Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionNovember 14, 2023 |
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PONE-D-23-37309Within-subject variation of C-reactive protein and high-sensitivity C-reactive protein: A systematic review and meta-analysisPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Gough, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process in a detailed fashion. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 27 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Review Authors performed a meta analysis of studies reporting variability in different populations. They report large intraindidivual variability over time. While this is interesting to clinicians (potential overuse of CRP), there are major concerns regarding the design of the meta analysis and the quality of the underlying studies. Abstract Line 28-29: A systematic review and meta-analysis was performed to estimate within-subject variability of CRP and hsCRP. � Please add, that variability over time was measured and state which time period was considered. Introduction Line 70: while it may be true that hsCRP can predict the risk of cardiovascular disease I do not agree that this it is used for this purpose in the clinic often. I would say that the most important use of hsCRP is to identify patients with known atherosclerotic cardiovascular disease with residual inflammatory risk. Line 95: I do not understand the sentence – “duetocause”? Line 118-121: What are the authors trying to say? Please rephrase. Methods: Line 137-142: I would suggest a statistician to check the methodology as I myself am not an expert in statistics. Line 143-144: “There was no restriction on time of publication, language of publication, population, setting or sample size”. Overall, this is problematic. This design limits the validity as biological variability will differ between populations and larger sample sizes are less likely to report random results. For example, including a study with 4 patients in the analysis is questionable. What were the intervals between CRP measurements? Were the studies included conducted specifically to assess CRP/hsCRP variability? If not, how can they ensure that intraindividual variability was measured and not treatment effects or disease states (trauma, infection, cancer etc.) were measured? The authors need to explain how the results they report are meaningful rather than statistical “noise”. Line 154: Foreign language papers were translated by Google translate software. – this is problematic as it can introduce mistakes. Results: Regarding Line 222-223: CRP values will naturally vary over time, particularly if the study features clinical trials, as interventions will affect CRP levels (e.g. statin treatment). Later the authors state that CRP levels measured before and after interventions led to exclusion of the study. There were six clinical trials included (placebo). However, even the placebo may theoretically affect CRP levels (patient may behave differently if he believes being treated). I do not believe these studies should be included. I believe answering this question requires more controlled conditions and a prospective cohort study design. Discussion: The discussion reads as a long list of limitations. Line 300: This current systematic review and meta-analysis includes a much wider pool of studies, and is not restricted to healthy populations, allowing some conclusions to be drawn on the variability of CRP and hsCRP in unhealthy populations. Line 329: This is particularly true when single number cut-off points are used, for example “do not use antibiotics if CRP <20mg/L”, since a measured value of for example 18mg/L may represent a much higher (or much lower) true mean for that individual. Clinicians should be aware that a single measurement, or even multiple measurements, may not be an accurate reflection of the true mean CRP for an individual patient. – From a clinician’s perspective this statement is not required. Nobody would start antibiotics based alone on CRP. Please rephrase. In fact, many clinicians do not use CRP at all when assessing need for CRP. I believe that many factors influence CRP increase which is the more significant clinical problem, rather than a individual variability. This should be commented on in the discussion. Individual variability may however be more important regarding hsCRP levels, particularly in the setting of cardiovascular disease. Authors should discuss this. Reviewer #2: At first I would like to thank the editor for the opportunity to review the paper of Gough et al. This paper is a meta-analysis about the estimation of within-subject variability of CRP and hsCRP measurement resulting in a respectively high variability for both measurements, quite similar to an existing meta analysis. The study is limited by different variability measurements being calculated and a partially low participant number in the included studies. The aim and the methods used in the study were outlined clearly. Please find the specific comments below. 1.) Impact. The authors should outline the added value of this study, especially compared to the existing, updated meta-analyses of the EFLM database, including different health conditions. What additional knowledge do the authors' results provide and how should they be interpreted in comparison to the results of the existing meta-analysis? 2.) Readability and Typography. The study would profit from breaking down the main information in shorter sentences. Authors should as well remain consistent in the way they write out numbers or describe them as digits. Some parts of the study should be proofread for easier understanding (for example lines 46, 95…) 3.) Consistency in reporting results. The study would improve if the results were pointed out clearer. The authors should clarify the following: a) Report of all possible scores (1-4) of “risk of bias” in table 3. b) The authors report “In 22 (36.7%) studies the within-subject biological variation (CVI) was reported, while…”. Opposing this, about 32 observations of CV are mentioned later on, as well as in Figure 2 and 3. It would be helpful to point out how many studies in which group (CRP vs hsCRP) were reporting CVI, CVT or CV. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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Within-subject variation of C-reactive protein and high-sensitivity C-reactive protein: A systematic review and meta-analysis PONE-D-23-37309R1 Dear Dr. Gough, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. 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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Dear authors, thank you for addressing some of my concerns. The authors now acknowledge the limitations of their study, particularly the poor data basis. Some points minor points remain however: what does this sentence mean? Daily CRP infection? : Line 121-123 "Some authors even suggest the level of variability of CRP may influence clinical decisions, with one paper studying intensive care unit acquired infections showing daily CRP infection could be used as a marker of infection." Last paragraph 375-379: From a clinical point of view: nobody will repeat a CRP test several times. This would be a strategy for a prospective study. In the clinic, based on the authors data, I would say one may assume a variation around a specific CRP value. Just remove the last part of the sentence behind the comma. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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