Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJanuary 24, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-03235Fecal microbiota profiles of growing pigs and their relation to growth performancePLOS ONE Dear Dr. König, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please provide much more details about the experiment to allow the reviewers to determine if the data is appropriately sound for publication in PloS one. Make sure to address all comments exhaustively. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 30 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The manuscript attempts to describe an evaluation of microbial diversity in growing pigs with different growth performance. However, there are many shortcomings with the manuscript that need to be addressed and considered before further evaluation of the manuscript. Lines 50-102: The Introduction should be shortened, targeted, and concluded with focused objective statements. Lines 61-65: should be moved to Discussion Lines 76-84: should be moved to Discussion Line 118: How many piglets per site? What were the sow production numbers (e.g. total born, still born)? Line 127: How far were piglets transported? Line 128: How many total pens in the weaning and finishing units? Line 129: Did one weaning unit house all the pigs? Line 129: Were the finishing farm groups similar to the weaning unit groups or completely random? Line 137: Was feed tested for microbial contribution to the results? Line 138: What was the method and purpose of heat treatment? Line 147: Is it correct that only ~5 piglets were born to each sow? Further on, only 25 piglets are considered, so the discrepancy must be explained. Line 148: How were pigs selected and identified? Line 150: What time points were evaluated? Line 151: Birth weight and current weight? Line 152: Were pigs selected for and marketed based on days on feed or body weight? Line 154: Provide some (not all) details in the text for the reader. Line 161: insert "during lactation" after "information" Line 162: delete "These criteria are summarized in" Line 163: Why were only these pigs selected? Line 163: Does that mean at least one pig from each litter? Line 165: When did these pigs die? Line 165: Did you confirm the reason was injury? Line 175: How are the sampling dates considered in the statistical analysis? Line 253: There is no indication how the potential influence of different farms was considered in the analysis. How was each farm tested as a separate block? How was parity influence considered? What are the performance metrics considered and how were they evaluated? Line 306: Was this pig considered in further analysis? Line 401: What are other probable sources? Line 418: Were any surfaces swabbed in this study? How were the rooms cleaned and disinfected before farrowing? Line 418: Why were cross-fostered pigs chosen and not excluded? Line 444: Why were medicated pigs chosen and not excluded? Lines 486-487: This is a major shortcoming of the manuscript. Diet composition is known to influence the microbiome. Lack of information such draws serious questions about the validity of the study results. Figures: All figures should include all the information needed to stand alone. Reviewer #2: Author studied Fecal microbiota profiles of growing pigs and their relation to growth performance. Line 113: since there were only three farms, please note the number of sows and finisher pigs from each farm. Line 118 please provide the size of pen. Line 122 “The pens were never completely clean.” Were pens cleaned and disinfected before introducing the next group of sows? Were sows from all 3 farms received the straw before parturition? Line 123 What was the rule used for crossfoster? Line 132 to 135: Were these practices true for all 3 farms? Line 138: Is there scientific evidence that can confirm no probiotics are being added in any stage of production from all three farms? Since diets have greatly impacted the microbiomes of pigs, please provide diet compositions. Line 147: What were the pig's selection criteria? How many piglets per dam were selected? What is the dam distribution for each farm? Line 163: How was the gender distribution between the three categories and the number of pigs distributed from each farm? The number of observations for the Premature death group is very low. At which stage of production were these 4 pigs dead? Table 1: Please change “½*SD” to “1/2×SD”. Line 179: Were samples for the transitional phase occurring on the date of weaning? Please clarify. Table 2: Please provide units for noncategorical traits. Line 208: Swab samples were collected from pigs at younger ages, while fecal samples were used for older pigs. Please clarify what collection was made for each phase. Line 215: Does this indicate that only fecal samples were analyzed for Lactobacillaceae? Line 269: was crossfostering performed before sample collection for the initial exposure phase? For 25 pigs, how many of them were crossfostered? Line 277: What were the statistics analysis results? Line 307: How about good2? Line 310: Poor1 didn’t express L. vaginalis. Line 334: Were results from those cross fostered differ from those were not? If there are, it indicated the evident of confounding effect. Was cross fostering also performed in the other farms? Line 373: Please provide the data in supplemental. Line 375: Since the different was only showed in initial exposure phase, it is no need to present Fig8a. Line 385: Please correct P=0.000. Also space should be available before and after equal sign, P = 0.000, and P should be italic. Please being consistent with “development group” throughout the whole document. Line 404: Was any of these five pigs Cross fostered? Were other piglets also express these two bacteria? Line 428: what is the explanation for the contrary observation? Line 457: Was there any difference between farms? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Tsungcheng Tsai ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. 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Fecal microbiota profiles of growing pigs and their relation to growth performance PONE-D-24-03235R1 Dear Dr. König, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. 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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Line 147: What were the pig's selection criteria? How many piglets per dam were selected? What is the dam distribution for each farm? Response – Parturitions were tracked on all three farms for one week. During this time on Farm 1 30 sows gave birth to 364 piglets, on Farm 2 91 sows gave birth to 1461 piglets, and on Farm 3 39 sows gave birth to 541 piglets. All piglets born during this week were ear-tagged at birth for individual identification. For this study, from each litter the three largest and three smallest pigs were regarded (n=960). From these pigs fecal samples and information was collected from birth until slaughter. The text has been revised in lines 160-164 to express this more clearly. Also, Table S1 was added to the supporting material to provide additional information on farms and sows. Q: It is surprising that the mortality of pigs from this trial, especially those with the most miniature pigs. what is the typical mortality rate in these systems? Were medication diets and zinc and copper offered in these systems? ine 163: How was the gender distribution between the three categories and the number of pigs distributed from each farm? The number of observations for the Premature death group is very low. At which stage of production were these 4 pigs dead? Response – Thank you for bringing this up. Gender was not an inclusion criterion in this study. We did not consider gender as a criterion because throughout the study pigs have not reached puberty and therefore gender specific hormones have likely not yet influenced the microbiota. Three pigs out of 25 were female. Gender distribution has been added to Table 2, which also shows distribution of pigs from each farm. Out of the pigs in the PrematureDeath group one died during suckling, one around weaning and the remaining two before transport to finishing farm at 10 weeks of age. This has been added to the text in lines 194-195. Q: What BW average were pigs marketed? Pigs typically reach their puberty around 23 to 26 weeks of age. Line 457: Was there any difference between farms? Response – The farms are a part of slaughterhouse contract breeders with general animal husbandry guidance. Apart from this, one farm was located in south-western Finland, whereas the other two were a little further in the north. One farm had a lower medication threshold and another farm had better equipped creep areas for the nursing piglets. Otherwise, farms were quite similar in their management, routines, and environments (farm design etc.). Q: Was there a farm effect on the abundance of Lactobacillaceae? ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Ryan Samuel Reviewer #2: Yes: Tsungcheng Tsai ********** |
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