Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionSeptember 11, 2023 |
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PONE-D-23-27754OXIDATIVE study: a pilot prospective observational cohort study protocol examining the influence of peri-reperfusion hyperoxemia and immune dysregulation on early allograft dysfunction after orthotopic liver transplantationPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Wilson, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 17 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Is the protocol technically sound and planned in a manner that will lead to a meaningful outcome and allow testing the stated hypotheses? The manuscript should describe the methods in sufficient detail to prevent undisclosed flexibility in the experimental procedure or analysis pipeline, including sufficient outcome-neutral conditions (e.g. necessary controls, absence of floor or ceiling effects) to test the proposed hypotheses and a statistical power analysis where applicable. As there may be aspects of the methodology and analysis which can only be refined once the work is undertaken, authors should outline potential assumptions and explicitly describe what aspects of the proposed analyses, if any, are exploratory. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Is the methodology feasible and described in sufficient detail to allow the work to be replicable? Descriptions of methods and materials in the protocol should be reported in sufficient detail for another researcher to reproduce all experiments and analyses. The protocol should describe the appropriate controls, sample size calculations, and replication needed to ensure that the data are robust and reproducible. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors described where all data underlying the findings will be made available when the study is complete? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception, at the time of publication. The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above and, if applicable, provide comments about issues authors must address before this protocol can be accepted for publication. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about research or publication ethics. You may also provide optional suggestions and comments to authors that they might find helpful in planning their study. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Early allograft dysfunction after orthotopic liver transplantation is a common complication after liver transplantation with an increased mortality. The underlying mechanisms are multifactorial with ischemia reperfusion injury as one of the key drivers of the early allograft dysfunction. The study design described in the manuscript aims to understand the role peri-reperfusion hyperoxemia in this context and tries to identify new markers that correlate with early allograft dysfunction. The authors designed a single-center observational cohort study that is well thought out and feasible to reach the goal of the study. This manuscript from Wilson et. al. is summarizing a conclusive, interesting study design that fits in the scope of PlosOne. 1. The authors may add an illustration of the study design to make it easier for readers to understand the concept of the study. Reviewer #2: The present manuscript is a study protocol for the “OXIDATIVE” trial, a prospective observational cohort study in deceased-donor liver transplantation. The main hypothesis of the present trial is that peri-reperfusion O2 levels may correlate with IRI and postoperative outcomes. I read the present article with great interest and commend the authors for their interesting research question. I believe that this study may provide great value to the scientific community. I recommend the acceptance of this manuscript, pending the following revisions: Major: 1) To me, it was a little difficult to understand the exact timeline of sampling and interventions/ analyses in the first half of the paper. While the endpoints are named, a summary of “what happens when” during the study course should be added to the introduction. The description of IRI may be shortened a little in the introduction to accommodate for this. I believe it would be important to briefly clarify the following aspects of the study design: 1a) l. 156 f: “We will examine peri-reperfusion median serum PaO2 levels to determine the odds EAD develops in patients exposed to hyperoxemia compared to those not exposed.” Is this a retrospective finding after the analysis of the peri-reperfusion sample? Serum PaO2 will probably correlate to the FiO2, is this somehow standardized, e.g. by an institutional protocol? 1b) The manuscript would benefit from a schematic representation of the study, in the form of a figure with a timeline. This should include the main analytic milestones of sampling and the timepoints of clinical visits/ evaluations (e.g. first 7 days for EAD, 30 days for surgical complications?). While some of this information is given in Table 4, a concise summarizing Figure in the early part of the paper will improve overall understanding. 1c) A table or flow-chart regarding inclusion and exclusion criteria would facilitate reading. Similarly, the endpoints can be additionally presented in tabular form. 2) The investigators plan on including a quite heterogenous collective of ECD (which are already potentially heterogenous regarding donor age, steatosis, pre-donation elevated liver enzymes), DCD (livers which suffer a very specific hypoxic-metabolic injury in the donation process) and non-ECD donor organs. This will surely impact the postoperative clinical outcomes. Are the investigators planning to adjust the statistical analysis to this fact? Minor: From l. 91, “IRI as a critical barrier”: perhaps insert a brief information that there are already strategies to mitigate IRI through O2 restoration in the donor organ through machine perfusion (HOPE), and that the pre-implantation restoration of oxygen in the donor organ is a central tool for improving postoperative outcomes. There is an accumulating body of clinical evidence from RCTs regarding HOPE (e.g. Schlegel et al, 2023, PMID: 36681160; Czigany et al, 2021, PMID: 34334635). I believe this would strengthen the hypothesis that oxygen levels in the liver may impact IRI differently than systemic ones, and are critical for postoperative outcomes. MP is mentioned later, e.g. l. 355ff, could you comment how this is applied? End-ischemically? HOPE or normothermic? Liver transplant recipients exhibit extremely variable degrees of morbidity, from clinically stable patients with HCC within Milan criteria, to patients with decompensated cirrhosis or ACLF. Can the authors comment on this and does this affect intraoperative O2 management? Will preoperative disease severity be considered when analyzing postoperative outcomes? Is this implicated in l. 318? Perhaps this should be explicitly mentioned as it constitutes a central difficulty in designing clinical trials in transplantation. l. 315: follow-up of 4 weeks does not allow for a 30-day morbidity assessment. Is follow-up 30 days, then? ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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OXIDATIVE study: a pilot prospective observational cohort study protocol examining the influence of peri-reperfusion hyperoxemia and immune dysregulation on early allograft dysfunction after orthotopic liver transplantation PONE-D-23-27754R1 Dear Dr. Wilson, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. 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Does the manuscript provide a valid rationale for the proposed study, with clearly identified and justified research questions? The research question outlined is expected to address a valid academic problem or topic and contribute to the base of knowledge in the field. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Is the protocol technically sound and planned in a manner that will lead to a meaningful outcome and allow testing the stated hypotheses? The manuscript should describe the methods in sufficient detail to prevent undisclosed flexibility in the experimental procedure or analysis pipeline, including sufficient outcome-neutral conditions (e.g. necessary controls, absence of floor or ceiling effects) to test the proposed hypotheses and a statistical power analysis where applicable. As there may be aspects of the methodology and analysis which can only be refined once the work is undertaken, authors should outline potential assumptions and explicitly describe what aspects of the proposed analyses, if any, are exploratory. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Is the methodology feasible and described in sufficient detail to allow the work to be replicable? Descriptions of methods and materials in the protocol should be reported in sufficient detail for another researcher to reproduce all experiments and analyses. The protocol should describe the appropriate controls, sample size calculations, and replication needed to ensure that the data are robust and reproducible. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors described where all data underlying the findings will be made available when the study is complete? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception, at the time of publication. The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above and, if applicable, provide comments about issues authors must address before this protocol can be accepted for publication. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about research or publication ethics. You may also provide optional suggestions and comments to authors that they might find helpful in planning their study. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors addressed my comment and added an illustration of the study design to make it easier for readers to understand the concept of the study. I recommend the acceptance of the manuscript. Reviewer #2: The present manuscript is now suitable for acceptance. The authors have included most suggestions into their revised version. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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