Peer Review History
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PONE-D-23-33257Development and characterization of a Gucy2d-cre mouse to selectively manipulate a subset of inhibitory spinal dorsal horn interneuronsPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Serafin, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The following points of the reviewers require special attention and need to be addressed:- Was an immunostaining for a molecular marker of Gucy2d+ olfactory neurons performed? If not, explain why.- Concerning Fig. 3 and 4, please clarify the issues upon reporter and Gucy2d expression.- Provide check for leaky expression of tdTomato or SunGFP1 and report what control animals were used in the experiments with AAV injection. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 05 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: In this study, Serafin and colleagues generated a Gucy2d-Cre mouse line to facilitate the manipulation of inhibitory dynorphin interneurons in the mouse spinal dorsal horn. They used CRISPR/Cas9 to knock in the Cre recombinase into the endogenous Gucy2d locus of single-cell C57BL/6J embryos. Founder (F0) mice were bred with two Cre-dependent reporter lines, and double-heterozygous offspring showed reporter labeling of a larger-than-expected population of inhibitory neurons, which included spinal and brain regions where Gucy2d expression has not been reported. The confounding effect of transient Gucy2d expression during development was discarded after analyzing adult Gucy2d-Cre mice injected with AAV-CAG-FLEX-tdTomato viral vectors. The authors suggest that Gucy2d expression at levels below detection, yet sufficient to induce Cre-dependent reporter, accounts for the unexpected cell labeling. They also discuss the limitations and suitability of using Gucy2d-Cre mice to target a wide population of inhibitory interneurons, and Gucy2d+ olfactory neurons. The authors provide a valid justification for generating a new Cre-driver strain, and the choice of the Gucy2d locus seems well-grounded. Although the Gucy2d-Cre strain might not be ideal for the purpose it was initially designed for, it might still be useful in other contexts. It is not uncommon that Cre-driver strains exhibit inconsistent and off-target Cre activity, and I believe that expanding the characterization of Cre expression in Gucy2d-Cre mice could increase the reliability of this strain and help explain the unexpected results. Moreover, I would like to suggest a few modifications to the figures that would make information more readily available to the readers. My questions and comments are listed below. 1) Fig. 1A – A scheme showing the genomic target site (Gucy2d gene, with introns and exons), Cre-donor vector (indicating the sites where homology recombination is expected), and the resulting knock-in allele, would convey more details of the integration strategy. 2) Fig. 1B – Did the authors test whether unexpected cell labeling also occurred in the olfactory epithelium? Immunostaining for a molecular marker of Gucy2d+ olfactory neurons (such as phosphodiesterase 2A (PDE2A), for example) could help address this question. 3) Fig. 3 – Using arrows (or another symbol) to point out signal colocalization would be really helpful. In Fig. 3C, it is especially difficult to visualize cyan-only (Gucy2d) and cyan + green (Gucy2d + Gucy2d-Sun1GFP) cells. Alternatively, another panel where the different color channels are shown separately could be added. Moreover, it is mentioned in the main text that Gucy2d mRNA was localized to laminae I-II, and a substantial number of Gucy2d-Sun1GFP nuclei was present in lamina III-V; could the authors delimitate these laminae in the figure? 4) Fig. 4 – It is mentioned that reporter expression is clearly present in laminae III-V of the spinal dorsal horn of Gucy2d-Cre x AAV8-FLEX-tdTom animals, however, only laminae I-III are indicated. Moreover, does this reporter expression differ from the observed in Gucy2d x Ai9 animals? 5) Fig. 5 –The similarities between the top (A-D) and bottom (E-H) panels are not clearly visible, probably due to magnification and background differences. Could the authors point out in the images what they are trying to convey? 6) Were the same founders bred with the two reporter lines? In my understanding, Figs 2a and 3a are representative images of, respectively, tdTomato and SunGFP1 labeling in the SDH, but it seems like there are substantially fewer positive cells in 3a. What were the overall differences (if any) observed in labeling with each reporter? 7) What controls were used to check for leaky expression of tdTomato or SunGFP1? And what control animals were used in the experiments with AAV injection? 8) Was Cre expression evaluated (by using ISH or IF, for example)? 9) It is intriguing that approximately 60% of Gucy2d-Sun1GFP cells in the SDH were not labeled with either Gucy2d or Pdyn ISH probes. What is the feasibility of sorting Sun1GFP+ cells for an RNA-sequencing analysis? Can the authors discuss some experimental strategies that would help determine the identity of these cells? Reviewer #2: The manuscript by Serafin et al, describes the generation and characterization of a new Gucy2d-cre transgenic mouse line. The manuscript explains that these mouse lines can be used to target specific populations of spinal cord neurons as well as neurons in supraspinal regions of the CNS. The experiments were well performed, and the claims of the study are all reasonable. I have a few minor comments on the texts which will only require minor revisions. 1. It is not clear whether all founders (the three that bred) were analyzed. Although not generally acknowledged in many publications, different CRIPR knockin founders can behave differently from each other with different expression patterns (similar to BAC transgenic mice). 2. The paper cites the study Boyle et al to describe the mixed inhibitory and excitatory populations of dynorphin neurons. The MS should also cite Huang et al, 2018 Nature Neurosci as this study describes this population further as well as showing the functional consequences of only activating dynorphin neurons (albeit the mixed excitatory and inhibitory classes). 3. Related to point 2. As detailed in Huang et al, 2018, excitatory neurons are found in the lumbar and cervical enlargements (with a medial location) and are not present in thoracic segments. 4. Why was TgN expression not expected? Pydn-neurons are present in the spinal and parts of the interpolar TgN. 5. Lines 311-116. An additional comment should be added to the description of the Lbx1 and Pdyn intersectional approach used by the Goulding/Ma labs. Namely, this approach likely captures lineages of neurons which extend to ablation of neurons beyond the adult expression of dynorphin. 6. Line 336, sentence needs addition of a “the”. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Mark Hoon ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Development and characterization of a Gucy2d-cre mouse to selectively manipulate a subset of inhibitory spinal dorsal horn interneurons PONE-D-23-33257R1 Dear Dr. Serafin, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Karl-Wilhelm Koch, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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