Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 5, 2023 |
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PONE-D-23-30249Estimation of calories intake, Iron, Zinc, and Selenium among children of the underprivileged area in Sindh, PakistanPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Kapoor, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 04 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The ultimate goal of a scientific publication is to expand knowledge, get recognition by citations, recommendations, etc., and to ensure that the study conducted results in improvements in practical activity. I think the third point received a lot of attention, but the other points received relatively little. As a result, the authors restricted what could have been a highly intriguing study, both in terms of its theoretical potential and its ability to disseminate information. I regret that the vast bulk of the work's potential has not been realized. Speculating, I would argue that with 10% more effort, you could easily achieve 100% greater results. I would like to emphasize on the following and authors of this publication should work on those areas. 1. In the abstract, it is imperative that the author provides a report on the significant differences in total calorie intake, carbohydrates, and protein amongst each other, with regards to mean, median, or any other relevant parameter. Additionally, the author should also explicate any significant differences in gender distribution with respect to variables such as Zinc, Calcium, and Iron. It is essential to maintain formality, avoid contractions, and ensure clarity and conciseness while drafting the abstract. 2. The impact of different macronutrients on our health, it's crucial to examine their individual correlation coefficients. Unfortunately, the author overlooked this important detail. By providing the values for carbohydrates, protein, and fat, we could gain a more comprehensive understanding of their respective effects on the dependent variable. 3. The methodology section of the study mentions that it is a community-based study, but it doesn't provide a clear description of the sampling technique used. Ideally, in a study of this nature, a strata sampling or cluster sampling design would be appropriate. It would be helpful if the author could provide more details on how the Sindh Province was divided into different district regions, and the rationale behind the chosen sampling technique. A clear justification of the sampling technique used would enhance the credibility of the study's findings. 4. It seems that the power analysis and sample size used in the study did not adequately explain how the author obtained a 50% response rate from the participants or patients. To address this issue, it may be helpful for the authors to use programs such as PASS or nQuery Statistical software to calculate the necessary sample size and power for the study. 5. There are several chances of bias occurs such response bias, self-selection bias communication bias, drop out bias, etc. how you managed bias? 6. In the methodology section of the paper, the process of validating the questionnaire was not clearly explained. It is crucial to know how the questionnaire was validated in order to establish its reliability and validity. Moreover, the questionnaire was administered in the local language, which raises questions about its accuracy and effectiveness. It would have been helpful if the author had conducted reliability analysis through Cronbach Alpha values to test or re-test the questionnaire's consistency and internal reliability. Therefore, without proper validation and testing, the results based on the questionnaire may not be reliable or generalizable. 7. In the statistical analysis, it is important to ensure that the data follows a normal distribution. Therefore, it is crucial to perform a normality test using the most appropriate method. One of the commonly used methods for normality testing is the Kolmogorov-Smirnov test. Hence, it is essential to check if the author performed the Kolmogorov-Smirnov test or any other appropriate test to verify the normality of the data in the statistical analysis. 8. The author has to rewrite all of the statistical analyses and concentrate on the inappropriate table formatting with respect to their titles as well. 9. it appears that the author conducted their analysis with a focus on gender differences in macro-nutritional deficiencies. However, it's worth noting that the title and objective of the study were coherent with this approach, suggesting that the author intended to investigate gender disparities in nutritional deficiencies. It is important to consider the context of the research when interpreting the analysis, and in this case, the gender-based approach seems to be appropriate. Overall, the coherence between the title, objective, and analysis of the study suggests that the author had a clear research question and methodology in mind, and that their findings are relevant to the topic at hand. 10. Author needs to be improved on the limitation of the study and discussion section. In conclusion, as I have stated, the authors appear to have worked hard to minimize the work's scope, scientific significance, and practical utility. If you were under my organizational control, I would advise you to rework some of the arguments, from the theoretical to the data analysis, and rewrite the piece since, if done effectively, it can have an impact in many nations. But, I merely serve as a reviewer in this capacity, confirming that the piece does, in fact, fit the requirements for publishing. Reviewer #2: I would like to express my appreciation for the study. The research addresses a significant and timely topic, contributing valuable insights to the field. The authors have done an excellent job in not only conducting a rigorous study but also in presenting their findings with clarity and precision. One notable aspect of the study is the authors' commendable transparency in addressing the limitations of their research. This acknowledgment reflects their commitment to scholarly integrity and provides readers with a comprehensive understanding of the study's scope and potential constraints. Furthermore, I would like to highlight the exceptional quality of writing and the overall management of the study. The clarity of language and the logical organization of the content make the study highly accessible to readers. In conclusion, this study stands out not only for its importance but also for the authors' commendable efforts in communicating their findings effectively and managing the research with a high level of proficiency. I believe this work significantly contributes to the scholarly literature in our field. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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Estimation of calories intake, Iron, Zinc, and Selenium among children of the underprivileged area in Sindh, Pakistan PONE-D-23-30249R1 Dear Dr. Kapoor, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Prof Sajid Soofi Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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