We sincerely appreciate the editor's very kind and careful examination of our paper.
The reviewers’ comments are very right and helpful to us. We are very grateful to
the reviewers for their hard work and the important comments for improving the quality
of our article.
We have studied all the comments and made revisions very carefully. The following
is an outline of the revisions that we have made.
Response to Editor
1. You need state clearly the contributions of the paper. For example, "Consequently,
the current paper seeks to make the following contributions to the existing literature.
First,…, Second,…., Third, …, Fourth,… and so on". The description of the contribution
needs to be more forensic, needs to be more focussed.
1. We are very grateful to the editor for their suggestions and related reviews. Based
on the editor's suggestions, we have revised and improved the contributions of the
paper as follows (the modified content is at the end of the introduction):
Consequently, the current paper seeks to make the following contributions to the existing
literature. Firstly, the study deepens the understanding of mixed ownership reform,
revealing its mechanisms and effects in enhancing the governance efficiency of SOEs.
First, we add to the literature documenting the economic benefits of non-state shareholder
governance in SOEs. Several recent studies have examined the impacts of non-state
shareholder governance on innovative decision-making (Wang et al., 2021), operating
performance (Guan et al., 2021), and technology innovation (Zhang et al., 2020). Research
on non-state shareholder governance and governance level of SOE, what is not been
thoroughly examined in detail thus far are the reasons for such outcomes. In addition,
although there are many literatures on the level of corporate governance, most of
them study corporate governance as a pre-variable (Ammann et al., 2011; Fu and Hong,
2018; Chu et al., 2019). Taking Zhejiang enterprises as the research object, Du et
al. (2021) analyzed the governance effect evaluation of the mixed ownership reform,
but there is insufficient research on the improvement path of its governance capacity.
We take corporate governance level as a post-variable It is very important in SOE
to explore the impact of non-state shareholder governance on governance level. We
complement these studies by providing evidence that non-state shareholder governance
promotes governance level of SOE.
Further, we identify the mechanisms of non-state shareholders on governance level
from the perspective of board resolutions. One of the most critical aspects of our
results is that, in addition to highlighting the influence of non-state shareholder
governance on governance level, we also represent indirect evidence of the influence
of non-state shareholder governance and board resolutions on governance level of SOE.
Thus, our results highlight how non-state shareholder governance interacts with board
resolutions and the governance level.
Secondly, by means of policy measures, the study provides empirical support for heterogeneous
shareholder governance, bridging the gap between theory and practice. Second, we
place party organization governance within the framework of non-state shareholder
governance and SOE governance. Party organization and mixed ownership reform are unique
systems of Chinese SOE, and most of the relevant literature studies them separately.
As important stakeholders, whether important members of the party organization and
non-state shareholders/directors can exert the governance effect of "1+1>2" remains
to be tested. Therefore, combined with the mixed ownership reform system, we incorporate
the party organization into the analytical framework of corporate governance at the
micro level of SOE, explore the relationship between non-state shareholders and party
organization governance, and provide theoretical and empirical support for it.
Thirdly, it highlights the significance of governance boundaries, emphasizing the
correlation between party organization governance and governance by non-state shareholders.
Third, our findings have important implications for SOE to improve their governance
capabilities. In terms of direct effects, our evidence shows that different shareholders
or directors from different types of companies can improve the governance level of
SOE and be more active in the board resolution process. After introducing the variable
of party organization governance, we found that when there are important members of
the party organization on the board of directors, the positive impact of non-state
shareholder governance on the governance level of SOE is suppressed. If SOEs want
to further improve the level of governance, one strategy may be to clarify the boundaries
of party organizations’ governance rights, responsibilities, and interests, to make
them legal, and to jointly exert the governance effects of mixed ownership reform
and party organizations.
Lastly, the study puts forth concrete reform recommendations, offering targeted guidance
for mixed ownership reform and promoting the enhancement of governance levels in state-owned
enterprises. In summary, this research holds profound significance in advancing theoretical
understanding, providing empirical support, and offering specific recommendations
for practical implementation.
2. Highlight their economic and research and policy implications. In the discussion
of the results please focus on the novel findings and insights vis-à-vis the existing
literature.
2. Many thanks to reviewer for his/her attention to our work and constructive advice.
This comment is very important for readers to understand our innovation of this article.
We emphasized the policy impact of research on the economy. And when discussing the
results, the focus was on novel findings and insights relative to existing literature.
The details are as follows (The modified content in this section is integrated with
the “innovative points” and “practical implications” of the main text):
Economic implications:
Enhancing the Governance Effectiveness of SOEs. We emphasize the positive impact of
non-state shareholder governance on the governance level of state-owned enterprises,
offering the potential for increased economic vitality and market competitiveness.
By reinforcing the role of board resolutions, the governance capacity of non-state
shareholders has been proven to enhance the overall governance quality of state-owned
enterprises, providing a more effective decision-making mechanism for business development.
Facilitating Mixed Ownership Reform. We underscore the significance of non-state shareholder
governance in the context of mixed ownership reform, providing guidance for the introduction
of more market-oriented mechanisms and attracting social capital in state-owned enterprises.
This is poised to accelerate the progress of mixed ownership reform, encouraging greater
involvement of non-state shareholders in corporate governance. Consequently, this
momentum propels state-owned enterprises towards a more market-oriented operational
framework.
Policy implications:
Strengthening Reform of Corporate Governance Mechanisms. Addressing state-owned enterprises,
we advocate for the enhancement of corporate governance mechanisms, ensuring that
non-state shareholders or directors possess substantive power and a meaningful voice
in corporate decision-making. This serves as guidance for government authorities striving
to advance reforms and optimize governance in state-owned enterprises, emphasizing
the need to establish governance mechanisms capable of balancing the interests of
all stakeholders.
Optimizing the Role of Party Organization Governance. The conclusion highlights the
moderating role of party organization governance in board resolutions, offering insights
for policymakers. The government should clearly define the role of party organizations
in both market and non-market strategic decisions within enterprises. Measures should
be implemented to ensure their reasonable contribution throughout the entire governance
process, without hindering the participation of non-state shareholders.
New discoveries and insights relative to existing literature:
The study reveals the mediating role of board resolutions in understanding the impact
mechanism of non-state shareholder governance on state-owned enterprises. It underscores
the critical function of board resolutions in the mediation process. We contend that
a more in-depth exploration of the actual decision-making process of the board is
essential to draw accurate conclusions from the internal logic and causal relationships.
Existing literature predominantly focuses on the direct effects of non-state shareholder
governance from the perspectives of equity structure and board composition, lacking
a nuanced examination of the micro-level decision-making processes in non-state shareholder
governance.
Regulatory Effects of Party Organization Governance. By introducing party organization
governance as a boundary condition in the study, it reveals the moderating effects
of party organizations on the impact of non-state shareholder governance. This discovery,
relatively underexplored in existing literature, provides a new dimension for a deeper
understanding of the governance framework within state-owned enterprises.
Response to Reviewer 1
1. The abstract should clearly explain the research motivation, content, methods,
conclusions, and significance of the article. Please modify and improve the abstract.
1. We are very grateful to the reviewers for their suggestions and related reviews.
Based on the reviewer's suggestions, we have revised and improved the abstract as
follows:
With an increasing number of heterogeneous shareholders participating in corporate
governance in reality, the assumption of shareholder homogeneity in agency theory
is gradually relaxing in the modern field of corporate governance. The policy of mixed
ownership reform in China provides empirical evidence for studying heterogeneous shareholder
governance. To fully understand the governance effects of non-state shareholders,
we employ the ownership proportion held by non-state shareholders among the top ten
shareholders and the appointment of directors as measures for non-state shareholder
governance. Using a panel fixed-effect model from the perspective of state-owned enterprise
(SOEs) party organizations, we examine the impact of non-state shareholder governance
on the governance level of state-owned enterprises. The study reveals that non-state
shareholder governance positively affects the governance level of SOEs, with board
resolutions playing a crucial role in this relationship. However, when important party
members serve as directors, the governance effect of non-state shareholders becomes
less significant. Based on the above research findings, we recommend further refining
corporate governance measures for state-owned enterprises in the context of mixed
ownership reform. It is advisable to optimize the governance structure of party organizations,
clarify the boundaries between non-state shareholder governance and party organization
governance, and advance reforms along the Pareto improvement path. This will contribute
to the establishment of a distinctive corporate governance system for state-owned
enterprises in China.
2. From the hypothesis, it can be seen that the author divides the governance of non-state-owned
shareholders into shareholding structure and board structure, and proposes hypotheses
separately from two aspects. However, we do not see the logical differences in the
impact of non-state-owned shareholders' shareholding and appointing directors on the
corporate governance level in this section, which are explained from reducing agency
costs, exerting supervision and balance. It is recommended to explore the impact paths
of shareholding structure and board structure on the corporate governance level in
a targeted manner. The current analysis is not sufficient.
2. Many thanks to the reviewers for their suggestions. We have added the difference
in the impact of non-state-owned shareholder shareholding and the appointment of directors
on corporate governance level in the "Theoretical Analysis and Research Hypotheses"
section based on the suggestion. Details as follows (The modified content is in the
“Theoretical analysis and research hypothesis” section):
Shareholding Structure:
Stakeholder theory suggests that the management activities of a company's business
managers balance the interest requirements of each stakeholder in a comprehensive
manner (Aguinis and Glavas, 2012). In the internal environment of enterprises, the
participation of heterogeneous equity subjects in corporate decision-making can expand
the set of opportunities for decision-making. Moreover, it also contributes to the
specialization of decision-making and capital and risk-taking, which is conducive
to forming a democratic and scientific decision-making mechanism and improving corporate
risk control (Wang et al., 2023). As Bennedsen and Wolfenzon (2001) note, when there
are multiple heterogeneous shareholders in a company, they can make the right business
decisions and strengthen corporate governance capabilities.
Board Structure:
Based on upper echelons theory, managerial characteristics influence strategic choices
of companies (Hambrick and Mason, 1984). Managers with different background traits
will have different values and personal perceptions. These factors will directly influence
their communication and cooperation at work, indirectly influencing the related decisions
and, consequently, the company's behavior. Meanwhile, resource dependence theory notes
that board composition is essential to the board's ability to provide governance to
the company (Thompson and Alleyne, 2023). As Pfeffer (1972) considers, the composition
of the board of directors is not random but a logical response to the company's internal
environment.
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A review and research agenda”. Journal of management, vol.38, no.4, pp. 932-968, 2012.
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capital structure decision: A mechanism test from the opportunistic behavior of management”.
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its top managers”, Academy of management review, vol.9, no.2, pp. 193-206, 1984.
Thompson R M, Alleyne P. Role of a board of directors and corporate governance in
a state-owned enterprise”. Corporate Governance: The International Journal of Business
in Society, vol.23, no.3, pp. 478-492, 2023.
Pfeffer, J., “Merger as a response to organizational interdependence”, Administrative
science quarterly, pp. 382-394, 1972.
3. Why is the sample limited to state-owned manufacturing enterprises in the competitive
field? Many studies on non-state-owned shareholder governance are based on a full
sample, and the article does not explain the reasons for selecting the sample. The
research background discussed in the introduction and the subsequent hypothesis proposed
did not focus on specific samples.
3. We are very grateful to the reviewer for reading our manuscript carefully and very
useful modification advice. We have added relevant content in the introduction and
sample sections respectively. Details as follows:
Introduction
In 2015, the Central Committee of the Communist Party of China (CPC) and the State
Council jointly issued the "Guiding Opinions on Deepening the Reform of State-Owned
Enterprises." This document outlined a framework for defining functions, categorizing,
and progressively implementing reforms in state-owned enterprises (SOEs). The suggested
approach involved categorizing SOEs into competitive and non-competitive types, with
non-competitive entities further classified as natural monopolies or serving public
welfare goals. Non-competitive SOEs primarily align with national policy objectives.
Competitive SOEs, on the other hand, prioritize market profitability goals. Considering
relevant theories in traditional corporate governance, our research focuses on competitive
state-owned enterprises.
The Sample
Taking into account that non-competitive state-owned enterprises are found in industries
such as mining, electricity, gas, water production and supply, construction, transportation,
warehousing, and postal services, our research primarily focuses on the manufacturing
sector.
4. It is recommended to place the empirical model after the "Variable Selection"
section, rather than in the empirical results section.
4. We are very grateful for the reviewer's suggestion. Based on the reviewer's suggestion,
we placed the empirical model after the variable selection section.
5. There are certain issues with the empirical testing of this article. The "Theoretical
analysis and research hypothesis" section elaborates on the impact of shareholding
structure and board structure, and suggests testing both aspects simultaneously in
the "Baseline regression results" section, rather than focusing solely on shareholding
structure.
5. We are very grateful for the questions raised by the reviewer. According to the
reviewer's critical suggestions, we included the impact of board structure in the
"Baseline regression results" section. The details are as follows:
When the board structure is used as an independent variable, the coefficient pai_nsta
is significantly positive. This means that non-state-owned directors can help improve
the governance level of state-owned enterprises. Hypothesis H1B is verified.
Table 3: Shareholding structure and corporate governance level
corporate governance level: gover
1.OLS 2.RE 3.FE 4.Cluster 1.OLS 2.RE 3.FE 4.Cluster
nsta
0.274***
(7.41) 0.253***
(6.00) 0.174***
(3.28) 0.253***
(3.14)
pai_nsta 0.262***
(3.49) 0.241***
(2.72) 0.232**
(2.16) 0.241**
(2.11)
size -0.142***
(-16.83) -0.119***
(-8.66) -0.069***
(-3.39) -0.119***
(-6.03) -0.004
(-1.37) -0.005
(-1.00) 0.004
(0.43) -0.005
(-1.10)
manage 0.129
(1.26) 0.196
(1.55) 0.122
(0.48) 0.196
(1.03) 0.162
(1.60) 0.216*
(1.73) 0.146
(0.58) 0.216
(1.18)
lev 0.0432
(0.70) -0.0748
(-1.04) -0.147*
(-1.79) -0.0748
(-0.79) 0.007
(0.37) 0.019
(0.70) 0.046
(1.30) 0.019
(0.59)
roa -1.542***
(-6.95) -0.665***
(-3.54) -0.487**
(-2.49) -0.665***
(-2.99) -0.123*
(-1.80) -0.166**
(-2.17) -0.149*
(-1.77) -0.166*
(-1.78)
cfo -0.0661
(-0.44) -0.104
(-0.91) -0.0509
(-0.43) -0.104
(-0.77) 0.109**
(2.38) 0.121**
(2.56) 0.125**
(2.48) 0.121*
(1.68)
grow 0.006
(0.49) -0.007
(-0.59) -0.021
(-1.60) -0.007
(-0.55) 0.006
(0.51) -0.007
(-0.59) -0.022
(-1.64) -0.007
(-0.54)
expend -0.0802
(-1.19) -0.117
(-1.52) -0.154*
(-1.82) -0.117
(-1.63) -0.0798
(-1.19) -0.116
(-1.50) -0.154*
(-1.82) -0.116
(-1.60)
_cons 2.725***
(8.15) 2.139***
(6.08) 1.089**
(2.25) 2.139***
(4.10) -0.010
(-0.08) 0.065
(0.46) -0.140
(-0.65) 0.065
(0.60)
year & firm YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES
N 4101 4101 4101 4101 4101 4101 4101 4101
R2 0.7575 0.6974 0.4909 0.5487 0.5813 0.4778 0.4349 0.4754
Table 4: Instrumental variable approach
corporate governance level: gover
1st-stage 2nd-stage 1st-stage 2nd-stage
nsta gover pai_nsta gover
nsta 0.081***
(4.37)
meannsta 0.318***
(6.57) 0.069***
(3.98)
0.147***
(4.20)
com_port 0.291***
(3.96) 0.121***
(5.37)
_cons 0.157***
(3.46) 3.710***
(4.35) 0.284***
(5.68) 5.980***
(3.72)
controls YES YES YES YES
year & firm YES YES YES YES
N 4101 4101 4101 4101
R2 0.025 0.473
First stage F test 157.25*** 158.17***
Sargan statistic(p-value) 0.2154 0.2685
6. The limitations of the research and future research directions should be explained
in the conclusion of the article.
6. We are very grateful for the questions raised by the reviewer. According to the
reviewer's critical suggestions, we supplemented the limitations of our research and
future research directions. The details are as follows (The modified content is in
the “Conclusions and implications” section):
This study has several limitations. Firstly, it primarily focuses on the mixed ownership
reform of Chinese state-owned enterprises, thus limiting the generalizability of the
conclusions to other regions. Secondly, the research relies predominantly on quantitative
methods and lacks a diverse methodological approach, such as qualitative studies and
case analyses, potentially hindering a comprehensive understanding of the impact mechanisms
of non-state shareholder governance. Additionally, the study's timeframe extends only
until 2019, failing to capture the dynamic processes of the mixed ownership reform
comprehensively and potentially overlooking recent impacts of governance reforms.
Future research can explore several directions: Firstly, there is a need to deepen
the study of governance mechanisms, with a focus on understanding the specific impact
of non-state shareholders on the operational aspects of governance mechanisms within
state-owned enterprises. Secondly, investigating the variations in the governance
effectiveness of non-state shareholders across different industries and company sizes
would provide valuable insights. Thirdly, conducting more longitudinal studies to
track the long-term effects of governance reforms would enhance our understanding
of the sustained impact of these reforms. Lastly, extending the scope of research
to include other countries and comparing governance models in different nations would
offer comparative insights into state-owned enterprise reforms globally. By addressing
these research avenues, future studies can achieve a more comprehensive understanding
of the impact of mixed ownership reforms on the governance of state-owned enterprises,
providing more targeted recommendations and policy support.
Response to Reviewer 2
1. Problem statement of the study must be supported by most recent literature.
1. We are very grateful for the questions raised by the reviewer. According to the
reviewer's critical suggestions, we have improved the research question and added
support from relevant literature (The modified content is in the “Introduction” section).
The heterogeneous ownership structure has gradually relaxed assumptions in existing
corporate governance policies and practices based on traditional theories. With different
resource endowments and governance objectives, it ultimately affects a firm's financial
behavior and operational performance (Aghion et al., 2013). Governance by non-state
shareholders falls under the category of heterogeneous shareholder governance, and
currently, there is limited theoretical research in the field of corporate governance
regarding heterogeneous shareholder governance behavior (Connelly et al., 2016). For
instance, Williams and Ryan (2007) found that greater disagreements among heterogeneous
shareholders may pose challenges to executive performance evaluation and monitoring.
Additionally, the presence of heterogeneous shareholders makes it difficult to balance
the diverse interests of company shareholders, leading management to prioritize the
interests of shareholders whose preferences and risk tolerances align more closely
with their own. Similarly, Goranova and Ryan (2022) emphasize that executives' vested
interests do not necessarily aggregate and balance the interests of heterogeneous
shareholders but rather prioritize the interests of those shareholders whose interests
align more closely with their own. Therefore, addressing issues related to heterogeneous
shareholder governance is of utmost importance.
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consequences of top management-to-worker pay dispersion”. Journal of Management, vol.42,
no.4, pp.862-885, 2016.
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corporate ownership structures.” Business Ethics Quarterly, vol.17,no.4, pp.669-688,2007.
Goranova M, Ryan L.-V., “The corporate objective revisited: the shareholder perspective.”
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2. Significance of study must be specified in introduction section.
2. We are very grateful for the questions raised by the reviewer. According to the
reviewer's critical suggestions, we have improved the Significance of study in introduction
section. Specifically, as follows (The modified content is integrated into the innovation
points):
Firstly, the study deepens the understanding of mixed ownership reform, revealing
its mechanisms and effects in enhancing the governance efficiency of SOEs. We add
to the literature documenting the economic benefits of non-state shareholder governance
in SOEs. Several recent studies have examined the impacts of non-state shareholder
governance on innovative decision-making (Wang et al., 2021), operating performance
(Guan et al., 2021), and technology innovation (Zhang et al., 2020). Research on non-state
shareholder governance and governance level of SOE, what is not been thoroughly examined
in detail thus far are the reasons for such outcomes. In addition, although there
are many literatures on the level of corporate governance, most of them study corporate
governance as a pre-variable (Ammann et al., 2011; Fu and Hong, 2018; Chu et al.,
2019). Taking Zhejiang enterprises as the research object, Du et al. (2021) analyzed
the governance effect evaluation of the mixed ownership reform, but there is insufficient
research on the improvement path of its governance capacity. We take corporate governance
level as a post-variable It is very important in SOE to explore the impact of non-state
shareholder governance on governance level. We complement these studies by providing
evidence that non-state shareholder governance promotes governance level of SOE.
Further, we identify the mechanisms of non-state shareholders on governance level
from the perspective of board resolutions. One of the most critical aspects of our
results is that, in addition to highlighting the influence of non-state shareholder
governance on governance level, we also represent indirect evidence of the influence
of non-state shareholder governance and board resolutions on governance level of SOE.
Thus, our results highlight how non-state shareholder governance interacts with board
resolutions and the governance level.
Secondly, by means of policy measures, the study provides empirical support for heterogeneous
shareholder governance, bridging the gap between theory and practice. We place party
organization governance within the framework of non-state shareholder governance and
SOE governance. Party organization and mixed ownership reform are unique systems of
Chinese SOE, and most of the relevant literature studies them separately. As important
stakeholders, whether important members of the party organization and non-state shareholders/directors
can exert the governance effect of "1+1>2" remains to be tested. Therefore, combined
with the mixed ownership reform system, we incorporate the party organization into
the analytical framework of corporate governance at the micro level of SOE, explore
the relationship between non-state shareholders and party organization governance,
and provide theoretical and empirical support for it.
Thirdly, it highlights the significance of governance boundaries, emphasizing the
correlation between party organization governance and governance by non-state shareholders.
In terms of direct effects, our evidence shows that different shareholders or directors
from different types of companies can improve the governance level of SOE and be more
active in the board resolution process. After introducing the variable of party organization
governance, we found that when there are important members of the party organization
on the board of directors, the positive impact of non-state shareholder governance
on the governance level of SOE is suppressed. If SOEs want to further improve the
level of governance, one strategy may be to clarify the boundaries of party organizations’
governance rights, responsibilities, and interests, to make them legal, and to jointly
exert the governance effects of mixed ownership reform and party organizations.
Lastly, the study puts forth concrete reform recommendations, offering targeted guidance
for mixed ownership reform and promoting the enhancement of governance levels in state-owned
enterprises. In summary, this research holds profound significance in advancing theoretical
understanding, providing empirical support, and offering specific recommendations
for practical implementation.
3. Most recent citations must be provided in literature section. It was difficult
to find any citation from 2022 and 2023, authors are suggested to add literature from
2022 and 2023 to support research objectives and research hypothesis.
3. We are very grateful for the questions raised by the reviewer. According to the
reviewer's critical suggestions, we have added relevant literature to support the
research objectives and hypotheses:
Recent years witnessed a surge in heterogeneous shareholder governance of firms on
a world-wide scale. Goranova and Ryan (2022) argues that participation of heterogeneous
shareholders is a preferred institutional model for the development of firms towards
good discovery. Under China's SOE reform system, more and more heterogeneous shareholders
are involved in the management and governance of SOEs (Ma and Huang, 2023; Qiao et
al., 2023; He et al., 2023). Studies find that firms supervised or managed by shareholders
or boards with heterogeneous backgrounds tend to the good governance characteristics
(Wang et al., 2023). They are fewer agency costs (Wang et al., 2021), are more technological
innovations (Xu et al., 2023), and are more efficient with investments (Fan et al.,
2022). Among the reasons mentioned is that heterogeneous shareholders or directors
improve corporate governance and management practice. This phenomenon is because the
heterogeneous shareholder or director mechanism has the characteristics of flexibility,
independent decision-making, market sensitivity, cost control, and perfect management.
Building on this evidence, we examine the impact of non-state shareholder governance
on the governance level of SOEs.
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4. A short review of governance policies implemented in China must be explained to
provide readers an insight about it.
4. We are very grateful for the questions raised by the reviewer. According to the
reviewer's critical suggestions, We reviewed relevant policies in China in introduction
section:
In 2013, the Third Plenary Session of the Eighteenth Central Committee proposed actively
promoting the integration of heterogeneous capital, strengthening collaborative cooperation,
and further emphasizing the importance of mixed ownership. This led to the development
of more enterprises as mixed ownership entities with the convergence of heterogeneous
capital. As the top-level document for state-owned enterprise reform, in 2015, specific
reform measures were put forward by the Central Committee of the Communist Party of
China and the State Council regarding how state-owned enterprises should undergo mixed
ownership reform ("Guiding Opinions on Deepening the Reform of State-Owned Enterprises").
This provided favorable conditions for the practical implementation of mixed ownership
reform. In October 2016, General Secretary Xi Jinping emphasized at the National Party
Building Work Conference for State-Owned Enterprises, "Adhering to the Party's leadership
over state-owned enterprises is a major political principle that must be consistently
followed. Establishing a modern enterprise system is the direction of state-owned
enterprise reform and must also be consistently followed." He specifically highlighted
the fundamental principle of "integrating the Party's leadership into every aspect
of corporate governance, embedding the enterprise party organization into the corporate
governance structure." After years of state-owned enterprise reform, in 2023, the
Central Committee of the Communist Party of China issued the "Comprehensive Implementation
of State-Owned Enterprise Reform and Deepening Enhancement Action," emphasizing the
importance of "the significant discourse on the reform and development of state-owned
enterprises and Party building as a primary task." It is evident that governance by
non-state shareholders and party organization governance remains a focal issue in
the current field of corporate governance in China. Simultaneously, guided by stakeholder
theory, China's state-owned enterprise reform policies provide a valuable perspective
for the traditional corporate governance domain.
5. All variables of the study should be further explained in a table to make it more
convenient for readers to understand study variables.
5. We are very grateful for the questions raised by the reviewer. According to the
reviewer's critical suggestions, we further explained in a table to make it more convenient
for readers to understand study variables.
Table 1: Variable definitions
Variable Symbol Definition
Governance level of SOE gover Based on the research of Zhou et al. (2020), we use
the principal component analysis method to construct comprehensive indicators to measure
the governance level of state-owned enterprises from three aspects (7 variables):
supervision (proportion of independent directors, size of the board of directors,
institutional shareholding ratio and equity balance), incentive (proportion of executive
compensation and executive shareholding), and decision-making (whether the chairman
and the general manager have two functions in one)
Non-state shareholder governance nsta Ratio of non-state shareholders among the top
ten shareholders
pai_nsta Natural logarithm of one plus the number of board members appointed by non-state
shareholders
Board resolution behavior dissent If the SOE has board objections in the annual board
resolution announcement, it will be 1, otherwise it will be 0
Party organization governance party If the secretary or deputy secretary of the party
committee serves as a member of the board of directors (chairman, vice chairman or
director), it is defined as 1; otherwise, it is 0.
firm size size Natural logarithm of the book value of total assets at the end of the
year
management's shareholding manage Number of shares held by management/total share capital
of the company
assets and liabilities lev The ratio of total liabilities to total assets
return on assets ratio roa Ratio of net cash flows from operating activities to total
assets
net cash flow cfo Net cash flow from operating activities/total assets
business growth grow operating income growth rate
capital expenditures expend Capital Expenditure/Total Assets
6. Sampling technique for sample selection is missing in research methodology section.
Provide sampling technique with justification.
6. We are very grateful for the questions raised by the reviewer. According to the
reviewer's critical suggestions, we have provided a reasonable sampling technique,
the PSM method, in the "robustness testing" section. Specifically, as follows:
As a robustness check, we re-run our model a propensity score matched sample to mitigate
this concern. Specifically, we use logit model to regress our indicator variable board
governance (pai_nsta) on control variables in model (1) and estimate the propensity
score that a SOE have a board member with non-state background. Secondly, we match
each treatment SOE ( non-state background =1) with a control SOE ( non-state background
=0) with the closest propensity score.
7. Data for study is collected from 2009 to 2019. It is suggested to increase the
sample time period upto 2022 to make the study more authentic.
7. We sincerely appreciate the questions raised by the reviewers. The suggestions
provided by the reviewers are highly practical for our research. Although we have
commenced the process of compiling and summarizing relevant data from 2019 to 2023,
the collection and integration of data on non-state shareholders from company annual
reports, particularly their proportions among the top ten shareholders and the appointment
of non-state shareholder-appointed directors, is a labor-intensive task that cannot
be completed in the short term. We acknowledge the challenge of updating our data,
as indicated in the "Limitations and Future Research Directions" section, and we are
committed to addressing this issue in our future research. Once again, we express
our gratitude to the reviewers for their valuable suggestions that will undoubtedly
enhance the quality of our study.
8. Statistical techniques used in the study must be explained in research methodology
section along with all required quantitative models or equations.
8. We are very grateful for the questions raised by the reviewer. According to the
reviewer's critical suggestions, we have provided an explanation:
Using a panel fixed effects model. ...Additionally, we control firm fixed effects,
year fixed effects, The coefficient of interest is α1. We expect the coefficient to
be positive, implying that non-state shareholder governance can help improve the governance
level of SOEs.
9. All results in data analysis section must be supported by similar studies carried
out in China or in the Asian region.
9. We are very grateful for the questions raised by the reviewer. According to the
reviewer's critical suggestions, we have added relevant literature to support our
research based on all the results of data analysis.
The descriptive statistics of the remaining control variables are generally consistent
with existing studies (Zhou et al., 2020; Qin and Fuan, 2021).
Qin H.-L., Fuan S.-C., “Mixed reform of state-owned enterprises, governance structure
and cash dividends - from the perspective of corporate governance”. Review of Investment
Studies, vol.40, no.11, pp. 37-58, 2021.
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