Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionFebruary 6, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-01787Do all roads lead to Rome? An ideal-type study on trajectories of resilience in advanced cancer caregiving.PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Opsomer, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 10 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: N/A ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). 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You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This is an important study that was also well written and was clear. I had a few minor comments 1. Within the methodology the authors are not explicit about the methods used. 2. One of the inclusion criteria was if the participant was fluent in Dutch, but it is not clear if the interviews were conducted in Dutch and if so then there should be statement of translation of the data 3. More information is needed in the reflexivity section on how the researchers could have influenced the findings of the research 4. The quotes of the participants should have the quotation marks 5. Regarding consent of the participants in the follow up interviews , were participants reconsented on the subsequent interviews or was it at the beginning only. What happened if the participants hade reservations on the next interview. Reviewer #2: Thank you for the opportunity to review this well-written paper. I found it interesting to read. There are a few minor areas where clarity is required. Aims & rationale: The aims of the study and rationale for the study are clearly outlined – and the originality of the study and the novel contributions it makes to the existing literature are made clear. Lines 45-47 – it is stated that it is assumed that the approximate 60% resilience/recovery rates found in the research on PTEs apply to partners of those with an advanced stage diagnosis…”since in clinical practice, most of these partners have a resilient outcome”. Is this the anecdotal/subjective experience of the authors? If so, this should be stated for clarity’s sake (otherwise the sentence requires a reference). This is then referred to later in the discussion where the findings of this study do indeed support this assumption. Methods: The methodological approach used in the study is clearly explained – and sufficient measures are taken to ensure consistency in analysis between researchers, which enhances the reliability and validity of the study. Clarity is required with regards to participant completion of the Dutch Mental Health Continuum-Short Form (MHC-SF): lines 104-106 do not appear to match what is stated in lines 552-553. This needs to be consistent. Findings and Discussion: The findings are presented logically and suitably evidenced. I found the arguments made convincing. The discussion locates the findings clearly in the existing literature. This does not need to be addressed in the paper (as it is addressed in the implications section – where further research on ‘personal characteristics’ is recommended), however, for interest’s sake, what I found fascinating is that results line up with the understandings offered by psychoanalytic and attachment theories too. The ‘participant characteristics’ referred to as positivity, flexibility and inner strength, could be understood from related theoretical orientations to represent participants’ mental health, personality structures, ego strength, emotion regulation capacities and interpersonal relationship skills, which are influenced by their personal histories of previous loss/es. Current findings suggest that across cultures approximately 60% of the population is securely attached, with the remaining 40% exhibiting insecure (preoccupied/dismissive) attachment or disorganised/unresolved attachment. These attachment states of mind reflect styles of psychological defence and strategies for managing emotional threats, in addition to capacities to use interpersonal support. Those with insecure and disorganised attachment states of mind tend to exhibit over- or under-regulation of emotion and the use of more immature defences such as denial, which was found in the continuing distress and delayed distress ideal types. They had denial in common – that when breached by death or the reality of likely loss – then appeared to cause emotional distress. The frozen disconnection ideal type was suggestive of disorganised attachment where dissociation as a defensive strategy is common. This type seemed to have the most rigid denial defence – to the point that even when distress emerged, it was still dissociated/denied from the cancer of their partner and misattributed to other causes e.g. work burnout. Incidentally, the fact that the self-report questionnaire findings did not appear to correlate with reviewer observations of distress may reflect these very distortions caused by intrapsychic defensive processes. Healthy help-seeking is also supported by these theories, as the distortions in thinking found in insecure/disorganised attachment states of mind influence capacity for mature relating to others. One clarification in this section related to line 444 where it is stated: “strong attachment to the partner was apparent” – this could be misconstrued as a strong attachment, psychologically speaking, is good/healthy – this attachment is perhaps better characterised as dependent? Limitations of the study: Although the effects of COVID-19 as an additional stressor are mentioned, the fact that references to the pandemic are scattered throughout the evidencing quotes, suggests that its influence may have coloured the findings more significantly than acknowledged. This was a largely unusual worldwide stressor that had unique mental health impacts, and the unique uncertainty it posed to those with existing healthcare conditions, the uncertainties surrounding access to healthcare, and the impact that restrictions on visitors/accompanying support to healthcare visits/hospitalisations had on the mental health of the ill and their families is noted in other literature. It might not be sufficient to consider it as merely an additional PTE. It should at least be stated that the fact that data collection occurred during the pandemic may have influenced the findings of the study. Also, I wondered about methodological limitations related to the existing mental health of participants – although a previous depression diagnosis excluded potential participants, I wondered whether the continuing distress ideal type had unresolved loss and poor emotion processing capacities to begin with (perhaps existing low level, undiagnosed mental health concerns). The example used indicates overuse of dismissive psychological defences, such as denial, suppression and repression. Thus, the exclusion criterion of an existing diagnosis may not have controlled sufficiently for existing mental health concerns. Minor typo: Line 599 – ‘chronical.’ Should be ‘chronic’ ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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