Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionApril 12, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-14393Spatiotemporal dynamic models of Amblyomma americanum questing activity in the Central Great PlainsPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Cobos, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The reviewers agree that your study is of interest, but both have concerns about the modeling approach that you used. Additionally, it is not clear how your work addresses and fits into the bigger picture of climate change and expansion of tick vectors of pathogens. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 24 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Intro: OK Methods: Figure 1: Add a legend, a North Arrow and a scale to the map. A background depicing major geographical elements in the study region of landscape cover would be interesting. The x-axis of the histogram at the top is on an inversed chronological order. It would be good to have it started in year 2020. L139-140 Justify the choice of the 8 days averaging for Daymet data. This is unusual: we are more used to have weekly average L 136-137. Remove the mention of Daymet data before 202 if you don’t use them If you do, please clarify the way you used them. L148 please specify the results of the PCA used into the absence/presence data analysis (maybe first and second components only?). L160 what is the difference between a PERMANOVA test and a cluster analysis? L 199-203 would it be possible to clarify the reason why this model selection approach is valid also for your presence AND absence data?. It would be also good to give some details about the rational behind each steps of this model selection process. L212-225 I think this section is a bit week. It misses validation (comparison with independent dataset) and/or a sort of sensitivity analysis. Results OK Discussion The discussion clearly miss global and in details interpretation of the models predictor in terms of tick biology. L335 the models used Daymet data that are weather variable. When saying ‘environmental’ variables we would expect to have landuse/landcover predictors in the model, but it is not the case. I suggest to clarify/modify the sentence here. L343 there seems to be a ‘is’ that is not necessary in the sentence L350-351 The usage of this model for the tracking of the ticks expansion would have required an assessment of the model sensitivity in space. Considering the limited number of ticks sampling sites (n=10) used in this study and the absence of validation/comparison with external dataset, I would recommend removing this suggestion. One on the possible utility of the model developed is its usage as forecasting tool (using weather prediction). I suggest author to integrate this if possible. In the legend of Figure 4 , 5 and 6, specify the North Arrow, the stage of the tick concerned by the prediction, and a spatial scale Supplementary files: I wasn’t able to access them Reviewer #2: This is an interesting article, which uses a statistical modelling approach to identify environmental suitability for questing activity of the tick Amblyomma americanum in a focal area of the US. As this location is well within broad suitability, the models are not identifying suitability for tick population persistence. Activity of this tick is determined by temperature and humidity but also possibly effects of daylength switching on and off diapause, so the approach is intrinsically interesting. I have some concerns about the manuscript in its present form. Major points: The selected temperature, humidity, daylength explanatory variables are all going to be highly correlated, but I don’t see accounting for this. Daylength as a continuous variable would only have an effect on activity as a proxy of temperature and possibly humidity. I think effects of daylength on switching on and switching off activity (behavioural diapause) would need to be modelled using some kind of threshold. The authors use smoothing to ‘iron out’ vagaries of weather – but weather at the time of sampling is likely very important for tick activity – i.e. if the mean temperature is 20C over a week, that would be temperature suitable for tick activity, but if you happen to visit the site on one day when the temperature is 8C you might not find questing ticks – and the 8C is the determinant of that result – not the average 20C. I am not convinced of the value of the ‘Niche signal test’ analysis – we know a priori that there are temperature and humidity limits on tick activity and these occur at specific times of the year that correlate with daylength. More minor points: The article would be improved by a more careful explanation of the objective – i.e. identifying when and where tick activity is occurring. But who would use this information and what for? Also some alteration of the introduction is needed to explain the focus on A. americanum. PlosOne is an international journal and there are many tick species of public health importance beyond I. scapularis. The importance of different tick instars as vector of different pathogens should be identified – nymphs and adults (but particularly nymphs which are more numerous than adults) for pathogens with no transovarial transmission, but larvae also for pathogens with transovarial transmission. Are the numbers of ticks collected at a particular site visit independent of those at the previous visit? If not this needs justification, and if so it needs some kind of accounting in the GLMs. I think the comparison of observed tick questing activity and model predictions should be in the main paper. I’m not sure of the value of the mapped ‘extreme conditions’ in Fig 5 as these are only present at some times of the year and don’t describe conditions that result in absence of the ticks. Figure 1 – the x-axis of time for the bar chart is going right to left rather than the expected left to right. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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