Peer Review History
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PONE-D-23-38311Demographics, culture, and participatory nature of multi-marathoning – an observational study highlighting issues with recommendations.PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Lundy, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 30 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Additional Editor Comments: Dear Authors, Thank you for considering Plos One for publishing your valuable study entitled "Demographics, culture, and participatory nature of multi-marathoning – an observational study highlighting issues with recommendations". Your study with manuscript number PONE-D-23-38311 has been reviewed by two reviewers, and after an in-depth examination of your manuscript, it has been concluded that extensive revision is crucial prior to any further contemplation for publication. Key areas for improvement include enhancing the introduction to better justify the study variables, providing more detailed sociodemographic data in the results, and deepening the analysis in the discussion section. Additionally, the presentation style needs revision, particularly in converting point-form information into text and adjusting sentences that begin with numbers. Furthermore, your study would benefit significantly from a clearer theoretical framework, addressing potential biases in your methodology, and strengthening the connection between your findings and the recommendations proposed. Reviewer 2 particularly emphasises the importance of including a variety of perspectives to enrich the study's depth. This comprehensive approach will help in addressing the methodological and analytical limitations, thereby enhancing the academic rigour and practical implications of your research. Please ensure that these revisions are thoroughly addressed in your resubmission. We look forward to reviewing your revised manuscript. Best Regards, Hamed Ahmadinia Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Dear authors, After reading your work, I consider essential to pay attention to some concerns associated with this paper. The introduction section should be reinforced. This section fails to justify the inclusion of the variables to be analysed with this study. Results, we need more info about sociodemographics characteristics of the subjects. Discussion section should be more deep. It is essential to analyse, associate and justify the results. There are more practical implications of these results the the presented. The info that was presented in points, should be presented in text. Some sentences start with numbers. Please fix it. Reviewer #2: "Demographics, culture, and participatory nature of multi-marathoning" by Lundy provide valuable insights into the multi-marathoning sport, shedding light on the motivations, demographics, and health implications associated with this activity. However, several issues with the study need to be addressed. Firstly, the study needs a clear theoretical framework or conceptual foundation. While it reports on multi-marathoning's demographics, culture, and participatory nature, it fails to situate these findings within existing theoretical perspectives or prior research. This omission weakens the study's academic rigour and limits its contribution to the broader understanding of multi-marathoning. The paper briefly mentions the historical context of running in the 1970s and 1980s, and it needs a thorough review of existing peer-reviewed research on multi-marathoning. A more extensive literature review would provide a stronger theoretical foundation for the study and demonstrate the gaps in knowledge that the current research aims to address. Secondly, the survey methodology used in the study may introduce selection bias. The survey was distributed globally to sports participants via closed social media and email groups of major national and international multi-marathon clubs. This method may have resulted in a sample representative of only some of the multi-marathoning population, as it primarily captures the perspectives of individuals already engaged with multi-marathoning clubs. The lack of random sampling and the reliance on self-selected respondents raise questions about the generalizability of the findings. Additionally, the study's reliance on self-reported data from the survey respondents introduces the potential for response bias. Respondents may have provided socially desirable responses or inaccurate information, particularly regarding their health behaviours and motivations for participation. This compromises the reliability and validity of the study's results. Furthermore, while well-intentioned, the findings must sufficiently support the study's recommendations. The paper suggests implementing women-specific enhancements to events, ensuring race directors have adequately resourced health plans at events, and encouraging participants to take accountability for their health. However, these recommendations are separate from the study's specific findings. They may benefit from a more robust data analysis to support their relevance and feasibility. In conclusion, while the study provides valuable insights into multi-marathoning sports, addressing the above methodological and analytical limitations is essential to strengthen the research's academic rigour and practical implications. The author should consider incorporating additional points of view in the research to enrich the study's depth and breadth. The study would benefit from including diverse perspectives to offer a more comprehensive understanding of the subject. Incorporating multiple points of view would enhance the study's academic rigour and contribute to a more nuanced portrayal of the multi-marathoning phenomenon. By including perspectives from a broader range of stakeholders, such as athletes, event organisers, health professionals, and governing bodies, the research could capture a more holistic view of the complexities and implications associated with multi-marathoning. Additionally, incorporating diverse viewpoints would allow for a more thorough exploration of the motivations, challenges, and experiences of multi-marathon participants and the perspectives of those involved in organising and regulating multi-marathon events. This multifaceted approach would enrich the study's findings and provide a more comprehensive foundation for the recommendations offered to governing bodies and event organisers. By integrating multiple points of view, the study could offer a more balanced and inclusive analysis of the sport, addressing a broader array of concerns and considerations. This approach would strengthen the academic quality of the research and enhance its practical relevance and applicability within the multi-marathoning community. Incorporating additional points of view in the research would enrich the study's depth and provide a more comprehensive understanding of multi-marathoning, benefiting both academic scholarship and the practical implications for stakeholders involved in the sport. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Hugo Vieira Pereira ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. 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Demographics, culture, and participatory nature of multi-marathoning – an observational study highlighting issues with recommendations. PONE-D-23-38311R1 Dear Dr. Lundy, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Hamed Ahmadinia Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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