Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJanuary 21, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-02148Variation in Benefit among Patients with Serious Mental Illness Who Receive Integrated Psychiatric and Primary CarePLOS ONE Dear Dr. Young, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 04 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please remove any funding-related text from the manuscript and let us know how you would like to update your Funding Statement. Currently, your Funding Statement reads as follows: This research was supported by the U.S. Department of Veterans Affairs, Veterans Health Administration, Health Services Research and Development Service Quality Enhancement Research Initiative (SDP 12-177; AY), and Desert Pacific Mental Illness Research, Education and Clinical Center (MIRECC; AY). https://www.queri.research.va.gov/ Funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript. Please include your amended statements within your cover letter; we will change the online submission form on your behalf. 5. Please include your full ethics statement in the ‘Methods’ section of your manuscript file. In your statement, please include the full name of the IRB or ethics committee who approved or waived your study, as well as whether or not you obtained informed written or verbal consent. If consent was waived for your study, please include this information in your statement as well. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I) General comments Authors present the results form a clinical trial on an integrated primary and psychiatric care home intervention for patients (n=164) with severe mental illness (SMI) and increased risk of hospitalisation or death. The authors report improvements across healthcare and patient outcomes across different levels of risk. Authors thus conclude that the intervention would benefit patients across different levels of risk, and not just those at the highest 95th percentile. The topic of the manuscript is relevant, given the high risk of poor physical health outcomes among people with SMI, including premature death. Overall, the manuscript is correctly written and detailed enough to allow for replication. I add below my comments and suggestions for improvements of the manuscript. II) Abstract: - Authors indicate that the study was conducted “in a population with … increased risk”, but it is not explicitly mentioned what type of risk they refer to. While this is alluded to in the previous paragraph, I think it would better clarify the study’s methods if authors indicate that they refer to increased risk of hospitalisation or death. - Authors indicate that the sample was followed for a median of 401 days, but this information is not mentioned later in the main text (Methods or Results sections). III) Introduction: the introduction is well-structure, and clearly presents the problem and objectives of the study. IV) Methods: overall, the methods section is well written, and the data collection and analysis strategy is detailed enough to allow for replication. A few comments: - Page 4: There is a duplicated “random” in the final line: “a random sample of 164 were randomly selected”. - Page 4: authors indicate that 164 participants were randomly selected, but no justification is given for the sample size. For example, was this sample size selected base on power analysis or due to practical reasons? - More information would be helpful regarding the collection of outcome variables. Authors indicate that outcome data is drawn from in-person assessments (page 5). However, it is not mentioned whether the raters were blind to patient allocation to CAN score groups. Authors should also specify who conducted the in-person assessments. In particular, if the assessments were done by members of the research group, or by clinicians blind to the study’s objectives. This could introduce a risk of assessment bias that – if present - should also be acknowledged in the limitations. V) Results: overall, the results are thoroughly and clearly presented. A few observations: - Authors provide pre-intervention (“before medical home”) and a post-intervention (“after medical home”) outcomes scores, but no information is given on the time between each time measure. This should be better clarified to help interpret the results. - Asterisk in titles of Tables 2-3 are not explained. - Table 2: are the values in the “change” column significant? This is not indicated, as in Table 3. VI) Discussion: overall, the discussion in balanced and the conclusions mostly derive from the study’s results. However, the section would benefit from a more nuanced discussion on a few key points: - Authors indicate that there were improvements in outcomes across all risk groups. Authors mention “lipids screening” as a healthcare outcome that shows an improvement. However, no mention is given to the other treatment quality outcomes, particularly those that do not seem to show a significant improvement (e.g. BMI screening and blood pressure). Addressing this would provide a more balanced discussion. - Similarly, the section would benefit from a more detailed discussion of the results related to “patient outcomes” (Table 3). In particular, some outcomes do not seem to show a significant improvement for some of the risk groups (e.g. psychotic symptoms for the CAN 95-99 group) or for any of the three risk groups (e.g. patient activation). This should be better acknowledged for a more accurate summary of the study’s results. - The manuscript would benefit from a more explicit acknowledgement of the study’s strength and limitations. In particular, methodological aspects such as the risk of potential assessment bias raised above (if applicable). - Citations should be provided for the statement in page 10: “Studies have found that health can be improved in populations with SMI with interventions that integrate medical and psychiatric care”. Reviewer #2: The authors present results from a study of the impact of integrated services on health screening and patient outcomes, stratified by baseline patient risk. The study was conducted in a random sample of individuals from a large Veterans Affairs network. The authors find improvements pre-post integrated services, but no significant differences across risk groups. The manuscript will be strengthened if the authors consider the following points. 1. Authors report that median follow-up is 401 days, suggesting that patients were in the medical home for varying lengths of time. Did the time in the home differ between risk groups? It does not appear as though time in the home is accounted for in any way. Since the integrated services were delivered at the medical home, time in the home could have an impact on differences pre and post home. Authors need to address this difference in their analyses. 2. It is unclear if the p-values reported in Table 1 are from simple models (one independent variable associated with risk level) or from a joint model including all of the variables. This should be clarified both in the methods and in the table, so that readers know what they are looking at. 3. Were outcome measures of interest only collected before and after the medical home? The models fit for Tables 2 and 3 (as described in the Analysis section) seem to only utilize those two time points. If other assessments were available, why didn't the authors use that information, which would better capture potential fluctuation over time? 4. Table 2 gives the percentage receiving services before the medical home and after the medical home, as well as the difference in those numbers. Is it true that everyone who was receiving the services before the medical home was still receiving the services after the medical home? If not, "change" cannot be captured simply in the difference in number before and after the medical home. 5. Table 3 - are these observed means and standard deviations before and after the medical home? Was everyone seen both before and after the medical home? How is the "Change" column computed? The reason I ask is the mean change does not appear to correspond to the difference in means before and after (though it should if everyone is seen at both time points). 6. In the models for Table 3, did authors verify the assumptions? Some of the outcomes seem like they have the potential to be highly skewed, which often suggests underlying assumptions of the mixed effects models will be violated. Were any covariates included in the models, since there were observed differences between the risk groups at baseline? 7. Authors claim that improvements do not vary significantly by risk groups. While they did not find significant differences, did authors do a power calculation ahead of time to understand what level of difference they were powered to detect? A lack of significance does not prove there are no differences, so authors should be careful in how they interpret their findings. Minor points: 1. Authors should clarify in the analysis section that patients were stratified based on baseline CAN percentile score, since earlier, they indicate that CAN scores are generated weekly. 2. Authors should also clarify that the area under the curve is area under the ROC curve, if that is what is being reported. 3. Table 1 - the numbers in the risk groups do not add to the overall column (there appears to be 1 person missing a bunch of data, but that is not reflected in the overall column). This discrepancy should be corrected. 4. Tables 2 and 3 have asterisks after "baseline risk" but do not define the asterisk. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Variation in Benefit among Patients with Serious Mental Illness Who Receive Integrated Psychiatric and Primary Care PONE-D-24-02148R1 Dear Dr. Alexander S. Young, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Mu-Hong Chen, M.D., Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: All my previous comments and observations have been addressed. I have not further comments or observations for this new version of the amnuscript. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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