Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionDecember 11, 2023 |
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PONE-D-23-41528Hematology, physiology, and autonomic regulation in polo ponies with different field-play positions during low-goal polo matchesPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Chanda, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 11 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please see our Supporting Information guidelines for more information: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/supporting-information. Additional Editor Comments: Dear Authors Reviewers have suggested minor revision especially check grammatical, sentence structure and fluency. Furthermore, also focus on precision in methods section and result. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I withdraw as I am not expert on horses physiology. I am suggesting rejection as there is no other option to select. You need to send this to people that are dealing this equine physiology. I have done some editing but I quit. Reviewer #2: I would thanks the authors for the effort and for the best quality of the manuscript. However, there is some mistakes to correct them. General comments: - The authors need to work with a native English speaker/writer to correct grammatical and punctuation errors throughout the manuscript. - Title of paper need to be reformulated Abstract - The aim of the study is not clear - Conclusion need to be reorganized Introduction - More details and information about Polo ponies - L64-L68: Reformulate this paragraph - L126-L129: Reformulate this paragraph - The problematic is not clear Methods - Inclusion and exclusion criteria are not clear - More details and information are needed in the experimental protocol Results - Figure 2 is not very clear. Discussion - L448-L449: Add reference - L451-L454: Add reference - L457-L463: References are needed - L464-L470: References are needed - L528-L531: References are needed - L540-L544: There’s no consistence between paragraphs - - Discuss limitations of the study, taking into account sources of potential bias or imprecision. Discuss both direction and magnitude of any potential bias - Discuss the generalisability (external validity) of the study results - Discuss the practical implications and future research Reviewer #3: The authors present a well written manuscript on the physiological and stress effects of chukkas in polo ponies. Furthermore, authors analyse the difference in these horses depending on their playing fields. This study is of importance in the current era of animal welfare, and understanding of equine sports. Therefore, I recommend the publication of this study in PLOS One, as it fits to the scope of the journal. I suggest minor revisions, please see hereunder: Line 95-114: please shorten this text, as not all variables need to be introduced here. Line 123: if I understal well, reference 38 is not accepted for publication yet. I suggest authors to use https://doi.org/10.1016/j.jevs.2021.103716 which showed a decrease of time domain HRV parameters with exercise. Authors can also add https://doi.org/10.3389/fvets.2022.939534 which showed a decrease in HRV during groundwork. Line 143-4: please review decimals: 1 decimal for age and 0 for weight seem more appropriate (most weighting instruments are not accurate at the kg in horses, and hundreds of years are not easy to relate in age) Line 177: could authors convert ukat/l to international units Line 180-181: please add https://doi.org/10.1016/j.jevs.2021.103716 as reference for the use of this instrument during exercising horses Line 231-234: please indicate if the conditions for applying ANOVA were met for the two-grouping variables. Along the document: I suggest replacing ‘number four players’ by ‘defenders’ and ‘number one players’ by ‘forwarders’, and number two and three by ‘mildfielders’ Line 264-266: could authors specify why number 2 and number 3 players were not merged for analysis, as they do play as the same role in this discipline. If not, why is there a difference in results in number 2 and number 3 players? Was this expected? If yes, why? If not, what interpretation can authors give to the difference? Line 284: The increase in CK is significant statistically, but it does not seem to be clinically relevant. Please convert to international units. Line 308: HR at 150 min is not significantly lower than baseline, according to authors’ criteria (p<0.05). Line 320-324 and Fig 3: RR intervals and HR are quite the same data, expressed differently. I suggest removing one of them (RR intervals in my opinion) to share a more to the point information. Line 482: see above, I do not believe the increase, despite it statistical significance, is clinically relevant. Major Line 204-213: I do not believe all HRV variables need to be used in this protocol. Different variables show the same component of HRV, in different ways. Some of these have not been validated in (exercising) horses. Showing all variables results in repetitive results about different variables. I suggest authors focus on short-term HRV. Adapt the Introduction and Discussion sections accordingly. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Jamel Halouani Reviewer #3: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Hematological and physiological responses in polo ponies with different field-play positions during low-goal polo matches PONE-D-23-41528R1 Dear Dr. Chanda, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. 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Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: I would thank the authors for the best quality of this manuscript in this corrected version. I think that the manuscript is well corrected and now is suitable for publication Reviewer #3: The authors have answered all questions and adapted accordingly the manuscript. Thanks to the authors for this revised manuscript, which is in my opinion suitable for publication. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: Yes: Jamel Halouani Reviewer #3: No ********** |
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