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PONE-D-23-30928The effects of plantarflexor weakness and reduced tendon stiffness with aging on gait stabilityPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Franz, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. I request that you address the comments raised by both reviewers, in particular adding to/editing the presented literature where identified. A second major area which needs to be addressed are some of the issues raised related to quantification of tendon stiffness during passive rotation. I appreciate addressing this in full is ultimately a different study, but please acknowledge some of the potential measurement issues with this technique as used here. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 16 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This manuscript describes an interesting study into the relationships between plantarflexor strength (a modifiable risk factor) and Achilles tendon stiffnesson gait stability in an younger and aged populations. Overall the manuscript is very well constructed, I have a few suggestions listed below. 1) I would recommend introducing the current state of knowledge on Achilles tendon stiffness (and perhaps changes with age) in the introduction. 2) In the methods section (around line 102) it may be beneficial to include a range of ages instead of just a mean/stdev given the potential variability in an older adult cohort. 3) Were any repeatability/reliability studies conducted for the process of the ultrasound image collections and stiffness calculations? Both between investigators and between sessions? If so, please include information on the reliability of this approach. 4) Having seen the data figures, I am curious if your team has performed any assessments on the variability between subjects in each group? Are the data points for each perturbed step within an individual as variable as the data between subjects? Or are there any metrics that can inform the variability (sex, age, walking speed, strength, reported activity level, body size...)? 5) Were any analyses performed comparing male and female data? I see that the subject pool was divided evenly so I'm wondering if these groups were treated separately or together in statistical comparisons. Reviewer #2: PONE-D-23-30928 The effects of plantarflexor weakness and reduced tendon stiffness with aging on gait stability General comments The present study aimed to examine whether there is any association between triceps surae muscle (TS) strength as well as Achilles tendon (AT) stiffness and balance recovery responses following a slip-like perturbation in older and younger adults. The authors analysed the joint moments from maximal voluntary isometric plantarflexion contractions and the elongation of the GM MTJ during passive ankle joint rotation using an isokinetic device and simultaneous ultrasonography. AP and ML margin of stability as well as whole-body angular momentum were determined post slip-like perturbations on an instrumented treadmill using optical motion capture system. The main outcomes were that older compared to younger adults had no differences in muscle strength but revealed lower passive tendon stiffness. Among the older adults, lower muscle strength was associated with greater whole-body angular momentum following slip-like perturbations. Although the overall topic is interesting for the scientific community this manuscript is in parts weak, with several methodological limitations. Moreover, the overall topic of effects of TS MTU on balance recovery responses following a perturbation has been addressed already by several previous publications and therefore does perhaps not provide significant innovation in the current form. Below I have provided detailed feedback and listed my concerns related to the current manuscript: Specific Comments: 1. The results concerning the lack of age-related effects on TS muscle strength are not in accordance with most of the literature. In particular the reported average maximal joint moment values in younger adults seem to be quite low (less than 1 Nm/kg) and may be attributed to a lack of maximal muscle activation in the younger adults and / or to a potential misalignment between joint axis of rotation and rotational axis of the dynamometer during MVC which was not taken into account in the current study (see Arampatzis et al. Differences between measured and resultant joint moments during isometric contractions at the ankle joint. J Biomech 2005 38(4):885-92). 2. The overall topic of effects of TS MTU on balance recovery responses post perturbations has been addressed already by several previous publications e.g. a. Debelle et al. Role of Knee and Ankle Extensors' Muscle-Tendon Properties in Dynamic Balance Recovery from a Simulated Slip. Sensors (Basel). 2022 3;22(9):3483; b. Epro et al. Retention of gait stability improvements over 1.5 years in older adults: effects of perturbation exposure and triceps surae neuromuscular exercise. J Neurophysiol. 2018 1;119(6):2229-2240; c. Epro et al. Effects of triceps surae muscle strength and tendon stiffness on the reactive dynamic stability and adaptability of older female adults during perturbed walking. J Appl Physiol (1985). 2018 Jun 1;124(6):1541-1549; d. Karamanidis et al. Age-related deficit in dynamic stability control after forward falls is affected by muscle strength and tendon stiffness. J Electromyogr Kinesiol. 2008 Dec;18(6):980-9; e. Karamanidis and Arampatzis, Age-related degeneration in leg-extensor muscle-tendon units decreases recovery performance after a forward fall: compensation with running experience. Eur J Appl Physiol. 2007 99(1):73-85; f. Onambele et al. Calf muscle-tendon properties and postural balance in old age. J Appl Physiol 2006 100(6):2048-56; g. Debelle et al. Recovery From a Forward Falling Slip: Measurement of Dynamic Stability and Strength Requirements Using a Split-Belt Instrumented Treadmill. Front Sports Act Living. 2020 21;2:82. 3. Most of the above-mentioned manuscripts have not been included and referred to in the introduction which clearly weakens the current section. 4. Accordingly, several statements in the introduction section such as in line 64 “However, relations between age-related decreases in tendon stiffness and walking balance control are not well-detailed in literature” or line 74 “Clearly, the literature elucidating the relationship between muscle strength and balance recovery following a perturbation is generally focused on the entire lower limb” are not correct and require amendments. 5. Page 12, hypothesis #B: “Lesser Achilles tendon stiffness (kAT) in older adults delays the transmission between ΔMTU length and muscle stretch (i.e., ΔLm), thereby delaying afferent detection of the perturbation compared to younger adults.” The provided hypothesis cannot be addressed by the current experimental design. Moreover, I argue that other sensory feedback information are perhaps more relevant to recover balance and rapidly execute effective postural corrections following a perturbation e.g. the vestibular or the visual system. 6. Line 1154: “which were interpolated over the gait cycle.” I am not sure why the elongation of the tendon over the AT force assessed during passive angle joint angular rotation on an isokinetic device was interpolated over the gait cycle. 7. The assessment of AT stiffness during passive ankle joint rotation has several limitations. For instance, during passive joint moment measurements, the measured joint moments correspond to all structures surrounding the ankle joint including muscles, ligaments, and other tendons. This is perhaps relevant at more dorsiflexed joint angle configurations potentially affecting the calculated AT force. Given that the joint moments during passive rotation were approximately less than 10 Nm (considering an AT lever arm of around 4 cm) this is a significant limitation and cannot be ignored. 8. The length change of the AT during passive ankle joint rotation as ssessed by assuming a straight line (distance between GM MTJ and AT insertion to the calcaneus) neglecting any effects of AT curvature on tendon length changes. This can significantly affect the calculated force-length relationship of the tendon. 9. Tendon resting length as well as AT lever arm affects tendon elongation during passive joint angular rotation and hence could potentially affect subject group comparison and correlation analysis. Both variables were not considered in the current approach. 10. The authors often state that they have assessed balance responses following gait perturbations. To provide more clarity, I suggest changing this to slip-like perturbations throughout the manuscript. 11. Several statements concerning previous findings and citations are wrong e.g. a. Page 21: Mademli and Arampatzis did not assess MoS in the ML direction during walking (they determined AP MOS); b. Page 22: Epro et al. did not assess slip-like perturbations (the authors analysed tripping). c. Page 22: In addition, the statement “Those authors found that, following slip-like balance perturbations, stronger older women had higher kAT but did not differ in MoSAnt from weaker older women.” is not correct as weaker adults had a lower MoS during the recovery steps following first trip perturbation. 12. Description of figure 3 and 5: “… mediolateral (MoSLat) and anteroposterior (MoSLat) direction margins of stability….” and “relative mediolateral (ΔMoSLat) and anteroposterior (ΔMoSLat) direction margins of stability…”. Anteroposterior MoS is referred as MOSLat hence not correct. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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