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| Original SubmissionJanuary 11, 2024 |
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PONE-D-23-42318Impact of medication adherence on quality of life among geriatric patients: a hospital-based cross-sectional study from IndiaPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Sultana, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 20 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Dear authors, Thank you so much for giving me the chance of reading and reviewing your draft. In my opinion, you’ve done a very good job trying to find relations between medication adherence and the quality of life of your patients. I think this assessment could enlighten different approaches to tailor our interventions moving the focus from the medication to its importance as a well-being way for the patients. However, I believe there are some aspects that could be improved, which I will outline below, hoping that these suggestions will assist you in proposing a more robust manuscript. The introduction section provides the necessary details to understand the reasons justifying the work, so I think it does not need to change. Regarding the methodological section, I suggest to review the inclusion and exclusion criteria (page 6 and 7), as, if being older than 60 is included in the inclusion criteria, being younger than 60 cannot be an exclusion criterion (I always understand exclusion criteria as situations to exclude people who accomplish every inclusion criterion but we want to exclude for some reason, as you exclude for example “patients with cognitive impairment”). I think you should also define what the variables of personal medical history are (but I don’t know if there are any presented as results). Moreover, the definition of the WHOQOL-Bref is very extensive, yet that of the MMAS-8 is too brief. Perhaps more could be included about how the MMAS-8 is scored (page 8). At the data analysis subsection (page 9): SPSS is no longer the acronym for Statistical Package for Social Sciences, but for Statistical Product and Service Solutions, so my suggestion here is to avoid the full name and keep only the acronym. I also don't quite understand why bivariate analyses are conducted among the different dimensions of the WHOQOL-Bref (paired t-test). Regarding the results section, figure 1 with the MMAS-8 test results is redundant since the same results are also summarized in Table 2, so I would suggest eliminating this figure. On the other hand, the second paragraph of this section (page 10) suggests a statistically significant correlation between the DOM-3 of the QOL questionnaire and the medication adherence score, while Table 4 offers a p-value of 0.059 (when a statistical significance was established for p<0.05 in the methodology section). I still don't understand if the information provided in Table 5 (paired t-test) regarding differences between QOL dimensions is relevant. Additionally, I believe Table 6 could be removed since the same information appears in Table 7. In Table 7, there are also errors in the sample values (for example, the N of the IP group should be 267, but the table indicates 26). The main issue I find is in the discussion section. It appears too lengthy, and many phrases reiterate or delve into aspects already exposed in the introduction section. I believe this section would be much more interesting by deepen into the reasons that the authors consider to have impact over the medication adherence that could led to changes in each of the QOL domains and why you didn’t find these relations. Through this interpretation, you can propose improvements or different ways to approach tailored interventions oriented to improve the quality of life of the patients through better medication adherence than being centered only in the adherence by itself, as you suggest briefly in the conclusion. Due to your results, I wonder if the fact that the highest quality of life is found in those patients with intermediate adherence is because they are the group least concerned about their health. One interpretation would be that patients with higher adherence are more concerned and therefore have worse quality of life, but a higher level of commitment (greater adherence), whereas those with lower adherence have given up on therapeutic functionality. In this sense, it would also be interesting to explore the time they have had the pathology or been taking the medication. Finally, and regarding the issues about the statistical significance previously commented, the conclusion must be reviewed once the results are corrected. I hope these contributions help you enhance the presented manuscript. Reviewer #2: General This manuscript needs a thorough review of the language to improve grammatical, syntax and spelling errors. The thematic linkages must be improved also. Introduction • The section has a lot of language difficulties which must be improved • Line 2-4. The sentence “…Based on the data from the 2001 census, it was seen that the population of individuals classified as elderly to approximately 77 million.” must be reconstructed to make it clearer. • “Cardiovascular disease” must not start with a capital letter • The spelling of ‘ageing’ vs aging should be consistent Methodology • The section has a lot of language difficulties which must be improved • Under ‘Screening of patients”, kindly check the spellings of ‘in patient’ and ‘out patient’, and keep it consistent throughout the manuscript. These occur in other sections. Also check word repetitions e.g. ‘patients patients. Results The descriptions should be improved. Discussion The language and linkages must be improved. Reviewer #3: Dear authors, I appreciate the opportunity to read your manuscript, which is overall well written and deals with a very important issue. However, in my perspective, it has some limitations to be accepted for publication as it is: 1. The title and objective are misleading to the presented results. The manuscript is actually focused on quality of life (QOL) and little is presented and discussed about medication adherence (MA) and its impact on QOL. Only about 10-15% of the discussion is about the impact of MA on QOL. 2. Also, to address the impact of MA on QOL you needed more factors that influence QOL, in order to reduce bias. Table 8 includes only two variables, which is very low in a regression model. 3. Some references in the introduction are not fully adjusted to the text (ref. 2, 3, 5, 10 and 17). 4. The methodology is well explained, however it's not clear how the MMAS-8 was applied - for all the medications the patients was on or individually for every pharmacological class? Adherence to a single medication is not related to adherence to all medications. Still, in this section exclusion criteria #1 and #4 are redundant. 5. There are small typographic errors throughout the manuscript, that can be easily corrected. However, in the results section, the range of the population was 31-92 years. How can that be if the inclusion criteria was 60 or more years old? 6. MA is addressed in a not specific manner in this section. No analysis is presented concerning differences between gender, age group, pharmacologic class, diseases... this can influence your conclusions. 7. Finally, you state that "The author(s) received no specific funding for this work", but at the end of the manuscript you write that there was a funding from the King Khalid University. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Medication Adherence and Quality of Life among Geriatric Patients: Insights from a Hospital-Based Cross-Sectional Study in India PONE-D-23-42318R1 Dear Rokeya Sultana, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Md. Feroz Kabir, BPT, MPT, MPH, BPED, MPED Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Please carefully respond to the comments in the proofreading of the article. Thanks Reviewers' comments: |
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