Peer Review History
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PONE-D-24-09440Effects of Different Nutrition Interventions on Sarcopenia Criteria in Older People: A Study Protocol for a Systematic Review of Systematic Reviews With Meta-Analysis.PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Ferreira, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please see the reviewers comments below. ============================== Reviewer 1: Dear Authors, Here are my comments; When you are preparing a review of reviews which is also called umbrella reviews there are few key items to consider. Umbrella review has several steps which include systematic literature search and study selection, data extraction, statistical analysis and grading of evidence, and interpretation of findings. Authors need to explain in detail the methodology and clear justification needs to be written. Authors need to clearly define the research question and consider which systematic reviews are to be included. Authors need to explain explicitly the eligibility criteria for this umbrella review. The search strategy must be focus on your topic so that you are able to capture all reviews that deal with the focus of your research area. Authors need mention how are the statistical analysis going to be conducted in detail. What type of data are going to be analysed. Are you going to use the existing meta analysis in the included study? Reviewer 2: In this study, the authors try to offer a study protocol for a systematic review of systematic reviews on the effects of nutrition interventions on Sarcopenia criteria in elder populations. The idea itself may be of significance for the management of Sarcopenia. With that in mind, this reviewer has the following to remark: 1. The authors may have rushed their article before it was sufficiently established. For example, the methods adopted are not properly validated in the paper. The authors could, at least, provide a detailed discussion on the various aspects and limitations of their research. 2. There is also the research questions developed. Background section states, at the end, that "the primary objective of this study is to examine the impact of dietary interventions in isolation on the three diagnostic criteria for sarcopenia. It seeks to determine which dietary interventions, or combination thereof, yield the most favorable outcomes for older individuals." However, the paper does not answer these research questions. If it was not possible to answer them, or if the authors did not intend to answer such research questions, the above paragraph should have been changed to ensure that it is in line with what the paper aims to report on. 3. Immediately after the Background section comes the Methods section. It begins with, "This study is a protocol for a systematic review of systematic reviews...." Overall, there appears to be a lack of coherence. It seems as if each section was written by a different author and the end result was not edited carefully. 4. Another issue is one that the authors themselves make reference to. They state that they, in 2023, have published "a study of this nature." The mentioned study, nonetheless, screened 494 systematic reviews and offered a discussion on the results observed. The current paper under review does not explore its subject in a similar manner. 5. It must be noted here that the best way to provide a study protocol for a systematic review of systematic reviews is by testing it. And yet, the paper fails to do so. 6. As it stands, the article is confusing. As explained above, clarity (the language used) differs from one section to the next. The paper would benefit from editing and tightening. I hope my review is helpful and wish the authors the very best with their research! Reviewer 3: Thank you for the opportunity to review this protocol. The authors have proposed a timely and relevant systematic review of systematic reviews examining the effects of nutrition interventions on sarcopenia outcomes in older adults. The protocol is generally well-written and follows established guidelines for systematic review methodology. Minor comments. 1. In the PICO framework on page 6: "Population: Adults over 60 years, male or female, sarcopenic or at risk of, with or without comorbidities" . It is not clear how the authors understand individuals at risk of sarcopenia, and why this is relevant? 2. Data availability statement could be strengthened by providing more specific details. ======================================== Please submit your revised manuscript by May 18 2024 11:59PM. 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The protocol should describe the appropriate controls, sample size calculations, and replication needed to ensure that the data are robust and reproducible. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors described where all data underlying the findings will be made available when the study is complete? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception, at the time of publication. The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 5. 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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Dear Authors, Here are my comments; When you are preparing a review of reviews which is also called umbrella reviews there are few key items to consider. Umbrella review has several steps which include systematic literature search and study selection, data extraction, statistical analysis and grading of evidence, and interpretation of findings. Authors need to explain in detail the methodology and clear justification needs to be written. Authors need to clearly define the research question and consider which systematic reviews are to be included. Authors need to explain explicitly the eligibility criteria for this umbrella review. The search strategy must be focus on your topic so that you are able to capture all reviews that deal with the focus of your research area. Authors need mention how are the statistical analysis going to be conducted in detail. What type of data are going to be analysed. Are you going to use the existing meta analysis in the included study? Reviewer #2: In this study, the authors try to offer a study protocol for a systematic review of systematic reviews on the effects of nutrition interventions on Sarcopenia criteria in elder populations. The idea itself may be of significance for the management of Sarcopenia. With that in mind, this reviewer has the following to remark: 1. The authors may have rushed their article before it was sufficiently established. For example, the methods adopted are not properly validated in the paper. The authors could, at least, provide a detailed discussion on the various aspects and limitations of their research. 2. There is also the research questions developed. Background section states, at the end, that "the primary objective of this study is to examine the impact of dietary interventions in isolation on the three diagnostic criteria for sarcopenia. It seeks to determine which dietary interventions, or combination thereof, yield the most favorable outcomes for older individuals." However, the paper does not answer these research questions. If it was not possible to answer them, or if the authors did not intend to answer such research questions, the above paragraph should have been changed to ensure that it is in line with what the paper aims to report on. 3. Immediately after the Background section comes the Methods section. It begins with, "This study is a protocol for a systematic review of systematic reviews...." Overall, there appears to be a lack of coherence. It seems as if each section was written by a different author and the end result was not edited carefully. 4. Another issue is one that the authors themselves make reference to. They state that they, in 2023, have published "a study of this nature." The mentioned study, nonetheless, screened 494 systematic reviews and offered a discussion on the results observed. The current paper under review does not explore its subject in a similar manner. 5. It must be noted here that the best way to provide a study protocol for a systematic review of systematic reviews is by testing it. And yet, the paper fails to do so. 6. As it stands, the article is confusing. As explained above, clarity (the language used) differs from one section to the next. The paper would benefit from editing and tightening. I hope my review is helpful and wish the authors the very best with their research! Reviewer #3: Thank you for the opportunity to review this protocol. The authors have proposed a timely and relevant systematic review of systematic reviews examining the effects of nutrition interventions on sarcopenia outcomes in older adults. The protocol is generally well-written and follows established guidelines for systematic review methodology. Minor comments. 1. In the PICO framework on page 6: "Population: Adults over 60 years, male or female, sarcopenic or at risk of, with or without comorbidities" . It is not clear how the authors understand individuals at risk of sarcopenia, and why this is relevant? 2. Data availability statement could be strengthened by providing more specific details. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Effects of Different Nutrition Interventions on Sarcopenia Criteria in Older People: A Study Protocol for a Systematic Review of Systematic Reviews With Meta-Analysis. PONE-D-24-09440R1 Dear Dr. Ferreira, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Melissa Orlandin Premaor, M.D., Ph.D Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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