Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionDecember 4, 2023 |
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PONE-D-23-40602Coaching strategies in wheelchair basketball: a statistical approach for player selection on the courtPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Cavedon, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 18 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: As the title of the article and the introduction suggest, this study is about what research variables could be used to select players for WB matches. What the main research question is remains unclear to me. Maybe this one “By what criteria can I select which players to put on the field during a WB match?”. However, this question can be solved in a practical rather than a scientific way. Because its validity had to be verified by scientific methods. If it is intended to be done, it must be named. It is not specified what the aim of the study is, it is only stated “We develop a method that enables to recognize the best-performing players...” But what is the main point of doing this? The authors did not fulfilled how to describe the research sample, some information moved to the results section. Not sure how many games each team played? If there are 56 matches and 8 teams, then they played 7 matches each. Why it is said that after 4? It is not clear how it was possible to play 7 or 4 games in 14 days? The literature review is done well, but what is the scientific and not the practical justification for this work? Statistical values of positions should be expressed as means and SD. This would allow us to understand the non-absolute values of each sample and could be compared with other data according to existing scientific standards The results section should clearly state what you got in response to the main research question. This information is not available. The statement about the conclusions sounds like this “In conclusion, the statistical approach proposed in this study appears to present significant opportunities for further analysis”. However, what specific conclusion is made that would allow us to answer what valid scientific method allows us to talk about player selection during matches? The conclusions section must be separate. There is a lot of talk about practical use. A separate section of the article should be assigned to it. Reviewer #2: Dear Authors, I would like to express my gratitude for the opportunity to review this manuscript. The manuscript at this stage requires improvements. Below are suggestions with line indications: 21 – Abbreviations in the manuscript for the first time should be in full. 28 & 30 – Please correct the “R-squared” and “p-value” format. 34-35 – Please correct the keywords format, considering the journal template and instructions for authors. 39 – Please correct the citations format, not only in this line, but in all manuscript. Please consider the journal template and instructions for authors. 38-55 - Please consider shorter paragraphs (8-12 lines) to increase readability. This suggestion applies to all manuscript. 78-88 – The end of the introduction section should clearly state the aim of the study. 117 – Please revise the text format. 172-173 – Please remove one line. 164, 190 – Tables titles are too long, please consider shorter titles. 194 – Please consider a table footnote. 196-203 – It is not understandable the content in these lines. Please clarify. 225 – Please consider the journal template and instructions for authors regarding all table's format. 235, 236 – Please consider each figure introduction previously to its appearance in the manuscript, and also a short analysis after each figure. 260 – This content is part of the methodology, not the discussion section. Please consider reformulation. 249 – All the discussion section should be reformulated. Starting by indicating the aim of the study, and afterward presenting the main findings of the study, comparing these afterward with the literature. References are suggested to be presented in this section. The last paragraph should highlight the study limitations and suggestions for future research. 339 – Content is missing before references, please check the journal template. 340 – All references should be carefully revised, they are not according to the journal template and instructions for authors. Please carefully revise the English. ********** 6. 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PONE-D-23-40602R1Optimizing Wheelchair Basketball Lineups: A Statistical Approach to Coaching StrategiesPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Cavedon, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 08 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols. Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Gianpiero Greco Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Dear Authors, Thank you for considering my suggestions and incorporating them into the manuscript, which is globally improved, congratulations. The manuscript at this stage still requires improvements. Below are suggestions with line indication: 32 – Please consider “p” in italic in all manuscript (including tables). “R-squared” can also be considered r2. Please revise both cases. 37-38 – The keywords should not be deleted but written according to the journal instructions for authors. 99 – Please clearly state the inclusion and exclusion criteria. 114-120 – Please consider a table to provide this information to the readers. Between “sample” and “statistical analysis”, please consider subtopics such as “study design” and “procedures” associated with the presentation of relevant information to the readers. 131 – Please revise the text of “statistical analysis”. Some paragraphs are too short and line 164 should be deleted. 202-203 – Please revise. 208 – It is suggested to present Figure 2 after the respective introduction. The same should be considered for table 2 (L 206), Figure 4 (L 287). Please consider reformulating this section (“results”). 225 – Please format the tables considering the journal instructions for authors (text type, size, titles, and footnotes), and aiming to standardize the text format (namely text in the same line). 308 – Despite the improvement of the discussion section, particularly with the inclusion of new references, some paragraphs are too long, which difficult to read and analysis. Please revise this section. 409 - Please consider paragraphs aiming for more clear/direct take-home messages in the conclusions section. Please also consider some practical application text. 441 – Please double-check the references format details. For example, the ref 5 title is in lowercase, contrary to others; Ref 15 journal format should be corrected. Please revise all refs in detail. The English improved, congratulations. Nevertheless, please carefully revise the new version of the manuscript. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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Optimizing Wheelchair Basketball Lineups: A Statistical Approach to Coaching Strategies PONE-D-23-40602R2 Dear Dr. Cavedon, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Gianpiero Greco Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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