphasizing the novel contributions or challenges your research presents. - Clearly articulate the theoretical framework guiding your study, linking it directly to your objectives and anticipated results. Section 2.3 Evaluation Metrics for Icon Design: - The categorization in Table 3 is somewhat unclear, particularly regarding the second and third categories. I recommend revising the descriptions to ensure they align with the text and avoid repetition. Methodology: - Clarify the criteria for selecting icons and the reasoning behind these choices to enhance the study's replicability. - Provide a more detailed account of participant demographics to strengthen the study's validity. - Detail the validation or pilot phase of the Questionnaire Star App, including languages used, and add relevant references. - Explain the rationale for choosing the Bentler and Chou method. - Clarify the process and purpose of the ranking test. Table 2 appears to present results rather than methodology, which could be confusing. - Elaborate on the use of factor analysis and PCA, as they were mentioned but not detailed in the paper. - For Table 2's categorization, consider supporting your approach with robust strategies like cluster analysis, Multidimensional Scaling (MDS), Content Analysis, or advanced AI techniques like CNNs, Autoencoders, Transfer Learning, or Deep Learning with Data Augmentation. - Overall, a more thorough statistical analysis plan is needed, outlining the methods for data analysis and their alignment with your research questions. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Dr. Peter A Andersen Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step.
|
| Revision 1 |
|
The effects of icon design features on user perception and preference: A case study of icons for Covid-19 PONE-D-23-31275R1 Dear Dr. Lin, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Jorge Abelardo Falcón‐Lezama, PhD Guest Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
| Formally Accepted |
|
PONE-D-23-31275R1 PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Lin, I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now being handed over to our production team. At this stage, our production department will prepare your paper for publication. This includes ensuring the following: * All references, tables, and figures are properly cited * All relevant supporting information is included in the manuscript submission, * There are no issues that prevent the paper from being properly typeset If revisions are needed, the production department will contact you directly to resolve them. If no revisions are needed, you will receive an email when the publication date has been set. At this time, we do not offer pre-publication proofs to authors during production of the accepted work. Please keep in mind that we are working through a large volume of accepted articles, so please give us a few weeks to review your paper and let you know the next and final steps. Lastly, if your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at customercare@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Jorge Abelardo Falcón‐Lezama Guest Editor PLOS ONE |
Open letter on the publication of peer review reports
PLOS recognizes the benefits of transparency in the peer review process. Therefore, we enable the publication of all of the content of peer review and author responses alongside final, published articles. Reviewers remain anonymous, unless they choose to reveal their names.
We encourage other journals to join us in this initiative. We hope that our action inspires the community, including researchers, research funders, and research institutions, to recognize the benefits of published peer review reports for all parts of the research system.
Learn more at ASAPbio .