Peer Review History
Original SubmissionMay 23, 2023 |
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PONE-D-23-14396Unlocking the power of synergy: High-intensity functional training and early time-restricted eating for transformative changes in body composition and cardiometabolic health in inactive women with obesityPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Maaloul, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 10 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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We will update your Data Availability statement on your behalf to reflect the information you provide. Additional Editor Comments: We are sorry it has taken so long, but it was not possible to find reviewers enough. I would advice you to closely follow the reviewers advice and suggestions, then the manuscript could reach the quality needed to be published in PLOS ONE. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Abstract: - "Cardiometabolic biomarkers (i.e., total cholesterol, triglyceride, insulin and HOMA-IR) improved significantly in TRE-HIFT compared with either intervention alone (p<0.05).", an expression that is prone to misinterpretation, as stand-alone groups have also produced effects. Please examine the whole text carefully; there are many more of this expression, so please consider revising it. It is not limited to the following places: "... showed a significant decrease in body weight, FM, HC and WC and an increase in FFM compared to the TRE or HIFT intervention alone." and "... undergoing TRE-HIFT improved more significantly than those of participants undergoing TRE or HIFT alone". Introduction - The authors argue that HIIT is boring and that HIFT will compensate for this deficiency. But the literature cited by the authors does not seem to support this. For example, "..., these traditional modalities appear boring and do not engage people due to the monotonous nature of the exercise associated with repetition [14]." and "Compared to HIIT, HIFT has been shown to have higher exercise adherence rates, with participant-controlled exercise intensity promoting better training compliance [18-20]." - The authors may have overlooked that there is a large body of literature that supports the idea that HIIT has a better subjective perception. - Also, in the methods section it is stated that HIFT lasts 45-55 minutes, which is clearly too long compared to many types of exercise in HIIT, which is also a disadvantage. Methods - There is a lack of monitoring data for HIFT training, such as heart rate and RPE, which is not conducive to replicating this form of exercise in future operator practice. Discussion - "Given that other studies [7, 8, 10] have revealed a..." Should it be stated here what specific studies are being conducted, simply TRE? - "Feally et al. [17] reported significant..." , To logically connect with the next sentence, the subject's pre-intervention blood pressure status should be stated here. Reviewer #2: The manuscript could be improved based on the following comments. Baseline characteristics of the participants are to be presented and usually presented in the first table as Table 1.0 For the statistical analysis, the statement ‘both tests were considered significant for p> 0.05’ requires revision. There was no information on sample size calculation provided. Missing data (if any) is to be reported. The statement ‘Bonferroni post-hoc test was also used for comparing intergroup changes when a significant interaction was detected’ is unclear and requires revision. If the interaction was explored, it should be mentioned explicitly in the results section. Effect size Cohen was mentioned but was not used or presented in the results section. Partial eta squared is to be mentioned in the statistical analysis section for ANCOVA. The type of adjustment/correction used in ANCOVA is to be clearly stated. Any statistical approach mentioned in the results section is to be highlighted in the statistical analysis section and vice versa. Anything that was not used/employed is to be removed. The reason why ANCOVA was employed compared to other statistical tests such as MANCOVA and the fulfillment of the statistical test assumption is to be stated. Sensitivity analysis could be explored. Table 1, WHR was not discussed in the results section. For the Dietary intake section, the page where Table 2 was presented, Line 3-4, there was an error in the p-value cited for the statement ‘TRE-HIFT and TRE groups showed a greater decrease in fat intake compared to HIFT group (p<0.01; for both) (table 2)’. Also, to state variable Fat(g) since there are two fat (g & %) and for between-group comparison in the text. Table 1, decimal points are to be standardized where applicable. For the Blood pressure section, for the significant main effect of group by time, the data/findings of intervention were mentioned instead of groups. If the groups’ information in the last column of Tables 1, 2, 3, and 4 were mentioned, the same approach should be used to mention the intervention information (second last column). Baseline adjustment is to be denoted in the footnote of tables. n to be included in the tables and Figure 4. Although the detailed results analysis was not presented for the glucose, insulin, and HOMA-IR biomarkers section in table form, rechecking the results is required to avoid misquoting in the text. The results presentation especially the text results could be summarized rather than providing/citing too many figures which can be observed from the tables. Information on who performed the randomization, allocation concealment, blinding (if any) is to be clearly stated. Ensure whatever that is checked in the CONSORT checklist, the information is to be provided/mentioned in the manuscript and to comply the checklist parameters wherever possible. For the study protocol, only the relevant content is to be attached with this manuscript. The list of references did not comply with the journal format. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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