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PONE-D-23-29119Mother-infant interaction characteristics associate with infant falling reactivity and child peer problems at pre-school agePLOS ONE Dear Dr. Rigato, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 14 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please be assured that, once you have provided your new statement, the assessment of your exemption will not hold up the peer review process. Additional Editor Comments: The manuscript is interested meanwhile, the reviewers have raised a number of points which we believe would improve the manuscript and may allow a revised version to be published in PLOS one. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for the opportunity to review the manuscript, “Mother-infant interaction characteristics associate with infant falling reactivity and child peer problems at pre-school age”. PONE-D-23-29119 The topic of the manuscript is interesting, the quality of the early interaction between an infant and his or her mother is an important factor that influences the child’s development, survival and growth. This type of research has been discussed repeatedly in previous literature; however, it is still needed to direct the plans for intervention procedures to alter mother–infant interaction with the ultimate goal of achieving positive developmental outcomes during the first years of life. The introduction The introduction must be revised as there are some outdated references. It is prolonged and full of details of previous studies. It included description of the tools which have been used in the study. These details must be transferred to the methodology section. These are examples of recent references that can help in revising the introduction • Rocha, N. A. C. F., Dos Santos Silva, F. P., Dos Santos, M. M., & Dusing, S. C. (2020). Impact of mother-infant interaction on development during the first year of life: A systematic review. Journal of child health care: for professionals working with children in the hospital and community, 24(3), 365–385. https://doi.org/10.1177/1367493519864742 • Chung, FF., Wan, GH., Kuo, SC. et al. Mother–infant interaction quality and sense of parenting competence at six months postpartum for first-time mothers in Taiwan: a multiple time series design. BMC Pregnancy Childbirth 18, 365 (2018). https://doi.org/10.1186/s12884-018-1979-7 • Richter M, Fehringer K, Smith J, Pineda R. Parent-infant interaction in the NICU: Challenges in measurement. Early Hum Dev. 2022 Jul;170:105609. doi: 10.1016/j.earlhumdev.2022.105609. Epub 2022 Jun 14. PMID: 35752043; PMCID: PMC10072234. Methods: This section comprises a lot of limitations Participants: The authors did not mention the basis for calculation of sample size. Although authors described some features of the participants, they did not mention the exact inclusion and exclusion criteria of the sample. Neither the socioeconomic level nor the marital status of the participants mothers was elaborated; in spite of the known impact of these variables on the mother -infant interaction. Study design: The longitudinal study design allowed the authors to investigate the associations between mother-infant interaction characteristics at 9 months of age with maternal depression and infant temperament along the first year postpartum, and with child behavior at 3 years of age. It is important to consider the authors’ efforts to keep the sample intact over this time. The authors mentioned that there were five points of assessment consisting of one pre- and four post-natal assessment points. However, they excluded the prenatal assessment point. I think it is important to include this assessment to avoid loss of the biological factors’ effect on the mother-infant interaction. The authors must specify the time of the four post-natal assessment points in the section of methods. These points appeared for the first time in Table S1 in supporting information file. The major limitation in methods was the single point assessment of the main outcome variable (mother-infant interaction). It was assessed once at the age of 9 months. This main variable must be evaluated as the average of several assessments at several points of time as the maternal depression and infant temperament. In addition, it was unsuitable to depend on the undergraduate students in evaluation of the mother-infant interaction. Instead, expert developmental and behavioral pediatricians had to do this evaluation. The Strengths and Difficulties Questionnaire (SDQ) should not be used for this young age, many available questionnaires could be used to investigate the child’s behaviors, emotions and relationships at the age of 36 months. (e.g. Child Behavior Checklist (CBCL), Ages & Stages Questionnaire: Social-Emotional (ASQ: SE) Confounding variables were not considered in this study, which might affect mother-infant relationship as health status of the infant or the mother, socioeconomic variables, social support, work status, and marital status. Results: Were well presented. Table S6 in the supporting file: It described the associations between infant Falling Reactivity at each time point and Dyadic Affective Mutuality observed at 9 months. These associations were reported to be positive. Thus, authors have to revise for the negative sign in each correlation. Discussion: The finding of a lack of association between interaction behaviors and maternal depressive symptoms was not acceptable. This may be due to the dependence on single evaluation of interaction behavior as mentioned before; or because all participants had minimal depression symptoms that could not impact the interaction behavior. The other two findings are acceptable. Reviewer #2: this study is very interesting for readers and caregivers, all the sections are very well described and data were collected methodologically correctly. those aspects were very well descibed in the methods and result section ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Ebtissam M. 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PONE-D-23-29119R1Mother-infant interaction characteristics associate with infant falling reactivity and child peer problems at pre-school agePLOS ONE Dear Dr. Rigato, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Following the revisions made, the paper has significantly improved. I encourage you to follow the suggestions of Reviewer 3, who has proposed some minor revisions. Although the reviewer has suggested small changes, I believe the issue that has been raised (the possibility of better understanding the changes between infancy and toddlerhood) is crucial, especially for interpreting the results obtained in this study. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 17 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I’m pleased to review the updated version of this interested manuscript “Mother-infant interaction characteristics associate with infant falling reactivity and child peer problems at pre-school age”. PONE-D-23-29119R1 I would like to thank the authors as all previous comments have been addressed. The new added paragraphs and explanation have enriched the manuscript. I think this updated version is accepted and ready for publication Reviewer #2: manuscript has been improved and suitable for publication. the authors addressed all the answers to revision and prepared the manuscript in order to fit fot those Reviewer #3: Thank you for the opportunity to review the study entitled 'Mother-infant interaction characteristics associate with infant falling reactivity and child peer problems at pre-school age.' This study is very interesting and well-organized, addressing a topic that needs to emerge more in the literature. Although I have noticed that the authors have extensively revised the paper, significantly improving their manuscript, I believe it is important for the authors to further explore the developmental age they are addressing. Specifically, while the literature regarding mother-infant exchanges has been thoroughly explored, it would be important for the authors to also delve deeper into the changes that occur as the child grows. With the acquisition of greater autonomy and what M. Mahler has defined as a period of separation-individuation in the mother-child dyad, the child gains a greater sense of agency, which will continue to evolve during toddlerhood, the developmental phase addressed by the authors. It is important that this be better defined in the introduction and that the results be discussed based on the specific developmental context of the child and the dyad as a whole. Below, I highlight some literature that could be useful: - Ballarotto (2023). Parental sensitivity to toddler's need for autonomy: An empirical study on mother-toddler and father-toddler interactions during feeding and play. Infant Behavior and Development - Kemppinen (2006). The continuity of maternal sensitivity from infancy to toddler age. Journal of Reproductive and Infant Psychology - Lecuyer-Maus (2000). Maternal sensitivity and responsiveness, limit-setting style, and relationship history in the transition to toddlerhood. Issues in Comprehensive Pediatric Nursing - Ballarotto (2021). Mother-child interactions during feeding: A study on maternal sensitivity in dyads with underweight and normal weight toddlers. Appetite - Andreadakis (2020). Toddler temperament, parent stress, and autonomy support. Journal of Child and Family Studies Furthermore, in the study limitations, it is important to highlight the constraints of certain self-reports (such as the SDQ, particularly in situations of parental stress). You can refer to the study by:Trumello (2023) Mothers and fathers of pre-school children: a study on parenting stress and child’s emotional-behavioral difficulties ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Ebtissam M. Salah El-Din Reviewer #2: Yes: Erich Cosmi Reviewer #3: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. 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