Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 11, 2023 |
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PONE-D-23-32555Optimizing Assessment of Neuromodulation in Persons with Spinal Cord InjuryPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Creech, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 04 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The current study is on a topic of electrophysiological testing for spasticity in people with spinal cord injury. This topic is very important for collecting meaningful outcomes efficiently in clinical research. This study also highlights the understudied area in the methodological barriers of traditional testing. As a research paper, this manuscript is very well written. There is some critical information missing as I pointed out below. A minor revision by adding methodological details and discussion is recommended for considering publication in this journal. Review comments: Title: As the authors alluded throughout the manuscript, this result can be applied to only people with incomplete SCI and 1Hz stimulation. This study was not exactly assessing neuromodulation yet while it can be used in the future after further validation. The current title misleads audience. I recommend that the authors changes the title to “Optimizing Assessment of Low Frequency H-reflex Depression in Persons with Spinal Cord Injury.“ Page 5-6: Add how to determine which leg that received the stimulation and recording. I assume depending on dominant or more spasticity. Page 7: the following sentence needs to be moved before the Page 6 last paragraph to define H1. “The H-reflex evoked by the first stimulus was considered the control reflex (H1). The 10 reflexes elicited following H1 were considered conditioned reflexes (H2, H3, etc.).” Page 7: The authors might want to add more details of EMG analysis including bandpass filter, software they used, etc. Page 8 line 140: The authors need to justify the following statement by references. Friedman test would be recommended based on the sample size. “Despite this, we utilized the repeated measures ANOVA as it is robust against violations of normality.” Page 6-7: There is no paired pulse depression study protocol was mentioned. It was implied later in the data analysis, but it has to be added following the LFD protocol. Discussion The authors may want to discuss or add limitations of grouping incomplete SCI. There are heterogeneity of spasticity and motoneuron function (peripheral nerve health, muscle health) which likely impact the results in this study participant group. Paired pulse depression with shorter intervals (i.e., 60ms) can be used for a different physiology such as presynaptic inhibition, so that this 5 pulses rule may not be applicable. The authors need to address this in the discussion. We do not know whether very high correlation indicates the sensitivity of 5 train LFD is enough to detect a therapeutic efficacy for spasticity in some other treatment such as spinal cord stimulation. The authors need to acknowledge the use of LFD and PPD as outcomes for other therapeutic modalities and discuss the study limitation about very specific 1Hz stimulation study design. Reviewer #2: The authors present results from a sub-study of 20 individuals with incomplete spinal cord injury to compare H-reflex depression following various abbreviated trains to an 11-pulse train to see if a shorter evaluation could be utilized to study neuromodulation. Authors conclude that a 5-pulse train elicits similar results to the full 11-pulse train and recommend it for use. The manuscript will be strengthened if the authors consider the following points: 1. Authors should provide more detail about the repeated measures ANOVA that were used to assess M-Wave reliability. For example, were separate analyses performed for each individual across the pulses or were all individuals analyzed together? What factors were included? 2. Given the small sample size, Table 2 should include 95% confidence intervals for the Mean difference vs LFD and for the Pearson correlation coefficient. The R-squared column can be removed, since someone can easily compute that if they want. 3. To further provide evidence of the similarity between the 5-pulse train and the 11-pulse LFD, authors should add a scatter plot of the two measures, so that readers can see the distribution/spread of values. Minor points: 1. line 82 - should "knees fully extended" be "legs fully extended"? 2. line 135: "The data was" should be "The data were" 3. lines 138-139, I'm guessing P40, P65, etc. refer to certain participant IDs, though that is not immediately clear. Authors should clarify that. Since these violate the assumption of normality, it might be worth including the H- and M- wave tracings for one of those participants in supplemental material for comparison with Figure 1. Reviewer #3: This report examines the number of pulses that are optimal to evoke low-frequency depression in subjects with incomplete spinal cord injury. Whereas typically, 11 pulses are used, the authors suggest fewer pulses are almost as effective, ie. five as compared to 11. In addition, the authors compared two pulses in a paired-pulse paradigm with serial pulses. It seems interesting to understand the variations between individual individuals and somewhat surprising that there would not be an individually optimized number of pulses. While this data is quite convincing, it is a fairly simple technical observation, and its overall impacts on the field are not evident other than influencing people to explore shorter pulse trains. This may shorten sessions with research subjects and reduce the burden in H-reflex testing. It may be helpful to indicate why some individuals have any evocable H- reflex, and others do not after spinal cord injury. For example, there is no apparent difference in the clinical parameters provided. It's not clear in Figure 2 which variability measured is being shown- standard deviation versus standard error? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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Optimizing assessment of low frequency H-reflex depression in persons with spinal cord injury PONE-D-23-32555R1 Dear Dr. Creech, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. We thank you for your replies to the reviewers and addition of requested documentation to highlight the importance of your findings. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Alexander Rabchevsky, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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