Peer Review History

Original SubmissionMay 6, 2024
Decision Letter - Roham Borazjani, Editor

PONE-D-24-16507A case-control study evaluating CT signs of xiphoid process associated with xiphodyniaPLOS ONE

Dear Dr. Ono,

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Roham Borazjani

Academic Editor

PLOS ONE

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously?

Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: This is an interesting study of the xiphoid process, has been evaluated by CT scan, in the diagnosing xiphodynia. concluded that The xiphoid process sternal angle is not useful for diagnosing xiphodynia. The paper is well written and ethical issues are considered appropriately.

Reviewer #2: First, I would like to congratulate the authors on an interesting study and the efforts put forth to answer a rare clinical conundrum. Overall, the manuscript is well written, easy to read, and understand. There are a few minor syntax errors that could be corrected. In addition, would consider using the term study group rather than case group in the abstract as it reads better. In some instance, you may want to consider using the term xiphosternal angulation as oppose to angle as this represents a phenomenon rather than an anatomic finding. In lines 169, 171, and 173, recommend specification of the origin of the line, for example, "from the anterior abdominal wall to..." as any line has to have two points of reference. In the table on page 10, please reduce the size of the table 2 to conform to the page as it runs over the margin. In line 359 and 360 on page 13, the phrase is not clear, "although not explicitly stated the angles?" Please revise, perhaps, "although not explicitly stated regarding the angles..." Again, enjoyed reading and reviewing your submission.

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Reviewer #1: Yes: Gholam Reza Raissi MD

Reviewer #2: Yes: Omar K Danner, MD, MBA, FACS, FCCM

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Revision 1

Dear Reviewers,

I would like to express my sincere gratitude for the thorough review and constructive feedback you provided on my manuscript submitted to PLOS ONE. Your insightful comments have been invaluable in improving the quality and clarity of the manuscript.

I have carefully considered each of your suggestions and incorporated them into the revised version. Your expertise and thoughtful input have significantly contributed to the overall enhancement of the paper.

Thank you once again for your time, effort, and valuable contributions to the advancement of this work. Your dedication to the peer review process is greatly appreciated.

Best regards,

Corresponding Author: Ryosuke Ono

Department of Community Medicine, Kameyama

rikusan2005@yahoo.co.jp

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→We have uploaded the data to Dryad. Below are the Reviewer link and DOI for your reference.

ReviewerURL: https://datadryad.org/stash/share/12RMAxde1Qt6QDs9SCraPdbrGHPpKrE1-DYXcfPtJxU

doi:10.5061/dryad.ghx3ffbxw

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→We have confirmed that all references are publicly accessible. References 2 and 15 are not indexed in PubMed.

Reviewer #1: This is an interesting study of the xiphoid process, has been evaluated by CT scan, in the diagnosing xiphodynia. concluded that The xiphoid process sternal angle is not useful for diagnosing xiphodynia. The paper is well written and ethical issues are considered appropriately.

→Thank you for your evaluation. It has become an encouragement for my future research career.

Reviewer #2: First, I would like to congratulate the authors on an interesting study and the efforts put forth to answer a rare clinical conundrum. Overall, the manuscript is well written, easy to read, and understand. There are a few minor syntax errors that could be corrected. In addition, would consider using the term study group rather than case group in the abstract as it reads better.

→Thank you very much for your feedback. We have made some corrections based on it.

In some instance, you may want to consider using the term xiphosternal angulation as oppose to angle as this represents a phenomenon rather than an anatomic finding.

→In the discussion, we changed "angle" to "angulation" in two instances where it conveyed the meaning of "a phenomenon rather than an anatomic finding." Upon further investigation into the meanings of "angulation" and "angle," as you pointed out, it seems that "xiphisternal angulation" would convey a more appropriate nuance than "xiphisternal angle." However, since "xiphisternal angle" has been consistently used in previous literatures, we have opted to adopt this term in our study as well.

In lines 169, 171, and 173, recommend specification of the origin of the line, for example, "from the anterior abdominal wall to..." as any line has to have two points of reference.

→I am debating whether to make the changes as you suggested. For the B-line, I considered modifying it from "A tangent line to the midline of the base of the xiphoid process" to "A line perpendicular to the midpoint between the ventral and dorsal sides at the base of the xiphoid process." However, I believe this expression would not be suitable for the D-line because the thickness at the tip of the xiphoid process is approximately zero. Moreover, considering that tangency is defined as "a straight line passing through two points infinitely close on a curve," it seems unnecessary to strictly define two points.

Ultimately, the key is how to define these lines to enhance the reproducibility of the study. Since we initially adopted tangents as curves rather than midlines of thickness, we prefer to use the original description. If changes are still preferable based on the considerations above, I am willing to make adjustments. Your feedback on this matter would be appreciated.

In the table on page 10, please reduce the size of the table 2 to conform to the page as it runs over the margin.

→We have made adjustments to fit within the framework.

In line 359 and 360 on page 13, the phrase is not clear, "although not explicitly stated the angles?" Please revise, perhaps, "although not explicitly stated regarding the angles..."

→As you suggested, we have made the changes.

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Submitted filename: Response to Reviewers.docx
Decision Letter - Roham Borazjani, Editor

PONE-D-24-16507R1A case-control study evaluating CT signs of xiphoid process associated with xiphodyniaPLOS ONE

Dear Dr. Ono,

Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process.

Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 26 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.

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We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript.

Kind regards,

Roham Borazjani

Academic Editor

PLOS ONE

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Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed

Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed

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2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions?

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously?

Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available?

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #2: Yes

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6. Review Comments to the Author

Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)

Reviewer #1: The paper is a good work regarding xphodnia , I had no specific comment in review and can be accepted for publication.

Reviewer #2: Thank you making the updates and revisions and your efforts. This is a very well written manuscript. It sets the foundation for a multi-institutional study to further delineate the subject matter. Recommend changing the last reference to the appropriate case as the authors names do not need to be in all capitalized letter. Otherwise, no additional changes were identified or are recommended.

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Reviewer #1: Yes: Golam Reza Raissi

Reviewer #2: No

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Revision 2

Dear Editors and Reviewers,

I am writing to submit the revised version of my manuscript titled “[Title of Your Manuscript]” for reconsideration by PLOS ONE. I sincerely appreciate the additional feedback and comments provided by the reviewers and editorial team following my previous submission. Their continued guidance has been instrumental in refining the manuscript further.

In this revision, I have made every effort to ensure that the manuscript adheres to the submission guidelines of PLOS ONE. Notably, the tables have been converted to figures in accordance with the journal’s requirements. I hope that my submission is now fully compliant with the guidelines.

Thank you once again for your time, effort, and valuable input in reviewing this work. I look forward to your feedback on the revised manuscript.

Best regards,

Corresponding Author: Ryosuke Ono

Department of Community Medicine, Kameyama

rikusan2005@yahoo.co.jp

Journal Requirements:

Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice.

→We have corrected the author names in reference 23, which were previously in uppercase.

Additional Editor Comments:

Thanks for addressing all the reviewer comments. Please make sure that your manuscript structure follows the PLOS ONE formatting sample.

Please submit an unstructured abstract.

revise your references, figures, and tables to follow the PLOS ONE formatting sample (find the attached PDF)

→We have revised the abstract to make it less structured. Additionally, we have converted all tables to figures. The font in the figures has been changed to the specified one, and PACE has also been used.

Reviewer #2: Recommend changing the last reference to the appropriate case as the authors names do not need to be in all capitalized letter.

→We hadn't noticed this until it was pointed out, so we appreciate your help. We have made the necessary corrections.

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Submitted filename: Response_to_Reviewers_auresp_2.docx
Decision Letter - Richa Gupta, Editor

A case-control study evaluating CT signs of xiphoid process associated with xiphodynia

PONE-D-24-16507R2

Dear Dr. Ono,

We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements.

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Kind regards,

Richa Gupta

Academic Editor

PLOS ONE

Additional Editor Comments (optional):

In this study, the authors have undertaken a thorough and comprehensive examination of the diagnostic criteria for xiphodynia. They have invested significant effort into addressing all the necessary revisions and improvements suggested by the reviewers and the editorial committee. Each amendment has been carefully and precisely implemented, ensuring that the article meets the standards of academic rigor and clarity. Given the depth of their work and the meticulous revisions made in response to the feedback, I wholeheartedly recommend the ACCEPTANCE of this article for publication."

Please find attached reviewer’s comments:

REVIEWER 1 – ACCEPT

This is an interesting study of the xiphoid process, has been evaluated by CT scan, in the diagnosing xiphodynia. concluded that The xiphoid process sternal angle is not useful for diagnosing xiphodynia. The paper is well written and ethical issues are considered appropriately.

Reviewers' comments:

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Comments to the Author

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Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed

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2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions?

The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented.

Reviewer #1: Yes

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3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously?

Reviewer #1: Yes

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4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available?

The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.

Reviewer #1: Yes

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5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English?

PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.

Reviewer #1: Yes

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6. Review Comments to the Author

Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)

Reviewer #1: The manuscriptis is compliant with the guidelines and is now acceptable for publication. the language is clear and coorect.

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Reviewer #1: Yes: GholamrReza Raissi

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Formally Accepted
Acceptance Letter - Richa Gupta, Editor

PONE-D-24-16507R2

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