Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionNovember 14, 2023 |
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PONE-D-23-37731Research on Risk Management Incentive Strategy Based on the Green Financial EcosystemPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Lu, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 17 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This is an interesing research about green financial ecosystem risk management incentive strategy. The method of game model is applicable. The basic research process is complete. However, there are some questions needed to be responsed as follows. (1) clarify the research gap in the introduction section, do not write it in the last prograph; (2) add literature review. You can move some contents from the part of introduction but make sure to rewrite this part, because literature review in the original introduction part is just a list of reference with short depicion (3) I dont believe "Differential Game Model" is a good section title. Please change it. (4) It seems that Model Assumption does not exactly match research questions. (5) In Model Simulation, parameter values are set without reason. Do they realize the simulaiton of reality? It looks more like an experiment report. Reviewer #2: The paper focuses on improving efforts and benefits of risk management in the green financial ecosystem, involving innovators, green financial institutions, and regulators. Three contract modes (No-incentive Contract, Cost-sharing Contract, Synergistic Cooperation Contract) are explored for optimal effort levels and returns on risk management. The findings highlight increased incentives and returns under the latter two contracts, with Synergistic Cooperation Contract showing the highest effort levels and Pareto optimization. The research enhances understanding of cooperation in risk management and provides practical insights for stakeholders in green financial ecosystems. The paper systematically investigates three contract modes, providing insights into their impact on incentives, effort levels, and returns. This analysis contributes to the understanding of contractual mechanisms in the green financial ecosystem. The use of numerical simulation analysis adds empirical support to the theoretical findings, enhancing the robustness of the results. This approach strengthens the credibility of the proposed optimal levels and their implications. The identification of the Synergistic Cooperation Contract as achieving Pareto optimization is a significant contribution. It implies a win-win situation for all participating subjects and the green financial ecosystem, emphasizing the importance of collaborative efforts. The study's findings hold practical relevance for risk managers in green financial ecosystems, offering realistic references for decision-making. This practical applicability enhances the impact of the research. However, while the paper acknowledges the importance of green financial risk management, there is a lack of in-depth exploration of specific risks and their mitigation strategies. A more detailed discussion would provide a holistic view of challenges in the green financial ecosystem, and a qualitative discussion of other approaches that have been introduced in the literature, using similar models, such as A Paradigm Shift Toward Satisfaction, Realism and Efficiency in Wireless Networks Resource Sharing, doi: 10.1109/MNET.011.2000368, is needed. The paper introduces three contract modes but does not delve deeply into the theoretical mechanisms underlying each mode. A more thorough theoretical discussion would enhance the reader's understanding of the contractual dynamics. The introduction provides a qualitative overview of previous studies on green finance, but a more structured presentation, perhaps in the form of a literature review, could enhance the coherence and depth of the introduction. The paper lacks details on the reproducibility of the numerical simulation analysis. Providing sufficient information on parameters and methodologies would enable other researchers to validate and build upon the results. The paper contributes to the field by examining contractual modes in the green financial ecosystem and identifying the Synergistic Cooperation Contract as an optimal approach. The novelty lies in the combination of contractual analysis and numerical simulations. While the numerical simulation adds empirical support, a more detailed explanation of the simulation methodology, parameters, and sensitivity analyses would enhance the technical depth of the paper. This information is crucial for understanding the robustness of the findings. The paper is generally well-structured, but the introduction could benefit from a more organized presentation of previous studies on green finance. Additionally, clearer visual aids or tables summarizing key numerical results would improve the presentation's clarity. The conclusion briefly mentions the contributions but could elaborate on potential avenues for future research. Suggestions for further investigations or extensions of the current model would enhance the paper's completeness. In summary, the paper makes valuable contributions to understanding contract modes in the green financial ecosystem. Addressing the highlighted points would further strengthen its impact and provide a more comprehensive perspective on green financial risk management. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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Research on Risk Management Incentive Strategy Based on the Green Financial Ecosystem PONE-D-23-37731R1 Dear Dr. Lu, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Xin Shen Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for the revision. Authors have addressed my comments raised in the previous review, although some parts still need to be improved, and I feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication. Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed thoroughly by the authors. I have no further concerns about this manuscript. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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