Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionFebruary 5, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-02557Incidence and Predictors of Acute Kidney Injury among Patients in Intensive Care Unit at a Comprehensive Specialized Hospital in Central EthiopiaPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Ashine, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 15 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: 1. Good background, however better to mention the government’s emphasis, standards and the gaps that ought to fill. 2. Was is a retrospective cohort study or follow up study? What is the difference between them? 3. Why patients admitted less than 24 hrs were excluded from the study? 4. “The probability of developing AKI at 1, 24 and 48 days were 0.9874, 0.4728 and 0.1359 consecutively”, it seemed incorrect (coding should be checked) and it seemed survival probability not failure probability. 5. What is the difference between survival time and follow up time? This study reported the median follow up time but not the median survival time, which is important for decision making than the follow up time. 6. Fluid balance: The CHR changed from 1.72 to 2:00 when it is handled in multivariable analysis. What could you think about this effect? (Effect modification) 7. Have you checked the proportional hazard assumption of your model? If so where is the result? 8. Have you checked the model fitness? If so where is the result? 9. Could you think that sample size difference a cause for the discrepancy of results between your study and previous studies? What does mean sampling distribution??? 10. All factors identified by this study seems non-modifiable. Could it be used for improving the services, guideline revision and policy improvement? Reviewer #2: Thank you for the opportunity to read and evaluate the manuscript entitled “Incidence and Predictors of Acute Kidney Injury among Patients in Intensive Care Unit at a Comprehensive Specialized Hospital in Central Ethiopia: PONE-D-4-02557”.The article covers an interesting topic and suit for publication. However, it needs some revision before being accepted for publication. General comments: 1. The authors should give line numbers to make the review process easy 2. The manuscript has many editorial problems and needs language editing Title: 3. The title needs a slight modification to indicate that your study populations are adults admitted to the medical ICU. Abstract: 4. Avoid/minimize abbreviations: especially don’t start sentences with abbreviations. 5. Mention how many patients developed AKI from the total sample Introduction: 6. The problem is not well stated. I suggest the authors describe how relevant is AKI as a cause of morbidity and mortality in Ethiopia. Methods 7. The authors describe that they have reviewed five years of follow-up data on charts of ICU patients who were admitted from September 1, 2018, to August 30, 2022, GC. But it will be 4 years from September 1, 2018, to August 30, 2022. 8. The authors should describe how many beds the medical ICU has, the average annual number of patients admitted to the medical ICU, and the staff composition under the study area section. 9. The source and study population should be corrected. The findings of this study will not be generalized for patients admitted to the surgical ICU and should indicate that the source population for this study will be “all patients admitted to the Medical ICU…… What the authors describe as a study population is the sample included in the study. The study population will be “All patients who were admitted to the medical Intensive Care Unit of Wachemo University Nigist Ellen Mohammed Memorial Comprehensive Specialized Hospital during the study period.” 10. Why do the authors use “admission to the ICU for more than 24 hours” as eligibility criteria? The authors also mention the “Baseline period, which was starting after 24 hours of ICU admission.” Don’t you consider clinical characteristics at the time of admission? 11. Do the authors exclude patients for incompleteness of any study variable? 12. The authors should mention all the parameters used to calculate the sample size and should cite the correct reference where the hazard ratios and probability of event are taken. 13. Why do the authors prefer the systematic sampling technique over the simple random sampling technique? 14. Do the clinicians in the study setting use the given operational definition for AKI? A patient with a serum creatinine level of 0.6mg/dl may come with 0.9 mg/dl within 48 hours of measurement. So, are we going to classify this patient as having AKI? Couldn’t there be any other explanation? Result: 15. Sociodemographic factors are overlooked. The authors consider only age and sex. Is there any justification for not considering other sociodemographic factors in the study? 16. The authors have a variable “complication” under the comorbidities and complications section. What kind of complication is it? It should be operationalized. 17. I suggest the authors use another table format that doesn’t have d/t color for d/t categories of a variable. Especially, table 2 is not clear. 18. The authors should differentiate between median survival time and median follow-up time. The report is 23 days for both. But I can see from the life table that the survival probability was about 45% around the 12th day. Please re-check the median survival time. 19. I suggest the authors present the table of log-rank test for all important predictor variables rather than showing the comparison of survivorship function for only the fluid balance. 20. The variable comorbidities entered in the multivariable regression should be operationalized. 21. Vancomycin is usually given for hospital-acquired infection but both hospital-acquired infection and vancomycin were considered as separate variables. Do the authors check the correlation b/n these two variables? 22. In Table 5, the sum of the rows is much above the sample size for variable “Average MAP” and below the sample size for variables “Average PIP” and “Average PEEP”. Check the consistency of the sum of rows and columns anyway. Discussion: 23. The justification given for the differences in the incidence of AKI with other findings should be scientific. Considering sample size, follow-up period, and sampling method as an explanation for the difference doesn’t make sense. 24. The justification for the significant factors seems personal suggestions. The authors should cite scientific evidence for the possible explanations. 25. The authors describe that “this study is the first study in Ethiopia to determine the burden of AKI in critically ill ICU patients.” However, there are some studies in d/t parts of Ethiopia and this is a sign of not acknowledging others effort. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Incidence and Predictors of Acute Kidney Injury among Adults Admitted to the Medical Intensive Care Unit of a Comprehensive Specialized Hospital in Central Ethiopia PONE-D-24-02557R1 Dear Dr. Ashine, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Chiara Lazzeri Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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