Peer Review History
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PONE-D-22-22041The association of red meat with gestational diabetes mellitus: results from 2 Canadian birth cohort studiesPLOS ONE Dear Dr. de Souza, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 06 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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He has held grants from the Canadian Institutes of Health Research, Canadian Foundation for Dietetic Research, Population Health Research Institute, and Hamilton Health Sciences Corporation as a principal investigator, and is a co-investigator on several funded team grants from the Canadian Institutes of Health Research. He has served as an independent director of the Helderleigh Foundation (Canada). He serves as a member of the Nutrition Science Advisory Committee to Health Canada (Government of Canada), and a co-opted member of the Scientific Advisory Committee on Nutrition (SACN) Subgroup on the Framework for the Evaluation of Evidence (Public Health England).” We note that one or more of the authors is affiliated with the funding organization, indicating the funder may have had some role in the design, data collection, analysis or preparation of your manuscript for publication; in other words, the funder played an indirect role through the participation of the co-authors. 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Please see our Supporting Information guidelines for more information: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/supporting-information. 5. Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments (if provided): concur with the reviewer. This study investigates the association between red meat intake and gestational diabetes mellitus (GDM) risk in two individual cohorts. However, no significant associations were observed in both cohorts. Some improvements can be made before being considered for publication, I list some suggestions and concerns below: Introduction 1. Please include some background information on the meat consumption pattern in Canada and other related regions 2. Line 97-99: “We conducted a prospective … age 18 – 40 years old.” Please revisit this statement as this study did not conduct an actual prospective study Methodology - The methods section requires more details to ensure clarity 1. Please justify the rationale for using the data from 2 cohorts. If I understand correctly from the methodology section, the FAMILY cohort consisted of multiple ethnic groups, including the South East Asian and South Asian. Please justify why only White Europeans were selected from FAMILY, why this study only included the findings from the FAMILY cohort as it consisted of multiple ethnic groups – and further comparison in the associations between red meat intake and GDM among ethnic groups can be made. Besides, there is a time difference between START (2011-2015) and FAMILY cohorts (2004-2009), whereby the eating patterns were somehow different. 2. Supplement figure 1: Please give more clear description regarding the flow of participants (Consort diagram), some parts of the box cannot be read. 3. Line 196: what type of intake? Total energy intake? Red meat intake? 4. I am wondering why the authors use logistic regression for the cohort study since relative risk (RR), and hazard ratio (HR) are more suitable for conducting statistical analysis. Furthermore, previous studies (lines 85 – 91 & lines 277 - 285) also used RR to perform the analysis. Suggest setting the “medium” group as the reference group. Please confirm and change the statistical analysis. 5. I am confused about how the tertiles (low, medium and high) are determined. Detailed grouping information needs to be provided (e.g., the cut-off for each group). Were those in the low red meat group indeed had low red meat intakes compared to the previous study or standard reference? 6. Line 208 – 216: Further clarification of the multivariate logistic regression is also required. Please explain how the sequence of covariates of the model was made Results 1. Tables: Please refer to the journal guideline on the presentation of tables. 2. Table 1: Please include n (%) for each category. 3. Table 2: Diet index (last row). Diet quality index (please use a standardized term throughout the entire manuscript)? If not, please include a description in the Methodology section 4. Suggest combining paragraphs 1 and 2 of the results and simplifying it 5. Line 240 – 247: Please revisit this paragraph, as it is confusing. 6. Line 248-259: Please revisit this paragraph, as it did not reflect all the findings in Table 2 Discussion 1. Line 270-272: This finding was not shown in the result section. 2. Line 295-299: Could the authors comment on why white Europeans had higher intakes of refined grains, and lower intakes of fiber (based on 299 a 2000 kcal diet) than South Asians, but had a lower prevalence of GDM? 3. Line 324: what is the cut-off for moderation spoused by most dietetic and health organizations, and are any references for [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This study investigates the association between red meat intake and gestational diabetes mellitus (GDM) risk in two individual cohorts. However, no significant associations were observed in both cohorts. Some improvements can be made before being considered for publication, I list some suggestions and concerns below: Introduction 1. Please include some background information on the meat consumption pattern in Canada and other related regions 2. Line 97-99: “We conducted a prospective … age 18 – 40 years old.” Please revisit this statement as this study did not conduct an actual prospective study Methodology - The methods section requires more details to ensure clarity 1. Please justify the rationale for using the data from 2 cohorts. If I understand correctly from the methodology section, the FAMILY cohort consisted of multiple ethnic groups, including the South East Asian and South Asian. Please justify why only White Europeans were selected from FAMILY, why this study only included the findings from the FAMILY cohort as it consisted of multiple ethnic groups – and further comparison in the associations between red meat intake and GDM among ethnic groups can be made. Besides, there is a time difference between START (2011-2015) and FAMILY cohorts (2004-2009), whereby the eating patterns were somehow different. 2. Supplement figure 1: Please give more clear description regarding the flow of participants (Consort diagram), some parts of the box cannot be read. 3. Line 196: what type of intake? Total energy intake? Red meat intake? 4. I am wondering why the authors use logistic regression for the cohort study since relative risk (RR), and hazard ratio (HR) are more suitable for conducting statistical analysis. Furthermore, previous studies (lines 85 – 91 & lines 277 - 285) also used RR to perform the analysis. Suggest setting the “medium” group as the reference group. Please confirm and change the statistical analysis. 5. I am confused about how the tertiles (low, medium and high) are determined. Detailed grouping information needs to be provided (e.g., the cut-off for each group). Were those in the low red meat group indeed had low red meat intakes compared to the previous study or standard reference? 6. Line 208 – 216: Further clarification of the multivariate logistic regression is also required. Please explain how the sequence of covariates of the model was made Results 1. Tables: Please refer to the journal guideline on the presentation of tables. 2. Table 1: Please include n (%) for each category. 3. Table 2: Diet index (last row). Diet quality index (please use a standardized term throughout the entire manuscript)? If not, please include a description in the Methodology section 4. Suggest combining paragraphs 1 and 2 of the results and simplifying it 5. Line 240 – 247: Please revisit this paragraph, as it is confusing. 6. Line 248-259: Please revisit this paragraph, as it did not reflect all the findings in Table 2 Discussion 1. Line 270-272: This finding was not shown in the result section. 2. Line 295-299: Could the authors comment on why white Europeans had higher intakes of refined grains, and lower intakes of fiber (based on 299 a 2000 kcal diet) than South Asians, but had a lower prevalence of GDM? 3. Line 324: what is the cut-off for moderation spoused by most dietetic and health organizations, and are any references for this? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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PONE-D-22-22041R1The association of red and processed meat with gestational diabetes mellitus: results from 2 Canadian birth cohort studiesPLOS ONE Dear Dr. De Souza Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 28 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols. Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, George Kuryan Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: i have mentioned all my comments in the attached comments document I haven't reviewed this manuscript earlier. i have read the response to the comments posted by the other reviewers and authors have tried to respond. I have concerns about tertile cutoffs for the meat intake, cohort data analysis, FFQ used in the 2 cohorts. i have mentioned all that in the attachment ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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The association of red and processed meat with gestational diabetes mellitus: results from 2 Canadian birth cohort studies PONE-D-22-22041R2 Dear Dr. de Souza, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. 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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: The authors have revised the introduction with better clarity of the cohorts chosen, the composition of the cohorts and reason for choosing the respective cohorts. The authors have clarified all the queries raised in the methods and statistical analysis section. They have described the best possible methods used for dietary assessment and analysis of data using traditional methods in nutrition epidemiology with its own limitations. Though this study has negative results, it will make significant contribution to tease out the inconsistent association found between red meat, processed meat, unprocessed meat and GDM. It can be considered for publication. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: Yes: Rita Isaac **********
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