Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionDecember 6, 2023 |
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PONE-D-23-40644Effect of tetanic stimulation prior to train-of-four monitoring on the time to muscle response stabilization in patients aged 60 to 80 years: A prospective randomized controlled trialPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Henrique Silva Ribeiro, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The study presented is a multicenter, prospective, randomized, single-blind, controlled trial with a 2-arm parallel group design, aiming to assess the time to stabilization of muscle response with tetanic stimulation in patients aged 60 to 80 years. The authors concluded that tetanic stimulation did not impact the time to T1 twitch stabilization in this age group. However, the manuscript has several deficiencies according to the CONSORT checklist. Specific issues include the lack of information on protocol changes, incomplete reporting in the abstract, insufficient p-value precision, the suggestion of using a Linear Mixed Effects Model for data structure, unclear definition of "stabilization," missing details on randomization, inadequate sample size justification, unclear statistical models in tables, and the need for dose-response modeling for certain data. Additionally, some statements and sections require clarification and rephrasing. Overall, the manuscript requires thorough revisions to address these issues and improve its quality. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 24 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Lalit Gupta Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: When submitting your revision, we need you to address these additional requirements. 1. Please ensure that your manuscript meets PLOS ONE's style requirements, including those for file naming. The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and Additional Editor Comments: The study presented is a multicenter, prospective, randomized, single-blind, controlled trial with a 2-arm parallel group design, aiming to assess the time to stabilization of muscle response with tetanic stimulation in patients aged 60 to 80 years. The authors concluded that tetanic stimulation did not impact the time to T1 twitch stabilization in this age group. However, the manuscript has several deficiencies according to the CONSORT checklist. Specific issues include the lack of information on protocol changes, incomplete reporting in the abstract, insufficient p-value precision, the suggestion of using a Linear Mixed Effects Model for data structure, unclear definition of "stabilization," missing details on randomization, inadequate sample size justification, unclear statistical models in tables, and the need for dose-response modeling for certain data. Additionally, some statements and sections require clarification and rephrasing. Overall, the manuscript requires thorough revisions to address these issues and improve its quality. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This study provides useful details for neuromuscular monitoring that has not been investigated yet. Two comments: rocuronium should be mentioned in the title. The second does not influence the results but as there is considerable difference between plasma or effect-site in TIVA, in page 10, line 151 it should be mentioned whether you used Marsh plasma-site (I suppose) or effect-site concentrations. Reviewer #2: The authors reported the results of multicenter, prospective, randomized, single-blind, controlled trial with a 2 arm parallel group design to determine the time to stabilization of the muscle response with tetanic stimulation compared to no stimulation in patients aged 60 to 80 year. They concluded that the use of tetanic stimulation to shorten the time to T1 height stabilization in neuromuscular monitoring did not alter the stabilization time of the T1 twitch in patients between 60 and 80 years old. In general, the current presentation has deficits and needs a sound revisions. general: Please comment on each point of the CONSORT checklist in the manuscript. E.g. if no changes to the protocol are made, please state this explicitly. L27-32: Please give the information required in the CONSORT abstract form here, e.g. setting, primary endpoint variable, randomization technique, etc. L34ff: Please give p-values with at least 3 decimal digits. L36-39: data seem to follow a "repeated" measures type of structure, which should be reflected in the analysis by a Linear Mixed Effects Model. L76-80: First as biostatistician I am not sure about the objective definition of stabilization, which is necessary to determine the time. In particular, it is unclear, what is meant by " stabilization", whether " stabilization" was observed in every patient, whether the "degree of stabilization" is the same with every patient. Could you please provide more information. Second, the specific hypothesis to be proven is not given. L98-101: As enrollment starts at different times in the two centers, it is likely to assume a time trend in the data. So please provide at least a figure of the treatment effect by center to make clear that the treatment effect is consistent across centers. L120-125: Please give details of the randomization. Missing details cover the randomization algorithm (e.g. permuted block randomization with block size 4?). It is unclear, how the random allocation is implemented, e.g. by the sealed opaque envelops (?), and who provided the random lots, who assigned patients to make concealment of randomization clear. The technique to conceal and protect the information about the allocation from the patients (blinding) need to be described. L199-203: Sample size justification need further information. The statistical test underlying the sample size justification is missing. Please state the software used for calculation. The result might be to low, as - assuming a two sample t-Test - a sample size of 26 / group is necessary without 20% dropout. Please note, that a dropout rate of 20% is rather large and may cause the validity. Please comment on these points in the limitation section, as the study might appear as underpowered. L204ff: Please make the section specific to the content so to avoid general description and state which method is used in which situation. Give the statistical analysis of the primary endpoint variable. Give the analysis population and state how to deal with missing values to avoid attrition bias. Use the ITT population. Pretest on normal distribution might be appropriate for explorative analysis, i.e. ancillary analysis. L255: The basis should be 30 patients in each group according to flow chart. Statistical test for baseline patient characteristics are not meaningful in randomized clinical trials, delete last column of table 1. L235: If MANOVA is applied there is more information needed to understand the statistical model. I assume the first row "Time .." just refers to the t-Test (underlying the sample size justification) and thus the p-value is from a t-Test. Please give means and SD for each group followed by a 95% confidence interval for mean difference. How are missing values dealed with. Last row could be deleted. L244: Unclear what % means in row 2 and 3. With % numbers the column entries are difficult to understand. May bet this is an ANCOVA model. Like in Table 2 MANOVA model not clear, please give the within and between factors, correlation structure and other model parameters. L256: Data for "Time to a normalized TOF value of" seem to be a dose response profile and should be modelled accordingly to establish differences. L338: Statement is not clear and need rephrasing. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. 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PONE-D-23-40644R1Effect of tetanic stimulation prior to train-of-four monitoring on the time to muscle response stabilization with neuromuscular blockade with rocuronium in patients aged 60 to 80 years: A prospective randomized controlled trialPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Henrique Silva Ribeiro, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== The study aimed to determine the time to stabilization of muscle response with tetanic stimulation compared to no stimulation in patients aged 60 to 80 years. However, the use of tetanic stimulation did not alter the stabilization time of the T1 twitch in this age group. Several points need clarification, including the definition of “stabilization,” specific hypotheses, and randomization details. Additionally, addressing the time trend across centers would enhance the analysis. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 22 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols. Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Lalit Gupta Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments: The study aimed to determine the time to stabilization of muscle response with tetanic stimulation compared to no stimulation in patients aged 60 to 80 years. However, the use of tetanic stimulation did not alter the stabilization time of the T1 twitch in this age group. Several points need clarification, including the definition of “stabilization,” specific hypotheses, and randomization details. Additionally, addressing the time trend across centers would enhance the analysis. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: L77: The hypotheses refers to three objectives = criteria or primary endpoint variables, which is not in line with the methodological approach. Thus only one variable should be mentioned " We hypothesized that the tetanic stimulation could decrease stabilization time." . L211: Sample size justification is not correct. The provided sample size calculation relies on the z-Test rather than on the t-Test. Conditioned on the assumed effect size, the dropout rate needs to be added, which results in a total sample size of 62.5 in case of the z-test and 65 in case of the t-test. Thus, in the limitation section this needs to be stated resulting in the conclusion, that the study is underpowered. L204ff: In the statistical method section delete the test on normal distribution, as the test is not meaningfull for analysis of the primary endpoint. The analysis population is the Per Protocol population. Please state in the limitation section, that the analysis population, as per protocol, results in anticonservatve test decision. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. 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Effect of tetanic stimulation prior to train-of-four monitoring on the time to muscle response stabilization with neuromuscular blockade with rocuronium in patients aged 60 to 80 years: A prospective randomized controlled trial PONE-D-23-40644R2 Dear Dr. Henrique Silva Ribeiro, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Lalit Gupta Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Al the major changes asked have been done by Authors and are acknowledged in further review. Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: All comments are adressed, The paper is ready for publication. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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