Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionFebruary 5, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-03754The quantity and composition of household food waste: implications for policyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Diana, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 02 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This study focuses on analyzing the differences in the amount, types, and causes of household food waste between urban and rural areas. It was conducted in Bogor Regency, Indonesia, and involved 215 households. The researchers used waste compositional analysis for food and diaries for beverages to assess household food waste. However, it could benefit from more detailed explanations of the methodology, a deeper analysis of findings, and a more comprehensive presentation to provide a clearer picture of the research. Some of the issues which needs to be addressed before further process are the following: Abstract: 1. This abstract need revision: Background and Gap (reason you are conducting this study in this area), are the main missing parts in this abstract. Introduction: 2. The citation markers (e.g., "(1)", "(2-6)") disrupt the flow of the text and could be incorporated more smoothly. Please use a proper citation style. 3. The transition between discussing global food waste and focusing on Indonesia could be smoother. Consider using transitional phrases to connect these sections more effectively. 4. line 50, you said “Moreover, studies on FW in middle-income countries, particularly Southeast Asia, are limited.” However, you didn’t acknowledge the limitations of existing research. It's important to acknowledge the limitations of existing research, particularly the lack of detailed data on food waste in Indonesia. This could help set the stage for the current study and emphasize its importance. You didn’t your study area and made all data underlying the findings in your manuscript fully available. Please do it. Methodology: 5. While the study mentions the use of multistage random sampling, it does not elaborate on the specific details of how households were selected within each stage. 6. This approach introduces inconsistencies, potentially affecting data reliability. The diary method has limitations like forgetfulness and inaccurate estimations. I suggest to improve measurement techniques, you implement “waste audits”, where trained personnel sort and weigh household waste samples over an extended period. You can also use “Smart sensor technology”. This Smart sensor integrated into trash bins to automatically quantify and categorize waste, providing real-time data collection without relying on self-reporting. 7. The study mentions obtaining written informed consent from participants and approval from the Human Research Ethics Committee. However, it does not provide details on how privacy and confidentiality were ensured, especially given the sensitive nature of waste-related data. 8. The adaptation of the method from the National Zero Waste Council of Canada introduces a potential bias if the waste generation patterns and waste management practices in Indonesia differ significantly from those in Canada. This raises questions about the validity and applicability of the methodology to the local context. Result: 9. Why can’t you present your result by figures? The figures presented in the comparison study could provide valuable insights into the differences and similarities between the urban and rural contexts. 10. Line 109. While statistical significance (p<0.001) is mentioned, it would be beneficial to provide confidence intervals or other measures of uncertainty to qualify the findings and indicate the robustness of the observed differences between urban and rural areas. 11. Line 135. Reasons for throwing away food: Better by comparison: “why do urban areas generate more FW per capita? Are there specific consumption patterns, food distribution systems, or waste management practices that contribute to this disparity?” Discussion: 12. The discussion does not provide a clear context for the study or its significance. It merely states the findings without explaining why the study was conducted or what implications these findings might have. It lacks depth in analysis and fails to offer comprehensive solutions to address the complex issue of food waste. 13. please cite your results (tables, figures) in this part Conclusion: 14. This conclusion oversimplifies the complexities of FW generation and overlooks the importance of context-specific factors in determining effective prevention and reduction strategies. A more nuanced analysis taking into account the unique characteristics of each setting would provide a stronger foundation for developing targeted interventions to address FW in both urban and rural areas. Reviewer #2: Dear author/s, the topic of the manuscript is interesting, however there a few aspects that should be improved: 1. The research questions are missing, please add them in order to emphasize the originality of the manuscript. 2. So far the research instruments to determinate the reasons for food waste not presented. Whom fulfill it? 3. Which is the novelty of the research? What gap in the existing literature this study fills? 4. The discussion part could be improved by comparing your results with other similar researches. 5. Which are the limitations of the study? What about future research direction and managerial implications of the study? Reviewer #3: I appreciate the work done by the authors. The manuscript provides a wealth of information and data demonstrating the FW in the study area. Through this literature, readers can learn about FW in Indian context, providing useful references and insights for practice and research in the field of FW management. For the above reasons, this manuscript is agreed for publication. However, there are some comments the authors have to address before the publication (See highlighted comments in the paper). ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Dr. Vincent NZABARINDA Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes: Dr. Emmanuel Bizimana ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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The quantity and composition of household food waste: implications for policy PONE-D-24-03754R1 Dear Dr. Diana, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Fabien MUHIRWA Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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