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For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: 1.Introduction should contain about expirement question without writting about result and conclusion 2.References format should be maintained as per journal in materials and methods 3.Justify your results listed in methodology . 4.Discussion should be comparative with the obtained results and avaiable data about the study 5.Conclusion must include furthur research and progression that can be done with the above research along with their applications. Reviewer #2: The paper builds on the work already done by this group, Adv Biol (Weinh) . 2021 Dec;5(12):e2101113. doi: 10.1002/adbi.202101113. Epub 2021 Oct 27.. The PENELOP technique itself seems sound (has been published by the same group - no citations so far though - in well known and reputable journals (Analytical Chemistry ref 18 and PCCP ref 19) and the analysis of the technique in ref 19 in particular is good. The conclusions they draw from the technique wrt exposed surfaces and buried surfaces of the protein in the presence of the nanobody are compelling. Conclusions related to exchange dynamics are a bit less so - ref 19 says this is a reasonable explanation but stops short of saying this is the only explanation - but it seems to only be a passing mention in the paper. Needs to be validated The Figure 1 presents off-equilibrium HSQC spectra alone. Having the equilibrium HSQC spectra in addition to (or instead of) off-equilibrium spectra would be more useful to emphasise the conclusions they draw in that section (they say that they present raw A_N values in figure S2 of the supplementary information but I can't see this figure) While the methodology is nifty, the conclusions can further validated . In both the papers, the antiviral activity has not been demonstrated. If the nanobodies work across strains again, the potency not demonstrated. Reviewer #3: This study is basically an extension of a previous study by the same authors (Esposito et al, Adv Biol 5(12):2101113; 2021) where the nanobody was isolated and characterised by 2D NMR spectroscopy and chemical shift analysis. Results of this work includes a very limited amount of new experimental data (PENELOP protocol, previously established, based on NMR paramagnetic perturbation) in addition to new molecular dynamics simulations. The authors confirmed their previously published NMR data in terms of stoichiometry and epitope mapping. The very comprehensive discussion section contains a comparison to a recently published structure by X-Ray crystallography (Pan et al, PLoS One 18(4): e0283194; 2023) revealing significant differences, in particular no significant structural rearrangement is observed in the present study compared to the crystal structure. Overall, the experimental execution is solid, and the conclusions supported by the data, however I have significant reservations about the novelty of this manuscript. A very limited amount of new data is presented, and the data basically just confirm a model that is already published in the author’s earlier work. At the very least, a detailed comparison between the model presented and the published crystal structure is required and a set of Nsp9 mutants should be designed to either confirm or exclude the model presented in this study. Also, have effort being made to crystallise the presented Nsp9-nanobody complex? This is not mentioned in the manuscript. Reviewer #4: In the work titled “Assessing nanobody interaction with SARS-CoV-2 Nsp9”, Esposito et al combined PENELOP, a paramagnetic perturbation methodology, and molecular dynamics simulations to further dissect the interaction between nsp9 and nanobody 2NSP90. NMPylation/RNAylation of Nsp9 and their roles in SARS-CoV-2 capping, which is being studied extensively. Besides the medical usage, nanobody can also be an extra tool for nsp9 studies. Mapping the binding sites and characterizing the binding features of nsp9 – nanobody is essential. Some concerns need to be addressed before being considered for acceptance. Major: 1. The Discussion and Conclusion sections are too long, which makes it hard to catch the main point. Importantly, it’s difficult to see the new findings from this study. 2. Page 11 lines 14 – 20: please provide a schematic to illustrate the Type I and Type II patterns for a broader reader; Figure 3: Please provide a rotated structure view to show the analogous epitope ensemble; S1 figure doesn’t match the results on page 11 line 22. Only TEMPOL alone and TEMPOL + nsp9 + 2NSP90 are shown. 3. Please make the NMR data publicly available. 4. For discussing the increased Type II pattern of e1, the authors used “translating into an additional interaction exchange” on page 15 – line 5. But what does it mean? Even as stated on page 19 line 19 “loose enough to preserve the Nsp9 surface accessibility for the paramagnetic probe”, it still doesn’t explain the increased Type-II pattern. Is it because the nanobody disrupts the interdimer domain? Minor: 1. Page 3 line 14: please delete “the most interesting”; lines 16 – 20 can be rephrased into one shorter sentence. 2. Page 4 line 16: “contributing less than 1% of total mutations” might be because nsp7 – 10 are small. 3. Page 6 line 12: it’s better to write “H2O/D2O 95/5 (vol/vol)”; Line 18: “Microliter aliquots” of what? Also, “1 mM nitroxide”. 4. Page 7 line 12: delete “see”. In general, please delete “see” from all the figure citations. 5. Page 9 line 5: what are the parameters? line 6: Which one has more numbers in the slightly different number scenario? Line 20: “k-th”. 6. Page 10 line 5: “0.150 M” is used here, which is a different format from other places, such as page 9 – line 10. Please keep one format for it; Line 10: α-carbons (also page 16 – line 16); Line 11: “the dissociating subunits”; Line 13: delete “the simulation”; Line 15: what differences? 7. The citation format on page 9 – lines 15/18, and page 10 – lines 4/12, is not right, please correct them and check the whole manuscript. 8. Page 11 lines 1 – 5: please rephrase the sentences here to make it clear. 9. Page 12 lines 5 – 7: repeated words as in Figure 1 legend can be found in these sentences. Please rephrase to reduce redundancy. 10. Figure 2: please indicate Figure 2 is truncated at the beginning of the legend to avoid confusion; Please indicate V85 in the figure; And why do the authors use different x-axis scales? 11. Page 13 line 7: it’s nicer to show the fragment/residues sequentially; line 20: missing a comma. 12. Page 14 line 2: “locations”; line 14: delete “see”; line 18: “histograms” is not the correct word here. One should use “bar graph”. 13. Figure S3: in the legend, should it be “Same plot as Fig. 2 of main text”? 14. Page 15 line 3: “increasing”; line 4: which data support “stressed by the low nanobody/Nsp9 ratio”? 15. Page 18 lines 10 – 11: please rewrite “An intermediate exchange in fact broadens up to merging with the baseline the NMR signal linewidths of the exchanging species, thereby preventing detection.” It’s difficult to understand now. ********** 6. 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PONE-D-23-21838R1Assessing nanobody interaction with SARS-CoV-2 Nsp9PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Esposito, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE, and my honest apologies for the delay in getting back to you with an answer. As you can see, all reviewers agree with its acceptance but one of them underlines several important issues that must be constructively discussed. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript by Jun 02 2024 11:59PM that convincingly addresses the points raised by the reviewer. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. 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Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #4: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #5: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: I Don't Know ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed. All comments have been addressed. All comments have been addressed. Reviewer #4: (No Response) Reviewer #5: My understanding is that there are several issues to consider. Coronaviral Nsp9 is predominantly a homodimer in solution, but its active form within the RTC is NiRAN-associated. However other cellular functions have been reported for Nsp9 which may utilise its homodimeric form. Secondly a free N-terminal amine on Asn-1 is now known to be an essential feature of this protein and is required for RNAylation activity. Many prior papers have recombinant “stubs” such as the authors current GAMG sequence, or my own GPG sequence for constructs used in Littler et al. 2020. This complicates the ability to draw physiologically relevant conclusions from stub-Nsp9 work. In Esposito et al. 2021 Adv Biol the authors immunized llama with a triSer-Nsp9 mutant (C14S, C23S, C73S). I believe their own NMR suggests significant structural changes for this mutation as compared to wild type. Cysteines are unusual in that have both hydrophobic and polar characteristics. When they are buried within a hydrophobic pocket a serine mutant can be disruptive and structurally and in some instances an alanine mutation might work better. Indeed, most of the peaks lost correspond the changes seen in 8DQU. Any antibodies with this as immunogen could act to enforce whatever the triSer conformation is, which would be simple enough to crystalise as a control and check. I cannot comment on 2nsp90 as it’s CDR3 loop is distinct from the nanobody I published upon. I drew my sequences for both antibodies from page 19 of the authors supplementary material ADBI-5-2101113-s001.pdf. If major differences in behaviour are being observed can the authors quickly confirm this sequence is correct. In my hands 2nsp23 and 2nsp90 certainly bind Nsp9 but direct affinity measurements via SPR and ITC appeared poor for an antibody. Hence the absence of this data in Pan et al. It remains remotely possible these antibodies behave differently when expressed via mammalian systems. I had assumed the poor binding to be due to the requirement of the structural change leading to slower than normal on-rates. It would take significant work to assess whether this is true, I see this as a potentially interesting mechanism by which to inhibit a protein and may aid the inhibitory potential of the LNP system deployed by this group. I contacted the authors previously about inclusion on the Pan et al manuscript, they were more inclined to want to include discussion on the tetramer form of Nsp9 than I felt comfortable with. Especially as some in the community now even doubt the physiological relevance of the homodimer. I am confident the structure observed is what was present in the crystals and have discussed this with minimal conclusions. I have retained the line requested about the potential for structural influences upon crystallisation but did not to want to include one about Nsp9-tetramerization in the NMR data as I cannot speak to it. I am yet to be convinced by the tetramer interface. The authors are convinced by their proposed mechanism. I don’t have any experience with PENELOP interpretation. With enough funds and interest, it would be trivial to obtain new crystal structures from a different condition of Nsp9:2Nsp90 or Nsp9:2Nsp23. Via an independent group if necessary. I had hoped one of these antibodies would be useful to pull-down Nsp9 within cells or to aid crystallisation for drug screens. Their slow on-rate for wild-type Nsp9 and enforced structural change upon binding limit their use as such tools. If ture, this is useful information for the community. My understanding of certain techniques, and lack of understanding in PENELOP, will naturally bias my conclusions so I will leave them to stand as written. I will happily reinterpret the data however if I or others find clearer structural data to the contrary that is easily interpretable. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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