Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionSeptember 15, 2023 |
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PONE-D-23-26742Validation of Postnatal growth and Retinopathy of Prematurity (G-ROP) screening guidelines in a tertiary care hospital of Pakistan: A report from developing worldPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Tayyab, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== Dear Authors While you manuscript is very intersting the reviewers raised many concerns which need to be addressed by the authors. I hope that you will be able to address all recommended issues. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 30 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please ensure that your ethics statement is included in your manuscript, as the ethics statement entered into the online submission form will not be published alongside your manuscript. Additional Editor Comments: Dear Authors This is interesting study however many issued were raised by both reviewrs which need to be addressed by the authors. I hope that you will be able to answer to all recommended comments. Kind regards [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. 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PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The article titled "Validation of Postnatal Growth and Retinopathy of Prematurity (G-ROP) screening guidelines in a tertiary care hospital of Pakistan: A report from developing world" reports on a study conducted to validate the Postnatal Growth and Retinopathy of Prematurity (G-ROP) screening criteria in a cohort of premature infants in Pakistan. This research addresses an important topic in the field of neonatal care and ophthalmology, contributing valuable insights to the literature on retinopathy of prematurity (ROP) screening in low- and middle-income countries. This retrospective analysis included 134 case files of premature infants in a tertiary care hospital from January 2018 to February 2022. The G-ROP criteria were applied to assess sensitivity for identifying type 1 ROP, type 2 ROP, and any ROP. The study reported a high sensitivity of 100% for type 1 ROP and 98.7% for any type of ROP, with only 19 babies requiring treatment. The authors highlighted the potential of the G-ROP model in identifying ROP but noted limitations, such as a small sample size and a higher ROP incidence than in other studies, and recommended further research and validation with larger sample sizes. While the article is interesting and relevant, there are major limitations that prevent me from an acceptance recommendation. Please see my comments below: Strengths: • Relevance: The study addresses an important topic in the field of neonatal care and ophthalmology, focusing on the validation of a widely recognized screening tool in a developing country context. • Novelty: The study claims to be the first of its kind in Pakistan, adding novelty to the literature on retinopathy of prematurity (ROP) screening in developing countries. • Clear Objective: The article clearly states its primary objective, which is to explore the effectiveness of the G-ROP model in identifying ROP successfully. • Data Collection and Analysis: The article describes the data collection process, including the time frame and criteria for inclusion, which adds transparency to the study. Additionally, the use of sensitivity and specificity in data analysis is standard and appropriate. Weaknesses: • Minor: o Use of Developing Country Terminology: the article refers to Pakistan as a "developing South Asian country." This terminology is somewhat outdated and not preferred in the academic literature. The term "low or middle-income country" is considered more appropriate as it doesn't carry the same negative connotations. o Use of Pie Diagrams: Pie charts are often criticized for their limited ability to convey complex data effectively. Authors should consider using more suitable data visualization methods such as bar charts or histograms. o Missing Patient Numbers in Discussion: the article lacks the number of patients included in studies from the UK and Italy in the discussion section, this is an oversight that should be addressed for completeness and to provide context for the reader. • Major: • Sample Size: While the sample size of 166 is relatively large for a single-center study, it may still be considered small for validating a screening tool, and this limitation is acknowledged by the authors. A larger sample would enhance the study's robustness and generalizability. How was the sample size calculated or what would be an appropriate sample for this type of study. • Retrospective Design: The study is retrospective in nature, which can introduce potential bias and limitations regarding the accuracy and completeness of the data. Ways to address bias in the methods as well as how bias can affect the results must be discussed. See STROBE checklist: https://www.strobe-statement.org/checklists/ • High Incidence of ROP: The reported incidence of ROP (56.7%) in this study appears to be higher than what is typically reported in the literature, which raises questions about the study's population selection or diagnostic criteria. Please discuss • Exclusion of Cases: The exclusion of cases with incomplete records might introduce a selection bias, as those cases might have different characteristics from those included. • Lack of Follow-Up Information: The study does not provide information on the long-term follow-up and outcomes of the infants who were screened and diagnosed with ROP, which is crucial for evaluating the effectiveness of the screening criteria. • No Discussion on Specific Challenges: Although the introduction mentions several challenges faced in low- and middle-income countries regarding ROP screening, the study does not elaborate on how these challenges influenced the results or the implications for implementing G-ROP screening criteria in such contexts. • Concluding Statement: The conclusion is somewhat vague, and it is suggested that larger studies with multiple centers should be conducted. It would be beneficial to provide more concrete recommendations or implications based on the study's findings. In summary, while the article has strengths in terms of relevance and clear objectives, it also suffers from significant limitations related to sample size, data completeness, and design. Additionally, addressing concerns about the terminology used for developing countries, data visualization, and missing information in the discussion would enhance the overall quality and readability of the article. Nevertheless, my recommendation is to decline the submission. Reviewer #2: Major revision of this manuscript is needed to be considered for publication in PLOS One. Please start with type 1, type 2 and any ROP and show all the babies included in a diagram with G-ROP criteria marked. An important issue would also be how many exams were spared when using these criteria etc.... ********** 6. 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Validation of Postnatal growth and Retinopathy of Prematurity (G-ROP) screening guidelines in a tertiary care hospital of Pakistan: A report from a low middle income country PONE-D-23-26742R1 Dear Dr. Tayyab, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Stefan Grosek, Ph.D., M.D., Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): The revised version of an article "alidation of Postnatal growth and Retinopathy of Prematurity (G-ROP) screening guidelines in a tertiary care hospital of Pakistan: A report from a low middle income country"has been sent for reevaluation. I found that the authors accepted all comments from the reviewers and very much improved it. No open issues remain and therefore I recommend to accept this article. It is well designed and written and give us new informations about ROP in middle income country. Kind regards Reviewers' comments: |
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