Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionNovember 1, 2023 |
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PONE-D-23-30055The effect of calcaneus and metatarsal head offloading insoles on healthy subjects’ gait kinematics, kinetics, asymmetry, and the implications for plantar pressure management.PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Shuang, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 23 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: No ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This work tested 6 types of insoles, including a control insole and off-loading insoles, on the treadmill walking. This study analyzed plantar pressure and walking kinematics. Even this study performed in healthy subjects but it aimed to used the results for diabetic patients. There are several concerns needed to be clarified. 1. Did the authors measure the arch index of the participants? Or any contact area is analyzed with the F-scan. 2. As this study used 3 measurement tools (F-scan, motion capture and force plate), how did the authors sync the signals from three measurement? 3. It is better to provide the pattern of gait cycles on the treadmill to demonstrate PTI. 4. Please provide the plantar pressure distribution from F-scan of each insole. These information will give clear picture of edge effect. 5. Why did the authors choose 10 cycles to represent in this study? How long did the participant walk on the treadmill? 6. There is a typo error on line 287 (page 12) for 10 subjects. It typed as 1o which is "o" character, not "0" number. 7. As the authors addressed about the limitations of this study, how can the finding be translated for the diabetic foot ulceration management? It is mandatory to do a further study in the diabetic patients as the authors mentioned but what the finding in healthy subjects can give to the aspect of the insole design. Reviewer #2: Generally, the topic of this study look interesting and the outcome in this study is strong receiving from the laboratory. My major concern is the statistical analysis of this study, there is no clear information regarding this, which affect the result of this study. Any details in the discussion part should be described in the correlation with the result, the result part did not show the p-vale, anyways the authors use the word “significant” to explain the result. With regards to specific comments in each part, my comments are described following. SESSION INTRODUCTION Point 1 Authors: “Specially designed insoles can be part of an effective DFU prevention strategy which includes maintaining mobility and physical activity as part of a holistic management package [6,7].” Reviewer: How about the other interventions? The authors should imply general interventions for DFU for a few sentences before raising the insole as the important intervention. Point 2 Authors: “Lin et al. [8] evaluated the average peak plantar pressure in the forefoot region of an insole with removable plugs and a support arch using a pedar in-shoe plantar pressure measurement system on diabetic patients” Reviewer: Please explain more about the effects of DFU on increasing forefoot plantar pressure before describing the results of Lin et al. study. Point 3 Authors: “Previous research has clearly shown that offloading insoles are effective at reducing normal plantar pressure in a specific region, with some impact on surrounding areas” “To the authors’ knowledge, the effect of offloading insoles on gait kinematics, kinetics and plantar pressure has not been investigated. Reviewer: The authors have already explained about the edge effects of offloading insole. Please describe more in the research gap about how to solve this problem in the present study. SESSION METHODS Point 4 Authors: “Ten participants were recruited for this experiment,” Reviewer: Why the present study conduct only 10 healthy participants? How about the sample size calculation? Point 5 Authors: “Ten healthy participants (five male and five female) who did not have diabetes were recruited” Reviewer: The author should clarify the exclusion criteria. How about the history of lower-extremity fracture, other systemic conditions, the musculoskeletal symptoms of lower back and lower extremity etc.? Point 6 Authors: “Six types of offloading insoles were manufactured including a control flat insole (Control), a small calcaneus offloading insole (SCO), a large calcaneus offloading insole (LCO), a small metatarsal head offloading insole (SMHO), a large metatarsal head offloading insole (LMHO), and a large calcaneus offloading insole for both feet (LCOBS) (Fig 1C). The LCOBS was the symmetric condition to compare to unilateral insoles (LCO).” Reviewer: Please explain why the authors use the symmetric condition for only the calcaneus offloading, not the metatarsal head offloading. Point 7 Authors: “The 1st and 2nd metatarsal heads location was defined from the mean anatomical locations measured from a small sample of 6 healthy participants which gave L1, W1, L2, and W2 are 71%, 85%, 74% and 63% respectively,” Reviewer: Why the authors use the mean from 6 healthy participants, not from 10 participants. Point 8 Authors: “A total of 16 markers were affixed to the diabetic shoes, excluding the body markers (Fig 2).” Reviewer: The author should explain more in the discussion part about the advantage and disadvantage of the shoe-mounted marker and the skin-mounted marker. Point 9 Authors: “The data from the 10 participants were evaluated on an individual basis using the data from the individuals control insole condition as a baseline to compare kinematic and pressure differences.” Reviewer: The author should clarify the statistical method that was used in this study. There is no clearly information about the method to compare the data among 6 conditions using the p-value. SESSION RESULTS Point 10 Authors: “Table 1 shows the mean average peak plantar pressure (APPP) and shank distal end velocity percentage difference between five offloading conditions and control condition at region of foot (RoF) and region of interest (RoI) (defined in Fig 3) of 10 subjects at three walking speeds.” Reviewer: It would be better to describe the mean and sd of each outcome and re analyze the statistical difference with the p-value among the 6 conditions of insole. Point 11 Authors: “Table 2 shows the mean pressure time integrals (PTI) percentage difference between five offloading conditions and control condition at RoF and RoI of 1o subjects at three walking speeds.” Reviewer: It would be better to describe the mean and sd of each outcome and re analyze the statistical difference with the p-value among the 6 conditions of insole. Point 12 Authors: “Table 3 shows the mean value of width of centre of force (CoF), length of CoF, and asymmetry difference between five offloading conditions and control condition of 10 subjects at three walking speeds.” Reviewer: It would be better to describe the mean and sd of each outcome and re analyze the statistical difference with the p-value among the 6 conditions of insole. SESSION DISCUSSION Point 13 Authors: “A possible way to solve this problem could be to modify the insole to minimise pressure in the aperture region rather than just over the average peak plantar pressure for metatarsal head or calcaneus.” Reviewer: The author should clarify how the present study design the insole to solve the problem from the previous studies. Point 14 Authors: “No significant trend is found about the sagittal angles but the heel strike and toe-off velocity increase between 1% and 32% respectively when applying offloading insoles except SMHO, which is not reported in other papers to the authors’ knowledge.” Reviewer: Please describe more detail about how to receive the significant value, since the author did not report the significant value in the table data. Point 15 Authors: “Although as a pilot study, the result of this study is not statistically significant, it gives a general trend of relationship between gait kinematics, kinetics, asymmetry and plantar pressure.” Reviewer: The author should add in the title about the word “Pilot study”. Again, please describe more detail about how to receive the significant value, since the author did not report the significant value in the table data. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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PONE-D-23-30055R1The effect of calcaneus and metatarsal head offloading insoles on healthy subjects’ gait kinematics, kinetics, asymmetry, and the implications for plantar pressure management.PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Shuang, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 11 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Surapong chatpun, Ph.D. Guest Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments: There is still a major concern from the reviewer. Therefore, we ask you to address and response to the Reviewer#2's comment. Reviewer#2: My major concern is still the statistical analysis of this study, the author should clearly present the real number of p-value in the table, the writing only P < 0.05 within the text is not enough. Please re-consider to present the p-value in the table other than only the mean and standard deviation and rewrite the text within the paragraph especially the variables without significant and the variables with significance. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. 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Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors addressed the responses to the comments completely and clearly. The authors added more information to make the content better than the previous version. Reviewer #2: My major concern is still the statistical analysis of this study, the author should clearly present the real number of p-value in the table, the writing only P < 0.05 within the text is not enough. Please re-consider to present the p-value in the table other than only the mean and standard deviation and rewrite the text within the paragraph especially the variables without significant and the variables with significance. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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The effect of calcaneus and metatarsal head offloading insoles on healthy subjects’ gait kinematics, kinetics, asymmetry, and the implications for plantar pressure management. PONE-D-23-30055R2 Dear Dr. Shuang, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Surapong chatpun, Ph.D. Guest Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): -NO- Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: The author provide all correction. I agree to accept and publish. The language is ok and already adapted. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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