Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMay 3, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-14354Differential risk of cardiovascular complications in patients with adult type-2 diabetes mellitus in Ghana using clustering analysis: A hospital-based cross-sectional studyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Obirikorang, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 16 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Journal: The Journal of Clinical Endocrinology & Metabolism Manuscript ID: PONE-D-24-14354 Title: "Differential risk of cardiovascular complications in patients with adult type-2 diabetes mellitus in Ghana using clustering analysis: A hospital-based cross-sectional study " Author: Christian Obirikorang et al. The authors of the present study aimed to identify clinically relevant subgroups of patients with type 2 diabetes mellitus (T2D) by analyzing adiposity, insulin secretion, and resistance indices. Through unsupervised clustering and regression analysis, they distinguished several phenotypes in both female and male patients: for females, the obesity-related phenotype, the severe insulin resistance phenotype, and the normal weight phenotype with improved insulin resistance; and for males, the obesity-related phenotype with severe insulin resistance and the normal weight phenotype with improved insulin sensitivity. The severe insulin resistance phenotype in females was linked to high cardiovascular disease (CVD) risk and metabolic syndrome, while the obesity-related phenotype with severe insulin resistance in males was associated with intermediate and high-risk CVD. The following points should be considered: Comments: 1. According to the authors, “The findings suggest that there are specific subgroups of patients with T2DM characterized by obesity and uncontrolled insulin resistance leading to poor glycemic control.” Can the authors clarify how this causal assumption is supported by the current analyses? 2. The authors, in the abstract and throughout the manuscript, mention that they have studied " long-term patients with T2DM." Could you please clarify how the long-term characterization is supported given the study population characteristics and the inclusion and exclusion criteria? 3. Please ensure the manuscript defines all abbreviations the first time they are used in the main text and abstract (e.g., MetS). Also, make sure that all abbreviations are defined in each table and figure (e.g., FBS). In addition, if an abbreviation is already defined, you can use it in the text that follows it (e.g., change "Metabolic syndrome" to "MetS" in the “Cluster Analysis” section). 4. The introduction section should end with a discussion of the gap(s) in the literature that this study aims to address, followed by a paragraph(s) highlighting the purpose(s) and aims of this study. The paragraph describing the indices should be discussed earlier. 5. In the “Anthropometry and Blood Pressure Measurements” section, mention if the samples taken were in a fasting state. 6. Please add the relevant references to the text “2013 American College of Cardiology (ACC) and the American Heart Association (AHA) guidelines.” 7. Please add the relevant units for central obesity, if applicable, and a brief comment on the method used or how it was defined. 8. According to the authors, “the World Health Organization’s criteria [3].” Can the authors confirm if reference #3 is appropriate for the WHO statement? Please make sure all the citations in your paper are correct. 9. Please rephrase “Details of the clustering analysis have been attached as separate HTML and Word documents (T2DM_cluster.html and T2DM_analysis.docx).” to a more suitable format for publication and provide a direct way for readers to identify the relevant information (e.g., specify if it is a supplementary note or table). Additionally, I was not able to locate the “T2DM_cluster.html” and “T2DM_analysis.docx” information. 10. Regarding the comment “We tested several methods for an optimal number of clusters,” can the authors provide further information and clarification? 11. I would suggest adding the “Anthropometric indices” section at the beginning of the tables. 12. Did the authors consider the potential role of physical activity in their analyses? 13. Can the authors clarify how the statement “At this point, the development of cardiovascular complications is inevitable” in the Material and Methods section is supported? Also, it seems that the Material and Methods section is not the best place to add this comment. Likewise, for the statement “The combined impact of these abnormalities imposes glucolipotoxicity leading to eventual β-cell decline with decreased insulin secretion,” the Material and Methods section is not the most appropriate section. Please consider moving these statements to the Introduction or Discussion section based on the context. 14. Can the authors clarify what “uncontrolled” insulin resistance phenotype means? How is "uncontrolled" defined? 15. Please check the manuscript for typos and phrasing errors (e.g., “Sulphonyl urea”, "It begs the discourse"). 16. In the limitations paragraph, the authors should clearly outline the limitations due to the nature of this study, including generalizability and the fact that the potential association of these clusters with CVD incidence was not explored. Additionally, it should be noted that none of the participants were receiving SGLT2 inhibitors or GLP-1 agonists, which have shown cardiometabolic benefits in several studies. 17. I suggest that the conclusions of the manuscript should also highlight, in a concise manner, the findings of the current study and ensure that the statements closely align with the results of this study. Reviewer #2: In the present study entitled "Differential risk of cardiovascular complications in patients with adult type-2 diabetes mellitus in Ghana using clustering analysis: A hospital-based cross-sectional study" the authors have reported that there are specific subgroups of patients with T2DM characterized by obesity and uncontrolled insulin resistance leading to poor glycemic control. This underscores the importance of considering differences in adiposity, insulin secretion, and sensitivity indices when making clinical decisions for patients with T2DM. My comments are as follows: 1. Please change the title of manuscript to "Differential risk of cardiovascular complications in patients with type-2 diabetes mellitus in Ghana: A hospital-based cross-sectional study 2. Please write keywords as follow: Type-2 diabetes, cluster analysis, cardiovascular risk, odds ratio 3. Introduction is too long, this section needs to be summarized. 4. Gap of knowledge and the novelty of study should be added in introduction section. 5. The aim of study should be clearly added in the last paragraph of introduction. 6. The resolution of figures 1-3 should be increased. 7. Tables should be revised. Please delete the lines into tables. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Differential risk of cardiovascular complications in patients with adult type-2 diabetes mellitus in Ghana using clustering analysis: A hospital-based cross-sectional study PONE-D-24-14354R1 Dear Dr. Obirikorang, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. 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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Journal: The Journal of Clinical Endocrinology & Metabolism Manuscript ID: PONE-D-24-14354 Title: " Differential risk of cardiovascular complications in patients with type-2 diabetes mellitus in Ghana: A hospital-based cross-sectional study" Author: Christian Obirikorang et al. The authors have satisfactorily responded to my comments and suggestions, and their revisions have further improved the quality of the paper. I have no further comments. Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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