Dear Reviewers,
Thank you for the comments concerning our manuscript entitled 'Does Wealth Equate
to Happiness? An 11-Year Panel Data Analysis Exploring Socio-Economic Indicators and
Social Media Metrics' (Ref.: PONE-D-23-36509). Those comments are valuable and very
helpful for revising and improving our paper and the important guiding significance
to our researchers. We have carefully considered the suggestions and made changes.
Revised portions are highlighted by using the track changes mode in WORD. The responses
to comments are as follows:
Response to Reviewer 1
1. The opening sentences of an abstract make a big claim. Have all the articles in
this field been reviewed and all the scientific articles and texts have ignored the
elasticity of economic determinants on subjective well-being and the implications
of income inequality? It is suggested that this sentence be expressed less confidently
or rewritten in another way.
Response 1: Thank you for your constructive feedback on the opening sentences of our
abstract. We have taken your suggestion into account and revised the section to more
accurately reflect the current state of research in this field. The modified content
is as follows:
"... A critical focus is required on the elasticity of economic growth and the boundary
conditions of income inequality, as well as their temporal and spatial heterogeneity
in influencing subjective well-being. However, there are scarcely any studies that
simultaneously consider these factors, leading to ongoing debates regarding the relationship
between economic factors and well-being. ..."
We believe this adjustment improves the precision of our statement and sets a more
accurate context for our research contributions.
2. For a better understanding of the readers, it is better to define the research
variables in the introducion.
Response 2: Thank you for your insightful recommendation to define research variables
in the introduction for enhanced reader comprehension. In the revised version of our
manuscript, we have added brief definitions of all variables within the "Introduction"
section, specifically in paragraphs detailing the theoretical background and rationale
of our study. Furthermore, we provide detailed explanations of these variables in
the subsequent "Methods" section to ensure a thorough understanding.
3. Considering that social media has been used to gather and analyze the data of the
target sample, What will happen to the percentage of people who are not literate or
do not use social media? These cases can be added to the limitations of the research.
Response 3: In response to your insightful comment, we have acknowledged this concern
within the "Discussion" section of our manuscript, emphasizing the limitations associated
with our data collection method. The pertinent excerpt is as follows:
“… Our reliance on social media for data collection may exclude certain populations,
such as individuals who are not literate or do not use social media. Over 78% of our
sample from Sina Weibo did not disclose age data, constraining our ability to assess
the impact of age demographics. Future studies should employ varied sampling techniques
to address this limitation.”
We have critically discussed its implications for our research's comprehensiveness
and generalizability. This acknowledgment serves to underline the necessity for future
studies to develop and implement strategies that encompass a broader spectrum of the
population, thereby enriching the representativeness and applicability of subsequent
findings. We appreciate your attention to this matter, which significantly contributes
to the rigorous evaluation of our study's scope and limitations.
4. It is suggested to explain about the TextMind framework so that the reader gets
to know it better.
Response 4: In response to your suggestion, we have expanded the manuscript to include
a more comprehensive introduction to the TextMind framework. Specifically, we stated:
"… We employed TextMind (Gao et al., 2013), a Chinese corpus processing software built
upon the Linguistic Inquiry and Word Count (LIWC) framework (Tausczik & Pennebaker,
2009; Zhao et al., 2016). This software segments the text into individual words and
identifies psychosemantic features, enabling the subsequent calculation of province-specific
Subjective Well-Being (SWB) scores."
We believe this addition will provide readers with a clearer understanding of the
methodologies applied in our research, enhancing the transparency and replicability
of our study. Thank you for highlighting the importance of elucidating the tools and
frameworks utilized in our analysis.
Response to Reviewer 2
Abstract
1. Highlight how your study addresses these gaps or adds new insights to the existing
body of knowledge would strengthen the abstract.
Response 1: In response to your recommendation, we have revised the abstract to more
explicitly highlight how our study addresses existing gaps and contributes new insights
to the body of knowledge. Your suggestion has been invaluable in enhancing the clarity
and impact of our abstract, and we are grateful for your guidance in this improvement.
2. The use of technical terms like the Johnson-Neyman technique might not be immediately
clear to all readers. A brief explanation or simplification of these terms can make
your abstract more accessible to a broader audience.
Response 2: Acknowledging your concern regarding the accessibility of technical terms
such as the Johnson-Neyman technique to all readers, we have modified our approach
in the revised version of the abstract. To maintain the clarity and brevity of the
abstract, we have omitted references to these non-central elements. Instead, we have
opted to provide a detailed explanation of such terms in the methods section, where
they are contextualized within our study's framework and supported by relevant citations.
This adjustment ensures the abstract remains accessible to a broader audience while
preserving the integrity and specificity of our methodological descriptions. We appreciate
your guidance in making our research more inclusive and understandable for readers
from diverse backgrounds.
3. Ensure the economic and social indicators used in your study are clearly defined
and relevant to your research question. Clarifying how these indicators specifically
relate to subjective well-being in the Chinese context would be beneficial.
Response 3: In consideration of your suggestion to ensure clarity regarding the economic
and social indicators used in our study, we carefully deliberated on the necessity
of defining and explaining these indicators, such as per capita GDP and income inequality,
within the abstract. Given their widespread recognition and self-explanatory nature,
along with the imperative to maintain the succinctness of the abstract, we opted not
to elaborate on them in this section. Instead, we have enhanced the introduction by
including a detailed discussion on how these indicators specifically relate to subjective
well-being in the Chinese context. Additionally, we have provided a more comprehensive
description of the involved variables in the methods section. This approach allows
us to keep the abstract concise while ensuring that readers can find a thorough exposition
of the indicators and their relevance to subjective well-being in China in the corresponding
sections of the paper. We are grateful for your feedback, as it has guided us in striking
a balance between conciseness and informativeness.
4. Since your study is focused on China, a brief mention of the extent to which these
findings might be generalizable to other regions or economies would be useful.
Response to Comment 4: In response to your insightful suggestion, we have amended
the abstract to incorporate a discussion on the generalizability of our findings to
other regions or economies. Specifically, we have added the following statement at
the end of the abstract:
"… Although these results are theoretically enlightening for the relationship between
economics and national well-being globally, this study's sample originates from mainland
China. Due to variances in cultural, economic, and political factors, we recommend
further research to explore these dynamics in a global context."
We are grateful for your recommendation, as it enhances the completeness and scholarly
utility of our work by addressing the potential for broader applicability and encouraging
continued exploration in this vital area of research.
Introduction
1. You begin with historical perspectives on well-being, which is a strong start.
However, to maintain relevance, quickly transition to how these views relate to modern
economic theories and findings.
Response 1: In alignment with your valuable feedback, we have revised the introduction
of our manuscript, particularly the opening section, to ensure a smoother transition
from historical perspectives on well-being to their relevance within the context of
modern economic theories and findings ("Introduction" section, first paragraph). We
appreciate your guidance in refining our introduction to better capture the interplay
between historical and modern perspectives on well-being.
2. provide a more detailed explanation for readers unfamiliar with the concept. This
helps in setting a clear foundation for your study.
Response 2: Taking into account your constructive feedback, we have made significant
improvements in our revised introduction to ensure a clearer and more detailed explanation
of key concepts, such as the "Easterlin Paradox." We believe that this enhancement
will facilitate a deeper engagement with our work and appreciate your suggestion as
it has significantly contributed to the refinement of our manuscript.
3. Deepen this section by briefly discussing why such divergences exist and what your
study aims to contribute to this debate.
Response 3: In response to your insightful suggestion, we have delved into a deeper
discussion based on the Hedonic Adaptation Theory and Relative Deprivation Theory
in the revised manuscript, aiming to hypothesize the divergences found in previous
research (“Introduction” section, paragraphs 7-9). This discussion is directly related
to the formulation of our research hypotheses and provides a comprehensive background
for setting our research objectives. We appreciate your suggestion, as it guided us
to enhance the depth and relevance of the introduction, thereby clearly articulating
the significance of our study within the existing body of knowledge.
4. Clearly articulate why China is a particularly relevant or unique case for studying
this paradox. This will help in establishing the significance of your research.
Response 4: In our revised manuscript, we have added a section in the introduction
(fourth paragraph) to clearly articulate the unique relevance of China as a case study
for exploring the Easterlin Paradox. The text now reads:
“… China serves as a particularly compelling case for analyzing the Easterlin Paradox,
marked by its unmatched economic growth and substantial socio-economic shifts over
recent decades. Unlike the steady and gradual economic progress seen in many Western
countries, China has witnessed rapid industrialization, urbanization, and economic
development at an unprecedented rate and scale. This transformation is characterized
not only by its temporal aspect but also by significant economic disparities and variations
in income distribution across and within its provinces. Our research aims to explore
how these swift economic changes and notable shifts in income distribution impact
individuals' perceptions of happiness. Focusing on China, we intend to provide insights
that critically assess and refine the understanding of the Easterlin Paradox globally,
promoting a more detailed and context-sensitive analysis.”
This enhancement underscores the significance of our research by situating China as
a critical case study. We appreciate your guidance, as it has enabled us to more effectively
establish the importance and relevance of our study within the broader academic discourse.
5. You mention Hedonic Adaptation Theory and Relative Deprivation Theory but could
integrate these more cohesively into your argument. Explain how these theories underpin
your hypotheses.
Response 5: As highlighted in our response to the third point, we have refined the
theoretical derivation in our revised manuscript to ensure a seamless integration
with our hypotheses (Introduction, paragraphs 7-9). This revision includes a more
cohesive discussion of both Hedonic Adaptation Theory and Relative Deprivation Theory,
elucidating how these theories not only inform the foundation of our research but
also directly underpin our hypotheses. We appreciate your suggestion, as it has significantly
contributed to strengthening the theoretical grounding of our work and its connection
to the proposed hypotheses.
6. Offer a brief preview of your methodology, especially the use of a machine learning
model and panel data. This sets the stage for what makes your approach novel or robust.
Response 6: In response to your suggestion, we have enhanced the final paragraph of
the introduction to provide a brief preview of our methodology, highlighting its innovative
aspects. The revised text is as follows:
“… A significant innovation in our methodology is the application of a machine-learning
model to analyze large-scale panel data, specifically focusing on the dynamic interaction
between economic growth, income inequality, and SWB. This approach is particularly
novel due to its use of social media big data as a proxy for continuous SWB measurement
across diverse regions and time frames. Traditional psychological methods, such as
questionnaires, are impractical for the extensive sampling required across China's
thirty-plus provinces over a decade. In contrast, social media platforms like Sina
Weibo, with its 566 million monthly active users and a dataset extending back to 2010
(Tandoc & Eng, 2017; Weibo-Corporation, 2021), provide a rich source for non-invasive
public psychology and behavior analysis through big data analytics of user activities
(Barbier & Liu, 2011; Huang et al., 2022; Li et al., 2013). By leveraging this extensive
dataset, our study employs a validated machine-learning model (Hao et al., 2015; Hao
et al., 2014; Wang et al., 2020) to assess SWB based on the text of social media posts.
This innovative approach allows us to explore the effects of economic growth and income
inequality on SWB in both temporal and cross-sectional dimensions. Our findings aim
to contribute a fresh perspective on the Easterlin paradox, particularly in the context
of China’s unique socio-economic landscape.”
This revision succinctly outlines the novel and robust aspects of our methodology,
setting the stage for the detailed explanation that follows in the methods section.
We are grateful for your guidance, as it has allowed us to more effectively communicate
the innovative nature of our research methodology.
7. consider providing a bit more context or rationale for each. This can help readers
understand how you arrived at these specific hypotheses.
Response 7: As previously addressed in our responses to the third and fifth comments,
we have enhanced paragraphs 7-9 of the introduction in our revised manuscript to address
this point. This revision involves providing a more comprehensive context and rationale
for our hypotheses, ensuring a seamless connection between the theoretical frameworks
discussed earlier in the introduction and the specific hypotheses of our study. By
elaborating on the theoretical underpinnings and the empirical observations that inform
our hypotheses, we aim to offer readers a clearer understanding of the logical progression
that led to the formulation of these hypotheses. We are grateful for your recommendation,
as it has significantly contributed to enhancing the clarity and persuasiveness of
our manuscript.
8. Tie your study to contemporary societal or policy issues, such as the ongoing debates
about economic growth and well-being. This can enhance the real-world relevance of
your research.
Response 8: In accordance with your suggestion to link our study more closely to contemporary
societal and policy issues, we have expanded the discussion in the second paragraph
of the revised introduction to cover these aspects. The new text reads as follows:
"… Nonetheless, the association between economic growth and SWB has not gone unchallenged,
especially when considering contemporary societal and policy issues such as debates
around economic growth, environmental sustainability, and well-being. Evidence from
several studies suggests that SWB correlates significantly with the material standard
of living, highlighting the importance of integrating these findings into policy discussions
to address the multifaceted dimensions of well-being beyond mere economic indicators
(Gariepy et al., 2017; Sacks et al., 2010). Stevenson and Wolfers contended that there
is no empirical evidence to suggest that a country's SWB plateaus after reaching a
certain economic threshold, a point that gains relevance in the context of ongoing
debates about the sustainability of economic growth and its implications for societal
well-being (Stevenson & Wolfers, 2008). Broadly speaking, Easterlin's findings enjoy
robust support in many developed nations such as Western Europe, Japan, and Korea,
serving as a critical reference point for policymakers aiming to balance economic
growth with the enhancement of societal well-being (Clark et al., 2008; Easterlin,
1995; Xing, 2011). However, results from some developing countries exhibit greater
variability, suggesting that the path to well-being through economic growth may differ
significantly across contexts, further underscoring the need for nuanced policy approaches
that consider local socio-economic dynamics (Bortolotti & Biggeri, 2022; Clark, 2016;
Opfinger, 2015; Stevenson & Wolfers, 2008)."
This revision is designed to underscore the real-world relevance of our research by
situating it within ongoing debates on the sustainability of economic growth, environmental
concerns, and their implications for well-being. By doing so, we aim to highlight
the critical importance of our findings for informing policy discussions and crafting
strategies that balance economic development with the holistic enhancement of societal
well-being. We appreciate your guidance, as it has significantly enriched the contextual
framing of our study, making it more relevant and impactful.
Methods
1. Ensure that all technical terms, especially those specific to economics and machine
learning, are clearly defined or explained. This aids in accessibility for readers
who may not be familiar with these fields.
Response 1: In response to your valuable suggestion, we have meticulously reviewed
our manuscript to ensure that all technical terms and jargon, particularly those pertaining
to economics and machine learning, such as Application Programming Interface (API),
TextMind, and the Gini coefficient, are accompanied by straightforward explanations
or appropriately cited references. This careful scrutiny and subsequent clarification
aim to enhance the accessibility of our research to readers who may not possess specialized
knowledge in these fields. We are grateful for your guidance, as it has significantly
contributed to improving the clarity of our manuscript.
2. adding a bit more detail on how you addressed potential biases in social media
data could be beneficial. This might include discussing the representativeness of
the Sina Weibo user base or the limitations of social media data.
Response 2: In light of your suggestion, we have expanded our manuscript to more thoroughly
address potential biases inherent in social media data. This expansion is reflected
in both the methods and discussion sections of our revised manuscript. The relevant
additions are as follows:
In the methods section, we described our data collection and preprocessing steps in
detail (“Data Collection and Preprocessing,” first and second paragraph):
“… text data was sourced from an initial pool of over 1.16 million Sina Weibo users
(Li et al., 2013)…” “… Following established data collection methods (Huang et al.,
2020; Huang et al., 2022; Li et al., 2020; Wang et al., 2020), we first retrieved
public posts from 1.16 million mainland Chinese users via Weibo's API. Active users
were then identified based on criteria including: (a) registration before January
1, 2010; (b) the exclusion of institutional, commercial, or celebrity accounts; and
(c) a minimum of 500 original posts during the observation period. These criteria
ensured the analysis focused on everyday shares from the general public, avoiding
political or commercial propaganda, and aimed to include as broad a user base as possible.
This led to the selection of 644,243 active Weibo users from thirty-one provinces
for this study.”
Furthermore, in the discussion section, we acknowledged limitations related to our
data source (“4 Discussion,” seventh paragraph):
“… Firstly, our reliance on social media for data collection may exclude certain
populations, such as individuals who are not literate or do not use social media.
Over 78% of our sample from Sina Weibo did not disclose age data, constraining our
ability to assess the impact of age demographics (Pavlova, 2021). Future studies should
employ varied sampling techniques to address this limitation…”
These additions aim to transparently discuss the representativeness of the Sina Weibo
user base and the limitations associated with social media data, thereby enhancing
the rigor and credibility of our research. We appreciate your feedback, as it has
guided us in refining our methodology to better account for and articulate potential
biases and limitations of our study.
3. You’ve detailed how SWB and other variables were calculated. Explain why these
particular variables were chosen and how they are expected to contribute to your research
objectives would provide more context.
Response 3: In our revised manuscript, we have elaborated on the theoretical and empirical
justifications for the selection of SWB indicators and related economic variables,
thereby providing a more comprehensive context for their inclusion in our study. Key
excerpts from the revised sections include:
Regarding the choice of SWB indicators:
“… This study conceptualizes SWB through Ryff's six-factor model (Ryff, 1989), evaluating
individuals' happiness by analyzing six psychological dimensions: self-acceptance,
positive relationships with others, autonomy, environmental mastery, sense of purpose
and meaning in life, and personal growth. This theoretical basis and measurement method
receive high praise in the positive psychology arena (Hao et al., 2015; Hao et al.,
2013; Ryff, 1989)…”
On the selection of economic indicators:
“…Aligned with the methodologies utilized in existing research (Diener & Tov, 2007;
Yang et al., 2020), per capita Gross Domestic Product (PRGDP) is adopted as a metric
for assessing the absolute economic growth of each province. PRGDP is defined as the
quotient of the total GDP value and the regional population for a specified year.
By adjusting for variations in city sizes, PRGDP provides a more accurate depiction
of regional economic conditions compared to GDP alone (Huang et al., 2019; Huang et
al., 2022)…”
And on the rationale behind using the Gini coefficient for income inequality:
“… In accordance with established economic research paradigms, the Gini coefficient
(Gi), first introduced by Corrado Gini (Gini, 1921; Tian, 2012), is utilized as the
indicator to measure income inequality within each province (Sundrum, 2003). This
coefficient theoretically ranges from 0, indicating complete income equality, to 1,
denoting absolute income inequality. Elevated values of the coefficient indicate higher
levels of income disparity within a country or region…”
These additions aim to clarify the rationale behind the selection of specific variables
and their expected contributions to our research objectives. By detailing the theoretical
and empirical underpinnings of our methodological choices, we seek to provide readers
with a clearer understanding of how these variables are pivotal in exploring the dynamics
between economic factors and subjective well-being. We are grateful for your feedback,
as it has significantly enhanced the depth and clarity of our methodology section.
4. Elaborate on why this approach was chosen, its benefits, and any limitations it
might have compared to traditional methods.
Response 4: Indeed, we acknowledge that the rationale behind our methodological approach
is intrinsically linked to our research hypotheses and is thus more appropriately
addressed within the introduction, as we have implemented in response to your sixth
point regarding the introduction. As mentioned, we elucidated this matter in the last
paragraph of the introduction, discussing the selection of our approach and its advantages
in comparison to more traditional methodologies. Concurrently, in the methods section
under “Statistical Analysis,” we provide a detailed account of how these methods were
specifically implemented in our study. We appreciate your guidance, as it has been
instrumental in refining our manuscript to better articulate the justification and
implementation of our research methodology.
5. If there are any ethical considerations, especially related to the use of social
media data, they should be explicitly stated. This might include how user privacy
was protected or how data anonymization was handled.
Response 5: Following your recommendation and in line with editor's requirements,
we have added an Ethics Statement at the end of the methods section to address ethical
considerations related to the use of social media data. The newly included statement
reads as follows:
“The research initiative received approval from the Ethics Committee, Institute of
Psychology, Chinese Academy of Sciences (project number: H15009). All posts analyzed
in this study were sourced from Sina Weibo, with stringent measures taken to preserve
user privacy. The identities, usernames, and original content of the users' posts
were deliberately omitted from the analysis, focusing exclusively on the examination
of data at the provincial level. Given that Sina Weibo is publicly accessible and
in adherence to the established protocols and ethical standards within the research
domain (Kosinski et al.), the necessity for informed consent was exempted by the Ethics
Committee, Institute of Psychology, Chinese Academy of Sciences.”(“Ethics Statement”)
This addition ensures that our manuscript explicitly addresses how user privacy was
protected and how data anonymization was handled, thereby underscoring our commitment
to ethical research practices. We appreciate your guidance, as it has significantly
contributed to enhancing the transparency and ethical considerations of our study.
Results
1. consider simplifying the presentation for better readability. Use clear subheadings
to separate different aspects of the results, such as demographics, descriptive statistics,
main effects estimation, and interaction analysis.
Response 1: In response to your suggestion, we have ensured that the revised manuscript
adopts a structured approach to presenting the results, utilizing clear subheadings
to differentiate between various aspects of the findings. We appreciate your guidance,
as it has been instrumental in enhancing the presentation and accessibility of our
results.
2. provide brief interpretations of what these statistics mean in terms of your research
question. Discuss the practical implications of these findings, especially in the
context of policy and economic planning.
Response 2: Thank you for your comment. However, in keeping with the conventional
reporting standards aimed at maintaining conciseness and readability within the "Results"
section, we have adhered to a straightforward presentation of statistical analysis
outcomes. This approach ensures that the results are presented in a clear, unambiguous
manner, allowing for direct interpretation in relation to our research question.
Furthermore, we have dedicated a significant portion of the "Discussion" section to
exploring the practical implications of our findings, particularly in terms of their
relevance to policy and economic planning.
3. Elaborate on the implications of the findings related to the Gini coefficient and
PRGDP. How do these results contribute to existing literature, and what do they suggest
for future economic and social policies?
Response 3: Thank you for your comment. As mentioned in response to the second point,
we prefer to elaborate on this content in the "Discussion" section.
Discussion
1. You've adeptly connected your findings to hedonic adaptation theory and relative
deprivation theory. Further elaborating on how your results extend or challenge these
theories could add depth to your discussion.
Response 1: In our revised manuscript, we have further explored the connections between
our findings and two pivotal theories—hedonic adaptation theory and relative deprivation
theory—within the "Discussion" section, specifically in the second and third paragraphs,
respectively.Regarding the hedonic adaptation theory, we detailed:
“… However, when employing a more flexible model, we find a statistically significant
positive correlation between the two variables across both time and cross-sectional
dimensions, lending empirical support to our research hypothesis H1. These findings
are in concordance with the hedonic adaptation theory's explanation of the Easterlin
paradox, suggesting that the influence of wealth accumulation on happiness is not
linear but is influenced by its baseline levels (Easterlin & Angelescu, 2009; Knight
& Gunatilaka, 2011). It is crucial to clarify that the observed elasticity in the
relationship between economic growth and subjective well-being does not negate the
claims of the Easterlin paradox. Rather, it indicates that as a region experiences
exponential economic growth, there is a corresponding increase in the population's
subjective well-being. Specifically, for every 46.70% increase in GDP per capita in
the time series, subjective well-being rises by 0.38; in the cross-sectional analysis,
a similar increase in GDP per capita yields a 0.51 rise in subjective well-being.
Thus, economic factors remain pertinent, but the demand and expectation for growth
have intensified.”
Furthermore, concerning the relative deprivation theory, we elaborated:
“… Income inequality exerts a deleterious impact on subjective well-being, corroborating
the tenets of relative deprivation theory (Davis, 1959; Walker & Pettigrew, 1984).
In our study, for each 0.09 unit increase in income inequality in the time-series
analysis, we observe a corresponding 1.47 unit decrease in subjective well-being,
thereby confirming our Hypothesis H2 and aligning with extant literature. Luttmer
posits that income inequality within a community skews the local mean income to the
right of the median, representing a wealthier minority. Consequently, the majority
of the population earns below the local mean, resulting in a decline in their 'relative
income' (Luttmer, 2005). Furthermore, our research illuminates a previously overlooked
aspect: the interaction between income inequality and economic growth vis-à-vis subjective
well-being. Specifically, the positive predictive influence of economic growth on
subjective well-being diminishes as income inequality escalates. It is anticipated
that the enhancement in well-being owing to economic growth vanishes entirely when
the Gini coefficient attains a value of 0.61. This substantiates our Hypothesis H3.
In accordance with relative deprivation theory, we surmise that the crux of this interaction
lies in the widening wealth gap, which intensifies social comparisons and predominantly
instills a sense of loss in the general populace (Liu et al., 2019; Panning, 2014).”
These detailed discussions aim to provide a deeper understanding of how our findings
both align with and expand upon existing theories. We are grateful for your suggestion,
as it has significantly enriched the discussion of our study's implications and theoretical
contributions.
2. provide a clearer articulation of how these insights can inform policy-making or
economic planning would be beneficial.
Response 2: In the "Discussion" section's fifth paragraph, we have added content to
more clearly articulate how our insights can inform policy-making and economic planning.
The text reads as follows:
"… These findings highlight the complex relationship between economic growth, income
inequality, and subjective well-being, offering direction for policy development.
To improve societal well-being, policies must foster sustainable economic growth and
introduce initiatives to reduce income disparity. Recommended strategies encompass
progressive taxation, enhancements in social welfare, policies promoting equal opportunities,
and strengthening oversight mechanisms to deter tax evasion by affluent sectors and
individuals. Such an approach to narrowing the wealth gap ensures that economic advancements
lead to significant societal benefits. Thus, our study advocates for an integrated
strategy in economic planning that not only seeks inclusive growth but also aims to
boost overall happiness by ensuring equitable contributions across all economic sectors."
This addition aims to provide a clearer understanding of how the interplay between
economic factors and subjective well-being can guide the formulation of policies aimed
at achieving a more equitable and happy society. We appreciate your suggestion, as
it has significantly enhanced the practical relevance and applicability of our research
findings.
3. Delv deeper into how your findings align with or diverge from these studies could
offer a richer context.
Response 3: As mentioned in the response to the second point, in the revised manuscript,
we have delved deeper into how our findings both align with and diverge from previous
studies in paragraphs 2 and 3 of the "Discussion" section. This examination provides
a richer context by comparing our study's outcomes with the established literature,
particularly regarding the Easterlin paradox and theories of hedonic adaptation and
relative deprivation.
Overall, our analysis reveals that while our findings initially seem to support the
Easterlin paradox through the observed linear relationship between economic growth
and subjective well-being in China, a more nuanced investigation using a flexible
model uncovers a significant positive correlation across both time and cross-sectional
dimensions. This nuanced finding challenges and extends the traditional interpretation
of the Easterlin paradox by demonstrating that the impact of wealth accumulation on
happiness is moderated by baseline levels of well-being, thus indicating a complex
and non-linear relationship. Furthermore, our study confirms the adverse effects of
income inequality on subjective well-being, in line with relative deprivation theory,
and introduces new insights into the interaction between economic growth and income
inequality. This aspect of our findings highlights the importance of considering both
economic growth and income distribution in discussions of societal well-being and
policy formulation. By critically comparing our results with existing research, we
contribute to a deeper understanding of the intricate dynamics between economic factors
and subjective well-being.
We appreciate your suggestion, as it has significantly enriched the discussion section
by providing a more comprehensive examination of how our research extends and challenges
the current body of knowledge.
4. Expanding on how limitations might impact the interpretation of your results and
suggesting ways future research could overcome them would strengthen your discussion.
Response 4: In our revised manuscript, we have expanded the section addressing the
study's limitations to ensure a comprehensive understanding of the scope and applicability
of our findings. The text now includes the following considerations:
"… Firstly, our reliance on social media for data collection may exclude certain populations,
such as individuals who are not literate or do not use social media. Over 78% of our
sample from Sina Weibo did not disclose age data, constraining our ability to assess
the impact of age demographics (Pavlova, 2021). Future studies should employ varied
sampling techniques to address this limitation. Secondly, as this study concentrates
on the macro-social link between economic variables and collective subjective well-being,
the findings might not be directly applicable to individual experiences, highlighting
the potential for ecological fallacies. Future research could engage in individual-level
investigations through surveys and experimental methods to draw comparisons with macro-level
data. Thirdly, while our analysis focuses solely on the impact of objective economic
indicators on subjective well-being, it does not delve into the psychological mechanisms
underlying this relationship. Further studies are encouraged to explore mediating
variables such as psychological expectations (Niessen et al., 2023), social support
(Hou et al., 2022), and cultural participation (Giovanis et al., 2021), in line with
theories of hedonic adaptation and relative deprivation…"
This elaboration aims to transparently outline the limitations of our research approach
and suggest directions for future studies to build upon our work. We appreciate your
guidance, as it has significantly contributed to strengthening the discussion of our
study's limitations and potential areas for future research.
5. Discuss potential applications of your findings beyond the Chinese context. How
might these insights apply to other economies or inform global economic policies?
Response 5: In line with your suggestion and similar to our approach in addressing
the fourth point, we have included reflections on the broader applicability of our
findings in the "Discussion" section, particularly in the seventh paragraph, to consider
potential applications beyond the Chinese context. The revised text is as follows:
"… while our analysis focuses solely on the impact of objective economic indicators
on subjective well-being, it does not delve into the psychological mechanisms underlying
this relationship. Further studies are encouraged to explore mediating variables such
as psychological expectations (Niessen et al., 2023), social support (Hou et al.,
2022), and cultural participation (Giovanis et al., 2021) … it is hypothesized that
socio-cultural factors, including the emphasis on collective well-being, Confucian
ethics' influence on notions of fairness and prosperity, and intra-national cultural
differences, could significantly affect the interplay between economic growth, income
inequality, and subjective well-being. An in-depth examination of these elements might
offer a more detailed perspective on how economic and social policies impact happiness
in the Chinese context…"
While our data and analysis are specifically rooted in the Chinese socio-economic
and cultural milieu, the underlying principles and findings may offer valuable insights
for other economies, especially those undergoing rapid growth and facing challenges
related to income inequality and social welfare. We appreciate your suggestion, as
it has encouraged us to consider the broader implications of our research and its
relevance to a global audience.
6. Reflect on the strengths and limitations of using social media data and machine
learning methodologies in your research. How do these methods compare to traditional
survey-based approaches in studying subjective well-being?
Response 6: Thank you for your suggestion. This issue relates to the points raised
in the introduction (the sixth comment) and in the methods section (the fourth comment)
regarding our choice of methodology. Specifically, we have elucidated our rationale
for employing social media data and machine learning methodologies in the introduction,
explaining why these approaches were selected for our study. Additionally, the limitations
associated with using machine learning to study subjective well-being (SWB) have been
addressed in the discussion of limitations and future directions mentioned in the
fifth comment.
Using social media data and machine learning methodologies offers distinct strengths,
such as the ability to analyze large-scale datasets in real-time and capture a wide
range of subjective well-being expressions across diverse demographic groups. This
approach allows for a nuanced examination of SWB in a naturalistic setting, providing
insights that might not be easily accessible through traditional survey methods. However,
these methods also present limitations, including potential biases in social media
usage across different populations. In comparison to traditional survey-based approaches,
our methodology offers a complementary perspective by leveraging big data. While surveys
provide direct, self-reported measures of well-being, social media data and machine
learning can analyze spontaneous expressions of well-being at scale. Each approach
has its unique advantages and limitations, suggesting that a combined methodology
could offer the most comprehensive insights into subjective well-being.
We appreciate your guidance, as it has prompted us to reflect on the strengths and
limitations of our chosen methodologies, enhancing our discussion of how these methods
contribute to the broader field of SWB research.
7. Suggest specific areas for future research that could build on your findings. For
instance, exploring individual-level data or integrating psychological variables could
provide further insights.
Response 7: Thank you for your suggestion. We have integrated this content into the
limitations and future directions section of the "Discussion" part in our revised
manuscript. As this study concentrates on the macro-social link between economic variables
and collective subjective well-being, the findings might not be directly applicable
to individual experiences, highlighting the potential for ecological fallacies. Future
research could engage in individual-level investigations through surveys and experimental
methods to draw comparisons with macro-level data. We appreciate your guidance, as
it has significantly contributed to refining our manuscript by identifying clear directions
for future research that can build on our study's findings, thereby advancing the
field of SWB research.
8. on your findings, offer specific recommendations for economic policies that could
enhance subjective well-being while addressing income inequality.
Response 8: As highlighted in response to the second suggestion, and to address your
recommendation, we have incorporated the following content into the discussion of
our revised manuscript:
"... These findings underscore the complex interplay between economic growth, income
inequality, and subjective well-being, providing valuable guidance for policy formulation.
To enhance societal well-being, it is imperative for policies to support sustainable
economic growth while implementing measures to mitigate income disparity. We recommend
several strategies, including the adoption of progressive taxation, the enhancement
of social welfare programs, the promotion of equal opportunities, and the strengthening
of oversight mechanisms to prevent tax evasion by wealthy individuals and sectors.
By adopting such measures to narrow the wealth gap, we can ensure that economic progress
translates into widespread societal benefits. Therefore, our study calls for a holistic
approach to economic planning, one that not only pursues inclusive growth but also
actively works to increase overall happiness by promoting fair contributions across
all segments of the economy."
We appreciate your suggestion, as it has enriched our discussion by offering clear,
policy-oriented directions that stem from our research findings.
9. Discuss any socio-cultural factors that might influence the relationship between
economic growth, income inequality, and subjective well-being, particularly in the
Chinese context.
Response 9: In recognition of the unique cultural context of our dataset, we have
included considerations of socio-cultural factors in the future directions section
of our revised manuscript. The text now reads as follows:
"… it is hypothesized that socio-cultural factors, including the emphasis on collective
well-being, Confucian ethics' influence on notions of fairness and prosperity, and
intra-national cultural differences, could significantly affect the interplay between
economic growth, income inequality, and subjective well-being. An in-depth examination
of these elements might offer a more detailed perspective on how economic and social
policies impact happiness in the Chinese context."
This addition acknowledges the potential impact of socio-cultural factors on the relationship
between economic growth, income inequality, and subjective well-being, particularly
within the Chinese context. We appreciate your suggestion, as it has significantly
enriched our discussion by emphasizing the need for a culturally sensitive understanding
of well-being in economic research.
10. End your discussion with strong concluding remarks that summarize the key takeaways
of your study and their broader significance.
Response 10: In response to your valuable feedback, we have included an additional
paragraph at the end of the "Discussion" section in our revised manuscript. This paragraph
synthesizes the principal findings and broader implications of our research, stating:
“In conclusion, our study enriches the discourse on the intricate dynamics between
economic growth, income inequality, and subjective well-being through an innovative
analysis that combines macroeconomic indicators with social media analytics. By revealing
the bidirectional influences where economic growth positively correlates with subjective
well-being and income inequality negatively affects it, we offer nuanced insights
into the debate surrounding the Easterlin paradox within the context of China's rapid
economic evolution. Our findings challenge the traditional understanding of the paradox,
demonstrating that economic growth can indeed enhance subjective well-being, provided
income inequality is addressed effectively. This underscores the critical need for
integrated economic policies that promote not only growth but also equity, to ensure
that the benefits of economic advancements are widely shared across the society. Moreover,
our methodological approach, leveraging social media data, opens new avenues for real-time,
nuanced analysis of subjective well-being, offering a template for future research
in the field. As we navigate the complexities of economic development and social welfare,
the importance of fostering policies that minimize income disparities while bolstering
economic growth has never been more evident. Our study ultimately advocates for a
balanced approach to economic planning, one that equally prioritizes the pursuit of
happiness and the equitable distribution of wealth, reflecting David Hume's assertion
that the ultimate goal of human industry is the attainment of happiness.”
We hope this addition adequately addresses your concern by concisely summarizing the
key insights of our research and highlighting their significant implications for both
policy and future studies. Thank you for your constructive comment, which has undoubtedly
enhanced the quality and impact of our manuscript.
We appreciate for the Editor and Reviewers’ warm work earnestly. Thank you very much
for your comments and suggestions!
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