Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionDecember 20, 2023 |
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PONE-D-23-42855ABC Model for Cost Estimation of Custom Implants by Additive ManufacturingPLOS ONE Dear Dr. hameed, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 23 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: As a reviewer, I have carefully examined the ABC Model for Cost Estimation of Custom Implants by Additive Manufacturing. My major comments and observations are outlined below: 1. Provide additional details on the mathematical formulation of the ABC model. A more explicit presentation of equations, variables, and their relationships would enhance the technical understanding of the model. 2. Specify the sources of data used for parameter estimation in the cost model. Additionally, consider discussing any validation processes employed to ensure the accuracy and reliability of the input data. 3. Further elaborate on the breakdown of costs within each phase (pre-processing, processing, post-processing). For instance, elaborate on how overhead costs are calculated and allocated in each step. 4. Consider conducting a sensitivity analysis to evaluate the impact of variations in key parameters on the overall cost estimates. This could include variations in material costs, machine maintenance, or energy costs. 5. Clearly state any assumptions made during the case study, such as machine lifespans, maintenance costs, and energy consumption. This will enhance the transparency of the study and allow readers to assess the generalizability of the findings. 6. Provide metrics for comparing the accuracy of the proposed ABC model with alternative cost estimation approaches. This could include a comparison with traditional manufacturing cost models to highlight the advantages of the proposed method. 7. Discuss how external factors, such as market fluctuations or regulatory changes, might influence the accuracy of the cost estimates. Understanding the model's sensitivity to external variables is crucial for real-world applicability. 8. The time estimates for various phases of the additive manufacturing process could be further detailed. Include considerations for potential variations in production times based on factors like technology advancements or process optimizations. 9. Discuss the rationale behind the selection of specific materials (plastic and metal) for the case study. Consider including a discussion on the potential variations in cost estimates with different materials. 10. Consider incorporating visual aids such as charts or graphs to represent the cost breakdown more intuitively. Visualizations can enhance the reader's understanding and facilitate a quicker grasp of complex information. 11. Provide more information about the specific additive manufacturing machines used in the case studies, including their capabilities, limitations, and any unique features that might impact costs. 12. Discuss how the proposed cost model can be integrated into existing manufacturing workflows. Considerations for user-friendliness and adaptability to different AM systems would be valuable information. Reviewer #2: Reviewer’s comments The content of the paper is practical and has more use to many stake-holders such as patients, manufacturers, doctors and salespersons. Thus, calculations should be more clear and add table of comparison allowing for better and easy selection of items. 1. Grammatical mistakes are to be corrected a. Yang and Li had [5] developed – should be in present simple tense b. Ulu et al. (2019) [6] suggested - should be in present simple tense 2. Referencing should be corrected, in some places only the [number] but in some cases both names and number as in the example. a. Yang and Li had [5] b. Ulu et al. (2019) [6] 3. The total cost (PT) should be corrected as 4. The term used in research for ‘Shortened form’ is Abbreviation. 5. Move “Table 1: Pre-processing, Processing, and Post-processing Cost Estimation” before the calculations as placed as the Table 2. 6. PETG has not been defined. 7. Formatting errors were notified in few places. 8. Mistakes in the List of References has to be corrected; a. Name of the journal missing: [16], [17] b. et al. 9. Start from a Capital letter: [2] Reviewer #3: This work shows basic work of cost model for AM processes. The work shows an economical model developed with two case studies. The model is simple and it could be applied to different AM processes. AM processes are not as difficult as other manufacturing this is why the cost model is simple. I have one consideration to be taken in account. 1. Use Nowadays instead of Now a days Reviewer #4: * The keywords should be improved, considering that the authors are actually proposing ABC method. Furthermore, what does FDM stand for? * Usually, the acronyms defined in the abstract, should be re-defined in the manuscript (outside of the abstract) * The way the abstract is organized suggest that the authors are suggesting ABC method, however, based on the introduction, it seems that there are existing ABC models suggested in the literature. Which brings these two questions: What are the novelties of this study? Is this paper proposing the ABC model for the first time? * The written quality of sections 2 and 3 are not acceptable and must be improved. * What does m refer to in equation 1? * What are the contributions of this study? In another word, how can another study implement the proposed model of this study, given the model is generic. Furthermore, the case study is so specific which makes it particularly hard to implement the result of this study in other studies. * There are no descriptions provided for the mathematical models (what are the parameters in the equations?) * What are the limitations of this study? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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ABC Model for Cost Estimation of Custom Implants by Additive Manufacturing PONE-D-23-42855R1 Dear Dr. hameed, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. 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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: N/A Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: Reviewer’s comments on 11 03 2024 “ABC Model for Cost Estimation of Custom Implants by Additive Manufacturing” Please refer further comments. 1. The novelty of this article which has been highlighted, do not prominent in the title, the abstract or in keywords. So re-write title, the abstract and keywords, removing unwanted definitions and clarifications. • Rather writing ‘custom implants’ in the title, the authors can replace by customizing medical implants in the title and better little change the abstract and keywords accordingly. There, general or unnecessary explanations in the abstract can be removed. • Nowadays, Additive Manufacturing (AM), often known as 3D printing, is a technology that is making significant progress in customizing medical implants for individuals. • According to the authors, the novelties of this study enables the creation of complex geometries impossible with traditional production methods by implanting for unusually shaped areas, such as the skull or pelvis, can benefit greatly from this innovation. • we are utilizing the MYSINT 100 for manufacturing custom implants, offering advantages such as high precision, design flexibility and efficient production. Its selective laser melting technology allows for intricate and patient-specific implant designs, contributing to better fit and enhanced functionality. The MYSINT 100's capabilities in processing various materials make it suitable for a range of implant applications, providing a reliable and customizable solution in AM for medical purposes. • The authors aim to represent a common and diverse set of materials used in AM and to make the research more realistic. As, plastic would no longer be useful for real-world application but would serve merely as an experimental part thus limited to use only metal, as it is medically and practically suitable for the patient 2. in the Abstract Computer-aided design (CAD) model – Change aided design to capital letters and write as Computer-Aided Design 3. Formatting errors have to be removed. • Overhead Cost (justify the paragraph, The overhead costs during the processing phase, administrative services, lighting, etc. are proportioned based on the setup and build time (). This rate (2) could deviate from preprocessing, as environments during these operations vary, hence, the overhead cost (2 ) is calculated as: This ensures that overhead costs are accurately associated with the processing phase. c. Post-processing Activity (check Tabs, font size and justification of the paragraph) Post-processing in AM entails finishing and inspection, including steps like heat treating. Post-processing costs cover material, machinery, labor, energy, inspection, and overhead. The formula for the postprocessing cost is: 4. future work In addition to incorporating visual aids such as charts or graphs to represent the cost breakdown more intuitively to make visualizations enhance the reader's understanding and facilitate a quicker grasp of complex information, you may develop a software in the future studies. Reviewer #3: N/A This work shows basic work of cost model for AM processes. The work shows an economical model developed with two case studies. The model is simple and it could be applied to different AM processes. AM processes are not as difficult as other manufacturing this is why the cost model is simple. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: Yes: Kokila Madhuri Wijewickrama Abeykoon Reviewer #3: No **********
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