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Original SubmissionJanuary 16, 2024
Decision Letter - Shawky M Aboelhadid, Editor

PONE-D-24-02067Effect of environmental variables on the abundance of Amblyomma ticks, potential vectors of Rickettsia parkeri in central BrazilPLOS ONE

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously?

Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: The paper is well written. The methods were sufficient to answer the questions and the discussion is in accordance with the results obtained.

I have just one comment:

Lines. 283-284. “...Surprisingly, the presence or vestige of capybaras showed no effect on the number of ticks of all life stages...”

The authors completely ignored the fact that Lake Paranoá (in Brasília) is surrounded by a highly urbanized matrix. Anyone who reads the manuscript and doesn't know Brasília might even think that the study was carried out on the edge of a peri-urban lake, which is definitely not the case. The lack of relationship between the number of capybaras and the abundance of ticks in the sampled region is most likely related to urbanization. Most likely, the number of ticks may be related more to the number of domestic animals (especially dogs and cats) than specifically to capybaras. It is true that capybaras are the primary hosts of A. dubitatum, however, the same cannot be said for A. sculptum. It has been demonstrated that A. sculptum also parasitizes dogs and cats, including ticks infected with Rickettsia (see: Mendes et al. 2019 and Campos et al. 2020). Lake Paranoá, in addition to being surrounded by luxurious mansions and farms, whose owners raise many dogs and cats, residents from other regions of Brasília take their pets to the place for leisurely walks. The presence of these domestic animals in the research region, in my opinion, should not have been ignored in the experimental design. As it is not possible to return to the data collection phase, I suggest that the authors discuss whether urbanization and the presence of dogs and cats in the sampled area would have any impact on the results achieved.

It is also necessary to improve the quality of the figures.

References:

Campos SDE, Cunha NC, Machado CSC, Nadal NV, Seabra Junior ES, Telleria EL, et al. Spotted fever group rickettsial infection in dogs and their ticks from domestic–wildlife interface areas in southeastern Brazil. Braz J Vet Parasitol 2020; 29(1): e020219. http://doi.org/10.1590/S1984-29612020012.

Mendes JCR, Kmetiuk LB, Martins CM, Canavessi AMO, Jimenez T, Pellizzaro M, Martins TF, Morikawa VM, Santos APD, Labruna MB, Biondo AW. 2019. Serosurvey of Rickettsia spp. in cats from a Brazilian spotted fever-endemic area. Rev Bras Parasitol Vet 28:713–721.

Reviewer #2: - IT IS A DETAILED STUDY INCLUDING INFORMATION ABOUT ABIOTIC AND BIOTIC FACTORS.

BUT SOME ISSUES ARE NOT CLEAR, FOR EXAMPLE, HOW MANY DAYS A MONTH WAS THE SAMPLING EFFORT?

WAS IT A MONTHLY SAMPLING?

OTHER QUESTIONS ARE MARKED DIRECTLY IN THE TEXT.

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Reviewer #1: No

Reviewer #2: Yes: DARCI MORAES BARROS BATTESTI

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Authors: Access to the research site was authorized by the Department of the Environment of the Federal District. Authorization to collect ticks was granted by the Chico Mendes Institute for Biodiversity Conservation (ICMBio) through the Biodiversity Authorization and Information System (SISBIO), request number 77851, authentication code 0778510320220711. (Lines 206-210)

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Authors: The script code used in R has been made available as supplementary data. (line 202)

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Authors: Figure 4 was generated using our data, and the raster file was obtained from MapBiomas Brasil, which is available free of charge. We re-generated Figure 1 because it was taken from Google's My Maps and is protected by copyright. The figure was created using QGIS version 3.28.13 software. The shapefiles were obtained from the Brazilian Institute of Geography and Statistics (IBGE) and the Institute of Research and Statistics of the Federal District (IPEDF). The raster with land use categorization was obtained from MapBiomas. All files used are now in the public domain. (line 277)

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Authors: Done.

Reviewer #1: The paper is well written. The methods were sufficient to answer the questions and the discussion is in accordance with the results obtained.

I have just one comment:

Lines. 283-284. “...Surprisingly, the presence or vestige of capybaras showed no effect on the number of ticks of all life stages...”

The authors completely ignored the fact that Lake Paranoá (in Brasília) is surrounded by a highly urbanized matrix. Anyone who reads the manuscript and doesn't know Brasília might even think that the study was carried out on the edge of a peri-urban lake, which is definitely not the case. The lack of relationship between the number of capybaras and the abundance of ticks in the sampled region is most likely related to urbanization. Most likely, the number of ticks may be related more to the number of domestic animals (especially dogs and cats) than specifically to capybaras. It is true that capybaras are the primary hosts of A. dubitatum, however, the same cannot be said for A. sculptum. It has been demonstrated that A. sculptum also parasitizes dogs and cats, including ticks infected with Rickettsia (see: Mendes et al. 2019 and Campos et al. 2020). Lake Paranoá, in addition to being surrounded by luxurious mansions and farms, whose owners raise many dogs and cats, residents from other regions of Brasília take their pets to the place for leisurely walks. The presence of these domestic animals in the research region, in my opinion, should not have been ignored in the experimental design. As it is not possible to return to the data collection phase, I suggest that the authors discuss whether urbanization and the presence of dogs and cats in the sampled area would have any impact on the results achieved.

Authors: We appreciate the reviewer's comment. We have detailed the study area in lines 88-90 by clarifying that Lake Paranoá is an urban lake. However, we have not discussed the influence of domestic animals in more detail as this metric was not measured. To make the points raised by the reviewer clearer, we have modified figure 1 and added the land use around the study area, leaving no doubt about the urbanization of the region studied. However, in the discussion (lines 381-384), we emphasized that the number of A. sculptum ticks may be related to the number of domestic animals, particularly dogs and cats (Mendes et al. 2019, Campos et al. 2020), rather than specifically to capybaras due to urbanization. It is worth noting that residents of luxurious houses often take their pets for leisurely walks, which may expose them to ticks.

It is also necessary to improve the quality of the figures.

Authors: Done.

References:

Campos SDE, Cunha NC, Machado CSC, Nadal NV, Seabra Junior ES, Telleria EL, et al. Spotted fever group rickettsial infection in dogs and their ticks from domestic–wildlife interface areas in southeastern Brazil. Braz J Vet Parasitol 2020; 29(1): e020219. http://doi.org/10.1590/S1984-29612020012.

Mendes JCR, Kmetiuk LB, Martins CM, Canavessi AMO, Jimenez T, Pellizzaro M, Martins TF, Morikawa VM, Santos APD, Labruna MB, Biondo AW. 2019. Serosurvey of Rickettsia spp. in cats from a Brazilian spotted fever-endemic area. Rev Bras Parasitol Vet 28:713–721.

Authors: Thanks, we included these references

Reviewer #2: - IT IS A DETAILED STUDY INCLUDING INFORMATION ABOUT ABIOTIC AND BIOTIC FACTORS.

Authors: Thanks.

BUT SOME ISSUES ARE NOT CLEAR, FOR EXAMPLE, HOW MANY DAYS A MONTH WAS THE SAMPLING EFFORT? WAS IT A MONTHLY SAMPLING?

Authors: Our sampling effort was 5 - 6 days: Set/21: 5 days, Nov/21: 5 days, Feb/22: 5 days, Apr/22: 6 days, Jun/22: 5 days, Sep/22: 5 days. (Line 105)

OTHER QUESTIONS ARE MARKED DIRECTLY IN THE TEXT.

Authors: Formatting changes in the manuscript file have been highlighted in yellow

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Decision Letter - Shawky M Aboelhadid, Editor

Effect of environmental variables on the abundance of Amblyomma ticks, potential vectors of Rickettsia parkeri in central Brazil

PONE-D-24-02067R1

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Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed

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Reviewer #1: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Yes

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Reviewer #1: I am satisfied with the responses and additions made to the text by the authors. I consider that the paper should be accepted for publication.

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PONE-D-24-02067R1

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