Peer Review History
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PONE-D-23-31527At freedom’s edge: Belief in free will during the COVID-19 pandemicPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Seto, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 10 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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If consent was waived for your study, please include this information in your statement as well. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Dear Dr. Seto, Thank you for the opportunity to review your work. I have minor comments regarding the paper, although before presenting them I just want to clarify one thing. I believe that resilience was the keyword that made this paper find me, so I am not an expert in free will. In this sense, my comments are about the use of resilience in the paper and some methodological aspects of the research. 1) Despite presenting data clearly, I missed if you collected any demographic data. Also, political and religious beliefs seem to be important when investigating free will (https://doi.org/10.1111/j.1467-6494.2012.00799.x). Did MTurk provide you with a sample with those different profiles? Also, in a country where COVID-19 and its restrictions were such a political topic, do you think political values help explain further the trends you have observed? In your view/interpretation of the data, democrats, republicans, and independents would have this stable trend because of American culture about free will? I think your discussion could benefit if you present your views on those aspects to the readers. 2) You indicate that your works aim to verify how resilient the free will attitudes are before and after pandemic. Although, in the discussion you say “fluctuated”. Now, since this is my turf, I would recommend you sticking to resilience for 2 reasons. First, when discussing resilience, we are considering how adaptative a behavior/cognition/emotion is when facing adversity. COVID-19 restrictions were an adversity in several levels and showing, as your data did it, that in similar contexts the beliefs levels decreased and increased according to context. So, it is not a fluctuation, it is a resilient response according to context. Further, core values seem to be more resilient in the sense that they do not show major changes during adulthood (https://journals.plos.org/plosone/article?id=10.1371/journal.pone.0289487 and https://doi.org/10.1177/0146167216639245 are 2 studies that show this trend). In this sense, your sudden change and return to baseline are interesting because it shows how fast-paced beliefs might change considering context, which is exactly how we are theorizing (and testing) the effects of resilience on cognition (attitudes, beliefs, etc). I missed a more in-depth discussion about those issues. Sincerely, Dr. Sidnei Priolo Filho Reviewer #2: P10 The background section outlining freewill was good. P10 ln 66 “what many perceived to be freedom-restricting measures” I fail to see how the authors can describe the measures as “perceived” freedom restricting. They were freedom restricting. Moreover it is difficult to accept the approach to the rest of the paper if the authors only feel they are testing a perception rather than an actual. Surely a strength of this work is testing actual not perception. P11 ln 70 The statement that the evidence of lockdown is pivotal in defeating the virus is unconvincing. The authors perhaps take a little too much time reiterating their hypothesis assumptions. P12 a potential major flaw in the work is the authors present the studies as if in real time. The problem is unless the pre period work already existed phase one relies on asking people retrospectively how they felt before the pandemic, so is already subject to bias. Granted retrospective may have been the only option but they need to be more open and honest and explicit that their approach is retrospective. P13 the participant details are too sparse to draw any conclusion about whether this was an unbiased and balanced sample. I’m not familiar with MTurk but were the participants from a certain social, ethnic, demographic, background etc. Cloud research itself introduces bias. The most important finding is that both studies demonstrated a return to “belief in free will” at pre pandemic levels. Ie freewill belief has not diminished. I feel the middle period in both studies “the pandemic” was considered in too trivial a fashion. The authors talk about relinquishing in freewill because of overriding proven health reasons. As very little was and still is proven in this period this is a shaky assumption at best. Further they totally fail to address the different methods of coercion adopted by governments and bodies such as the WHO. The UK used subvertive advertising and a government nudge department. NHSE have had to subsequently admit that claims unvaccinated people spread covid more than vaccinated were untrue. The authors were very honest and clear about the limitations of their study. It would have been good if they could also have addressed that governments because of such findings of - no lasting damage to freewill - could use such unevidenced measures of lockdown again especially given their conclusion. The 2 figures illustrate their findings well and is powerful. The paper is clear and simple. Perhaps over simplification is their enemy. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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