Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionApril 7, 2023 |
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PONE-D-23-09955Cost-effectiveness of one-year adjuvant Trastuzumab therapy in treatment for early-stage breast cancer patients with HER2+ in VietnamPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Nguyen, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 19 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please include captions for your Supporting Information files at the end of your manuscript, and update any in-text citations to match accordingly. Please see our Supporting Information guidelines for more information: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/supporting-information. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. 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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Title should change to indicate that the chemotherapy used that is paclitaxel unless a scenario analysis with other chemotherapy is conducted Cost - It is not clear why the authors chose to use 2014 cost information. Primary cost data could left the results more as a number of resource use elements could have changed between 2014 and 2023 The two key resources cited could not be retrieved to verify the cost methodology employed since societal perspective is said to be used. Are these published in peer review journals? Authors should consider summarizing the methods used for cost estimation in the methods section Cost perspective is said to be societal, page 7 line 21 communicates a different perspective High-quality evidence from multiple model input sources is not always available - in this case the use of 2014 cost data and decisions based on these model recommendations are subject to costly uncertainty. Authors should consider estimating the cost of existing uncertainty in terms of value of added information to check if it is potentially cost effective to seek for more evidence Reviewer #2: PONE-D-23-09955 Cost-effectiveness analysis of Trastuzumab in treatment for early-stage breast cancer patients with HER2+ in Vietnam Thank you for the opportunity to review this paper describing a cost-utility analysis of trastuzumab in a specific breast cancer patient group, in Vietnam. This appears to be a well-conducted study, using advisory groups to review the model design and input parameters. The study adds to the literature on the economics of trastuzumab, for which funding decisions have attracted debate in most jurisdictions. My main concern with this work is the discussion of limitations, – and they are important limitations: lack of Vietnamese clinical data, and (some) utility values. The authors identify the limitations clearly in the Discussion, but very briefly by simply stating them. It might be helpful to readers if the authors could discuss the possible effect of these limitations on their findings; for example, is there an expected direction of bias, so do we expect the model to under-or over-estimate the ICER? Or are the ICERs so far above the threshold that the conclusion is likely to be robust regardless? I also found the paper a little unclear on the question of perspective. The authors state that they take a societal perspective. However, there is no discussion of elements of a societal perspective such as productivity – the only component beyond the payer’s perspective appears to be inclusion of out-of-pocket payments. Further, it was not clear to me as a reader, where these out-of-pocket payments arose; there is discussion of different percentages of coverage (eg 60% of trastuzumab costs, then 100%, 5%, 80% of other fees) but without a good knowledge of the Vietnamese healthcare system and its funding, I wasn’t clear here who was paying for what. Table 1 then describes costs for each health state, that were incurred ‘by’ or ‘for’ the patient; again I was unclear how the cost-sharing works in this context. Perhaps a brief description in the Introduction, on reimbursement and coverage in the Vietnamese system, would be helpful for the international readership of PLoS-ONE. I had two more minor observations related to the information in Table 1: Utilities: I was surprised that the utility of the disease-free state after loco-regional recurrence was lower than during the recurrence. This is probably due to the need to use multiple sources. Could the authors make some explanation of this, in the text? Cost estimates: for transparency and generalisability, I would like to understand what has been included in each of the cost groups (eg ‘direct medical costs’ ‘direct non-medical costs’ and the state-specific costs. The components are listed in the supporting information, but I couldn’t see how they related to the Table 1 numbers. Perhaps a simple flowchart would help? Some minor observations and typos: Abstract Check for consistency of using ‘.’ or ‘,’ separators in numbers – example in the abstract (12.635 US$, should be 12,635?) and also elsewhere in the paper. Sensitivity analysis is described as two-way, but in the Methods and Results it is descried as one-way - and the results look like a one way analysis Introduction I suggest checking the journal’s convention on whether to use capital letters for drug names (eg trastuzumab, paclitaxel) compared to brand names (eg Herceptin). Also check consistency of spelling of paclitaxel. Methods P4 line 25: reflects rather than reflexes? Table 1: cardiac events rather than cardiact events; Hazard ratio rather than Harazd; DAV definition different from the one in the text P5 line 6 ‘experts were given written informed consent’ – I wasn’t sure what this meant – did the experts give their consent to participate, or did someone consent to allow them to participate? P7 lines 12 -13: I found the sentence about IHC unclear, as I’m not expert in pathology, so wasn’t sure what these groups were. Reference year: the text states that all costs were updated in 2020 (eg P7 lines 28). Were costs collected in 2014 inflated to 2020 values? Results P9 line 5: vial rather than viral Discussion P13 line 7: findings rather than finding P13 line 12: treatment rather than treat men ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Cost-effectiveness of one-year adjuvant Trastuzumab therapy in treatment for early-stage breast cancer patients with HER2+ in Vietnam PONE-D-23-09955R1 Dear Dr. Ha Thu Nguyen We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. 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PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: No further comments. The authors have specifically address issues about the perspective adopted and further conducted value of information analysis Reviewer #3: All the comments are addressed accordingly and results is acceptable. This article could play important role for use of trastuzumab in low middle income countries ********** 7. 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