Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJanuary 10, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-00615Comparative Efficacy of Opioid and Non-Opioid Analgesics in Labor Pain Management: A Network Meta-AnalysisPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Yuan, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 18 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Consider making the title more specific and concise. For example, "Comparative Efficacy and Safety of Analgesics for Labor Pain Management: A Meta-Analysis." The background section is well-written. However, consider adding a brief statement about the importance of effective labor pain management for both the mother and the baby. Clearly state the primary and secondary objectives of the meta-analysis at the end of the introduction. Consider including a flowchart to visually represent the study selection process, similar to the PRISMA flow diagram. Clearly list the inclusion and exclusion criteria in a concise manner. Explain the rationale behind each criterion. Clearly describe the statistical methods used, including how heterogeneity was assessed and managed. Clarify how heterogeneity was assessed, and consider providing the statistic for each analysis. For the network meta-analysis, consider using node-splitting analysis or other methods to evaluate the consistency of the network. This is crucial for assessing the reliability of indirect treatment comparisons. In the safety analysis, if applicable, consider using absolute risk differences along with odds ratios to convey a more comprehensive understanding of safety outcomes. Provide a summary of the risk-of-bias assessment results. Consider including a table summarizing the bias assessment for each included study. Clearly define the primary and secondary outcome measures in results Present the network meta-analysis results in a clear and organized manner. Consider using forest plots to visually represent the effect sizes and confidence intervals in results Discuss the clinical implications of the findings. Compare your results with previous studies and discuss any inconsistencies.Clearly outline the limitations of the meta-analysis. In conclusion: Clearly restate the key findings and their implications for labor pain management. Consider avoiding the term "Notably" in your conclusion unless you can explicitly highlight a unique or unexpected finding Reviewer #2: Page & Line No. Comments Abstract Background Page 2 & Line no 1-4 it is advisable to give strong insights of the categorization/ classification of drugs in the background to increase readability Methodology Page 2 & Line No 5 Kindly mention the restricted time frame in the search strategy (Starting year to ending year) “Fifteen randomized controlled trials evaluating analgesic interventions in ASA I or II parturients were included” Please incorporate these findings into the results section. Introduction Page 3 & Line no 1-4 Please describe the class of medications used to treat labor pain, their mode of action, and how they are administered. Page no 3 & Line no 5-6 Kindly enlist the American Society of Anaesthesiologists (ASA) physical status classification system levels Methods Page 4 & line no 16-18 Kindly mention the PROSPERO registration number. “Assessing the methodological quality of systematic reviews (AMSTAR-2)(13) Guidelines” Kindly re-check the sentence AMSTAR-2 was not intended to deal with Meta-analysis of individual patient data or Network Meta-analysis Page 5 & Line no 3-7 Kindly mention the number of results in the detailed search strategy for every search (1 Population & 2 Intervention) in supplementary files Page 7 & Line no 2-6 “This tool evaluates five bias domains: random sequence generation, allocation concealment, participant/personnel blinding, incomplete outcome data, and selective outcome reporting”. Kindly write the domains as per the ROB 2 tool Kindly specify pre-defined criteria for some concern/some degree of risk Page no 7 & 13-14 Kindly specify the type of package used in R Software for Network meta-analysis Results Page 9 & Line no 1-2 Kindly check the PRISMA flow chart for the total excluded studies (597) in the primary screening. (267 not relevant, 148 duplicates 82 reviews, 37 conferences, theses, books, posters, and 27 case reports, the sum of these primary excluded studies (561) is not matched to the total excluded studies) Page 10 Kindly provide legends to the treatment groups in study characters Page 14 & Line No 1-5 Kindly check the percentage proportion of some concerns out of 15 studies. Kindly provide a summary (Overall studies) of ROB apart from individual studies. Kindly provide reasons/explanations for some concerns (Some degree of bias risk) in respective studies Page 14 & Line No 15 Kindly check the number of interactions in the network plot between combination therapy and placebo It is advisable to use the word Network Meta-Analysis instead of Meta-Analysis in the entire manuscript kindly avoid the sentence “please insert the figure here” in the entire manuscript The manuscript is poorly written. Please revise the manuscript in light of the comments. Overall, this manuscript requires major modification and can only be continued after extensive revision. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Comparative Efficacy of Opioid and Non-Opioid Analgesics in Labor Pain Management: A Network Meta-Analysis PONE-D-24-00615R1 Dear Dr. Chunhui Yuan, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Stefano Turi Academic Editor PLOS ONE I did not receive comments by reviewer 2, despite several invitations. However, in my opinion the authors addressed all the comments proposed by reviewer 2. Below the comments by reviewer 1. Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: All the chnages that had been advised are fully incorporated in revised version. This is now comnplete and good manuscript to publish. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Dr. LALIT GUPTA ********** |
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