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PONE-D-23-30566What polarizes citizens? An explorative analysis of 817 attitudinal items from a non-random online panel in GermanyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Teney, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Editors' comments: both reviewers provide several fair and reasonable comments that call for major and minor revisions of different kinds (e.g., theoretical, empirical). I believe that you should engage with all of the comments. I will send back the manuscript to both reviewers and invite them to review the revised iteration if you choose to re-submit it. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 07 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The paper constitutes an interesting contribution to the study of opinion polarization. Given the field’s current focus on the US, the focus on Germany – a context marked by a multi-party-system with weaker partisan identification – constitutes an empirical contribution in itself. By testing the effect of survey item formulation on polarization, the study further brings an important methodological contribution to the field. Finally, testing competing and complementary theoretical explanations for polarization, it theoretically contributes to the field of polarization. Empirically, the study is based on an impressive data analysis and coding effort. General comments: - The research question(s): Are the authors really just testing whether the survey item formulation affects polarization? Isn’t the effect also due to the nature and substance of the issue that the items ask about? For instance, an issue’s salience or whether it is a cultural issue do not depend on the survey item formulation. In contrast, whether it is abstract or concrete can be a matter of item formulation. I would suggest that the authors more systematically distinguish between aspects related to issues’ substance and aspects related to survey item formulation. - To what extent is the study specific to the German context or generalizable to other contexts? - What is the advantage of including so many items? Couldn’t the analysis be done more efficiently? On polarization: - The authors define polarization as a bimodal distribution. However, there are other definitions/ aspects of definitions of polarization that the authors do not engage with (e.g. see Traber et al. 2022). What about other aspects of polarization such as sorting or whether there is some kind of group identity? It would be great to see some engagement with this literature and justification of the chosen definition and potential limitations of this definition. - Further, I would like to challenge the authors on the account that opinion polarization is generally problematic. Is opinion polarization always considered problematic, or can it be an indicator of “healthy” pluralism, too? Does this perhaps depend on the issue, e.g. when an opposition to an issue is problematic for democratic principles? Sometimes, general (dis)agreement with an issue could also be problematic from a democratic perspective, couldn’t it? On issue salience: - The authors define issue salience as the coverage the news media affords a given issue. However, I would think that media coverage is a proxy/ measurement of issue salience rather than the definition of it. I would like to see an actual definition of what the authors mean by issue salience, and how media coverage captures it. Alternatively, the authors could specify that they only refer to salience in the media, rather than salience in general (see Wojcieszak et al, 2018). - As regards the effects of issue salience, I don’t think that “echo chambers” are the only possible mechanism at play in explaining the role of issue salience in polarization. For instance, issue salience leads to more availability of information and exposure to information, which increases the likelihood of people taking more determined positions on the issue. The issue salience literature (see Dennison 2019) can help with elaborating on such mechanisms. - Table 3: Could the authors show the minimum and maximum values of the salience variable? On loss aversion: - I wonder whether the authors could make use of the literature on material and symbolic threats with regard to theorizing the effects of (perceived) losses/ costs. - Further, I wonder about the context- and perception-specific nature of losses and benefits. For instance, the example mentioned by the authors on the highway speed limit entails the cost that people aren’t allowed to speed on the highway, but it also entails a gain in road traffic safety. Similarly, the authors assess that lifting Covid test obligations is a benefit, however, this comes at the cost of a greater health risk. Whether an item is seen as entailing a cost or a benefit seems to depend a lot on individual perception. Such classification may thus be more ambiguous than proposed by the authors. I think it is safe to associate a cost with items specifically asking respondents about their willingness to pay for something, and to associate a benefit with tax incentives. However, I don’t think that other items are easily classified as entailing a cost or benefit. Therefore, I do not trust the current coding of the measurement and I would recommend the authors to apply a stricter definition of cost and benefit in more strictly financial terms. On minorities: - Which groups do the authors consider as minorities? E.g. are women considered as a minority? Some would say that they are because of their discrimination, others would say that they aren’t, because they are a large group in society. Similarly, not everyone would consider old people as a population group that is typically considered part of identity politics. On abstract vs. concrete formulation: - How do the authors deal with the fact that some concrete items require a lot of specific knowledge to make an assessment? For instance, the question “Should the federal government recognize Jerusalem as Israel's capital?” requires knowledge about the implications of such a recognition. Similarly, the question “How do you currently rate the work of Federal Minister of Labor Hubertus Heil on a scale of 1 (very good) to 6 (insufficient)?” requires knowledge about the work of Hubertus Heil. What does it mean to include items of which respondents are very unlikely to give informed answers, and for which a good level of knowledge is necessary? Could a lack of polarization on such items indicate that people just don’t know what to answer, rather than that they don’t have strong opinions on them? I would suggest removing items that require a high level of specific knowledge. Literature recommendations: - On polarization outside the US: Traber, Denise, Stoetzer, Lukas F. and Burri, Tanja (2022) ‘Group-based public opinion polarisation in multi-party systems’, West European Politics, 46(4), pp. 652–677. - On issue salience: Dennison, James (2019) ‘A review of public issue salience: Concepts, determinants and effects on voting’, Political Studies Review, 17(4), pp. 436–446. - On media coverage and polarization: Wojcieszak, Magdalena, Azrout, Rachid and De Vreese, Claes (2018) ‘Waving the red cloth: Media coverage of a contentious issue triggers polarization’, Public Opinion Quarterly, 82(1), pp. 87–109. - On why identity politics can be divisive: Versteegen, Peter L. (2023) ‘The excluded ordinary? A theory of populist radical right supporters’ position in society’, European Journal of Social Psychology. Reviewer #2: This paper examines attitude polarization in Germany, taking an approach focusing on survey methodology. The main question the paper seeks to answer is how many survey questions eliciting attitudes exhibit polarized response patterns. It then seeks to explain why some questions show more polarization than others, testing five hypotheses: salience, costs/benefits, minority group focus, culture, abstraction. Abstraction, salience and costs tend to have the strongest impact on attitude polarization. This is generally a strong paper. I like the use of the public opinion data to get a large variation in attitude questions. I also find the results valuable in terms of getting researchers to think about how survey question formats influence findings concerning polarization, and how responses may vary in predictable ways. That said, I have a few comments that mean some revisions are necessary. - When it comes to issues, I was also wondering whether other divisions may be useful. One key distinction often made in the literature is between easy and hard issues (Carmines & Stimson 1980). This is not quite the same as the level of abstraction. The argument is that some topics are "easier" in that they require less complex answers - abortion or the death penalty are perhaps examples. The correct taxation policy is more of a hard issue. It surprised me that this common distinction was not considered or discussed. Similarly, I wondered about moralization as a related term that is used to distinguish different issues. - The justification of the salience hypothesis is a bit odd. There is not a lot of evidence of echo chambers, at least online. Instead, in my view salience forces people to actually think about a topic and formulate their answer. Salience also means that elites have provided useful (often partisan) cues. These are stronger reasons why salience matters. - The argument about non-financial costs and benefits is not clear. The example given makes it even less clear. How is a ban on imperial war flags a cost? It is not a cost for everyone. For many it would be a benefit! Maybe referencing clear policy proposals or policy change would be more useful. - I am not sure minority targets should always lead to polarization, especially if the minority is small or strongly disliked. - Can the authors write a little more about common rules of thumb for Kappa agreement scores? What is deemed a sufficient score? Do these scores account for how rare a category is? (It is easy to be very accurate if a feature is rarely present.) - Table 1. What does Majority mean? Why is Culture missing? Figure 3. The distributions should be bar charts, as only 5 answer categories existed. Carmines, E. G., & Stimson, J. A. (1980). The two faces of issue voting. American Political Science Review, 74(1), 78-91. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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