Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMarch 25, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-11592Prevalence of chronic kidney disease among young people living with HIV in Sub Saharan Africa: A systematic review and meta-analysis.PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Nasuuna, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 11 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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HAW is funded by the UK Medical Research Council (MRC) and the UK Department for International Development (DFID) under the MRC/DFID Concordat agreement (Grant Ref: MR/R010161/1). EN, Doctoral Research Fellow, NIHR131273 is funded by the NIHR for this research project. The views expressed in this publication are those of the authors and not necessarily those of the NIHR, NHS or the UK Department of Health and Social Care.” We note that you have provided funding information that is not currently declared in your Funding Statement. However, funding information should not appear in the Acknowledgments section or other areas of your manuscript. We will only publish funding information present in the Funding Statement section of the online submission form. Please remove any funding-related text from the manuscript and let us know how you would like to update your Funding Statement. Currently, your Funding Statement reads as follows: “The author(s) received no specific funding for this work.” Please include your amended statements within your cover letter; we will change the online submission form on your behalf. Additional Editor Comments: 1. The authors should pay attention to the poor formatting of all in-text citations. Please ensure proport formatting using the PLOS ONE citation style. 2. The primary weakness of this manuscript is the authors' failure to use a standard definition for CKD as prescribed by KDIGO. The included studies utilized varying definitions of kidney dysfunction from dipstick proteinuria of at least +1, albumin-creatinine ratio and varying cut-off of eGFR. Also, it appears the cross-sectional studies reported single measures of eGFR and/or ACR. This makes it possible that individuals with AKI were included in this analysis and wrongly classified as CKD. The authors can circumvent this by including a sub-group meta-analysis of studies that employed the strict KDIGO definition of CKD. 3. Please report a sub-group analysis comparing the kidney dysfunction prevalence in the ARV-naive compared to the ARV-exposed population. 4. 13/16 (81.3%) and not the reported 86.7% of studies were cross-sectional. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Partly Reviewer #3: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The definition of CKD used lacked standardization, hence the likelihood for inclusion of non-CKD and AKI cases. Also why was the study that used UNGAL included, as it doesn't differentiate CKD from AKI. Reviewer #2: All the included articles in this study did not use the standard definition of CKD. This makes the validity of the study doubtful based on the primary objective of the study. I also acknowledged that this was stated as a limitation. The authors may consider to include only articles that used the standard definition of CKD or may change the description of their study population from CKD to a term that will reflect the population included in this study which is not strictly CKD population Reviewer #3: The topic is challenging but should using the standard CKD definition eGFR < 60 ml/min/1.73m with marker of kidney damage for 3 months or more to choose the eligible studies. line 35 wrong YPHLIV abbreviation, line 43 wrong %, line 80 phosphaturia not a marker and need to rewrite the whole sentence in proper way. line 83 should include Africa %. line 90 need to rewrite the whole sentence in proper way. line 98 mention the extend of higher risk (fold). box 1 use the original reference of KDIGO. line 190 IOM Abb. came late. line 195 "fulfilled the inclusion criteria" wrongly used as the 802 not fulfilled the criteria. line 253 using or not proper the same Abb. Table 2 title sample size (4th sector) is wrong. line 299 the funnel plot shows Asymmetry and Egger test is not sig. should use the Pegg test. line 352 albumin not used to diagnose CKD should be Albuminuria. In the whole manuscript there are Invalid: - format of the references - full stop after the Headings - using comma in 95% CI range ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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PONE-D-24-11592R1Prevalence of chronic kidney disease among young people living with HIV in Sub Saharan Africa: A systematic review and meta-analysis.PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Nasuuna, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The author's response to the reviewer's comments is noted. The limitations of this manuscript are also well noted. Please do the following and re-submit the manuscript. 1. Please remove the urinary NGAL study from the list of articles included, as suggested by one of the reviewers. Using an NGAL study simultaneously with creatinine-based GFR does not appear appropriate. Repeat the analysis without the NGAL study. Of course, the NGAL study can be referenced in the discussion section while highlighting the need for early CKD diagnosis. 2. Kindly convert Appendix 4 from EXCEL to MS Word format and resubmit. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 12 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols. Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Udeme Ekpenyong Ekrikpo, MBBS PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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Prevalence of chronic kidney disease among young people living with HIV in Sub Saharan Africa: A systematic review and meta-analysis. PONE-D-24-11592R2 Dear Dr. Nasuuna We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Udeme Ekpenyong Ekrikpo, MBBS PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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