Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionSeptember 11, 2023 |
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PONE-D-23-24513Reciprocity in Ambiguous Situations: Default Psychological Strategies Underlying Ambiguity-Resolution in Moral Decision-MakingPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Galvan, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please address the comments made by both reviewers in the revised manuscript and clearly indicate the changes that were made while addressing them. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 07 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Review of Manuscript The paper presents a novel exploration of ambiguity in reciprocity decisions, employing a computational modeling approach. While the study provides valuable insights into how individuals handle uncertainty, several areas can be refined. The entire paper, especially the Methods section, would benefit from more explicit explanations. It's important to delve deeper into participant selection criteria and elaborate on experimental design choices for better reader understanding. In the Results section, enhancing the systematic presentation of findings and aligning them with the study's objectives would enhance clarity. The Discussion section could be improved through more extensive comparisons with existing literature and stronger connections to the study's objectives and hypotheses. Despite these areas for improvement, this research lays a promising foundation for further investigating ambiguity in social decision-making. It underscores the importance of future studies considering individual differences in decision strategies. Below, you will find my comments for each section of the manuscript. Introduction 1. Explicitly state the literature gap the study addresses. Identify unanswered questions regarding ambiguity in trust to set a focused research context. What unanswered questions or uncertainties about ambiguity in trust exist in the current research landscape? Highlight the study's key contributions to establish clear expectations for readers. 2. Consider relocating equations, like Eq 3, to the Methods section. This streamlines the introduction, making it more accessible. Provide concise explanations of specialized terminology and equations for broader readership. Add transitional sentences to link the introduction to subsequent sections. 3. Provide a concise explanation of the ARS model and its relevance. Establish a clear link between the Offer Game discussion and the ARS model introduction. 4. Elaborate on the "veil of ambiguity" concept's relevance and implications for the research. Explain its connection to the Trust Game and study objectives. 5. Simplify complex sentences and explanations for better readability and understanding. 6. Consider using diagrams or graphs to illustrate how ambiguity is introduced in the Hidden Endowment Trust Game. Methods 7. Briefly explain the importance of preregistration for research transparency and bias reduction. 8. Clarify the exclusion of left-handed participants and those with non-removable metal objects. Address whether these were the sole exclusion criteria for fMRI participants. Justify excluding local Behavioral Science Research Master students and discuss its impact on generalizability. 9. Provide context for the sequential Trust Game and HETG. Explain its influence on the experimental design. 10. Describe participant training or instructions for the Trust Game and HETG to shed light on decision-making processes. 11. Provide a detailed explanation of the payment structure, outlining the specific criteria and mechanisms through which participants could earn the additional €16 based on their decisions and Player A's choices. 12. Elaborate on the reasoning behind programming the Investor's choices. This additional information will enhance readers' comprehension of the programming's purpose and its importance in the study. 13. Explain how the measures address research questions and why computational modeling suits ambiguity-resolution. 14. Clarify why participants expressing disbelief in the task were excluded and its relevance to study goals and biases. 15. Provide context for variations in model fit, especially for participants with lower predicted reciprocation values. 16. Highlight practical implications of observed model differences, even if not statistically significant. 17. Discuss limitations of not correcting for multiple tests and consider reporting effect sizes and confidence intervals. 18. The last paragraph in the "Task" subsection may benefit from additional explanations or a specific diagram to visualize the trial distribution and the relationship between investments and endowments. 19. Provide a more explicit rationale for selecting trust and investment as fixed effects. Explain the significance of using a sum-to-zero contrast scheme and clarify the inclusion/exclusion of random effects like the trust-investment interaction. 20. Briefly explain why specific statistical methods were chosen for analysis to aid reader understanding. Results 20. Use concise language to describe modeling procedures for easier comprehension. 21. Provide context for variations in model fit, especially for participants with lower predicted reciprocation values. 22. Clarify practical implications of observed model differences, even if not statistically significant. 23. Discuss limitations of not correcting for multiple tests and consider reporting effect sizes and confidence intervals. 24. Rearrange references to Appendices B and C and consider adding more detail to Appendix B. Discussion 25. Present results thematically rather than enumerating them for improved readability. 26. Strengthen integration of existing literature by explicitly referencing relevant studies and theories. 27. Restate the study's hypotheses and summarize alignment with or deviations from them. Explore practical implications of individual differences. 28. Organize a dedicated section on future research directions, outlining key questions and how future research might address them. 29. Discuss broader findings' implications for real-world social decision-making scenarios. Reviewer #2: The authors of this paper present an experiment aimed at understanding how individuals reciprocate trust in ambiguous situations within the trust game. Through computational modeling, the study reveals that individuals frequently rely on social heuristics grounded in past interactions when the degree of trust is clear. While the paper has the potential to significantly contribute to the existing literature, there are several areas where it could be improved: - "This raises the possibility that people might use these ambiguous situations to make strategic decisions that maximize both self-interest and self-image"; I think it is more precise to say "...while preserving their self-image." - "we can about how people resolve": I think there is a typo here. - In discussing motivations for reciprocating trust, the authors might benefit from mentioning also the recent "moral preferences hypothesis." This theory suggests that many prosocial behaviors, including trustworthiness, emanate from an inherent moral desire to act rightly, sometimes beyond mere distributional preferences. As a review article, the authors could consult: https://royalsocietypublishing.org/doi/full/10.1098/rsif.2020.0880. This may necessitate considerable revisions, especially given the paper's reliance on modeling reciprocation using inequity-aversion. - The fairness norm model employed by the authors bears resemblance to the model by Kessler and Leider: https://pubsonline.informs.org/doi/abs/10.1287/mnsc.1110.1341. For a more comprehensive overview and to draw clearer distinctions from prior work, I recommend consulting this review article on utility functions focused on formalizing moral preferences: https://www.aeaweb.org/articles?id=10.1257/jel.20221613 - "Here, given that M (the multiplier) is usually fixed at 4 in these games": Typically, the multiplier is set at 3, and this seems to be the case in the provided formula as well. So, perhaps this is just a typo. - It is not clear why the authors name the fourth strategy as "heuristic". I have the feeling that also the third strategy is a heuristics. It seems similar to what Rand and colleagues call "social heuristic" (e.g., https://www.nature.com/articles/ncomms4677). - Referring to the trust game as the "Investment Game" to prevent behavioral bias could be counterproductive, as the term "investment" might introduce its own set of biases. - The clarity and quality of the figures should be enhanced, as they currently appear blurry. - A "Limitations" subsection would be a valuable addition. It is important to acknowledge inherent limitations in experimental research. For instance, while the number of trials might offer high power, the relatively small sample size hinders in-depth exploration of participant heterogeneity. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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PONE-D-23-24513R1Reciprocity in Ambiguous Situations: Default Psychological Strategies Underlying Ambiguity-Resolution in Moral Decision-MakingPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Galvan, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. There are still several comments by one of the reviewers that should be addressed and would improve the manuscript. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 18 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Although the authors have made an effort to address most of my concerns, further refinement could enhance the manuscript's comprehensiveness and robustness. Specifically: 1. The manuscript would benefit from deeper discussions on behavioral trends and decision-making in ambiguous situations, with a stronger connection to psychological or moral theories. These sections, notably around pages 20 and 21, could be strengthened with additional literature citations. For example, the papers "Attributional Ambiguity Reduces Charitable Giving by Relaxing Social Norms" and "Social Game Theory: Preferences, Perceptions, and Choices" are examples of relevant literature that can enrich these discussions. While the cited papers may provide a starting point, authors should consider a broader range of literature for a richer theoretical foundation. 2. Figures 1 and 2 should be improved for better legibility. This includes enhancing font size and image clarity. Additionally, the description of Figure 1 and the table in Appendix B requires more detailed explanation to ensure that readers can understand the experimental design and results without ambiguity. The manuscript currently has two appendices labeled "Appendix B" which could lead to confusion and should be rectified. 3. The limitations section should reflect the use of a student population and suggest the need for a more diverse sample in future studies. 4. For enhanced clarity it is advised that the figure currently labeled as "Appendix B," which depicts different strategies, should be more comprehensively explained within the text. Specifically, this explanation should clearly connect to the detailed description of the parameter space provided on page 15. Such integration will help readers understand the significance of the strategies in the context of the study's outcomes and the computational modeling approach the authors have employed. 5. Ensure the accuracy of the reference list, particularly for citations like Capraro et al., to maintain consistency and correctness. Reviewer #2: The authors have addressed all my comments. I have only noticed that many references are missing from the new reference list. I suggest the authors to make sure that there is a matching between in-text references and bibliography. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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