Peer Review History
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PONE-D-23-24488Factors associated with parent-teacher hyperactivity/inattention screening discrepancy: Findings from a UK national samplePLOS ONE Dear Dr. Chan, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. These are described below. Address every point raised by the reviewer and indicate how the manuscript has been amended to reflect the changes. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 16 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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You also have the option of uploading the data as Supporting Information files, but we would recommend depositing data directly to a data repository if possible. We will update your Data Availability statement on your behalf to reflect the information you provide. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. 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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: In this study, the authors examine the influence of multiple factors (pertaining to child’s characteristics, parent-rater’s characteristics and family’s characteristics) on cross-informant agreement between parents and teachers on the hyperactivity-inattention subscale of the Strengths and Difficulties Questionnaire. To this end, a multinomial regression analysis was performed using a large representative sample (n = 7977) of the UK Mental Health of Children and Young People survey. Results showed that overall cross-informant agreement of parent and teacher was low. Moreover, concerning child’s characteristics only the child’s sex (but not age) was associated with higher likelihood of parent-teacher discrepancy. With respect to parent-rater’s characteristics, age, mental health issues and educational level were significantly associated with rater disagreement. Among the family characteristics, SES, number of working parents, and ethnicity emerged as significant predictors in the analysis. General comments The authors provide a concise but systematic overview of the literature concerned with the factors influencing parent-rater disagreement in ADHD symptoms. The relevance of the study is clearly stated and straightforward. I agree with the authors that there is a need of studies examining the potential influence of the multiple factors simultaneously in one and the same analysis - as done by the authors. I think the study would attract researchers and practitioners in the field, but the manuscript should be improved in some respects. I therefore recommend some minor revisions. (1) In the theory section, the findings on the factors associated with parent-teacher agreement are presented very systematically, but sometimes the literature is presented too briefly. For instance, it is stated that hyperactivity-impulsivity symptoms decrease with age (p.4) – whereas this is true for the hyperactivity symptoms, there is evidence to suggest that impulsivity and risk behavior increase in adolescents with ADHD compared to children with ADHD. Likewise, it is true that ADHD has been reliably reported more commonly in males (p. 4). Yet, I would appreciate it if the authors could go into more detail about the underlying mechanisms contributing to this gender bias (e.g., different symptom expressions in boys and girls contribute to under-identification of ADHD in girl. The inattantive subtype of ADHD is more prevalent in girls, whereas the combined subtype is more prevalent in boys). (2) I think it is also important to point out that the existence of a discrepancy between observers says nothing about the accuracy of their respective judgments. Because both informants assess the child's separate environments (home versus school), some of the observed behavioral discrepancy may well reflect true differences in the child's behavior in the two contexts instead of reflecting an informant bias. That is, statements about the accuracy of the respective informants can only be made based on validation with a clinical interview - which, unfortunately, is rarely done in research. I would appreciate if the authors could add a brief overview of this issue in the theory section (e.g., this issue is well presented in the papers by Los Reyes et al., 2015, 2019). Likewise, it should also be mentioned in the discussion that that the present findings do not inform about rater accuracy. (3) On p. 8, the authors present their hypotheses and “predicted that parents with lower education may identify fewer problems, even if the child presents with inattention-hyperactivity symptoms, which will result in discrepancies with teacher reports”. I think, this hypothesis cannot be referred from the present data. Since no clinical interview was additionally performed with the children, information on the actual inattention-hyperactivity symptoms of the children is missing so we do not know if the child presents with respective symptoms or not. The authors should thus rephrase the sentence. (4) Although the statistical analysis is appropriate for the question at hand, I wonder whether carrying out a comparable analysis on a latent (instead of on a manifest) level would be possible given the large sample size. (However, I am not an expert in this field, so I am not sure whether those methods exist). (5) In the discussion, I would like the authors to elaborate on the effect sizes of the respective characteristics. The discussion summarizes the results well, makes appropriate comparisons with previous research, and addresses possible reasons for inconsistent findings from other studies. What I still miss in the discussion is that the authors elaborate on the effect sizes of the significant results – especially given the large sample. For example, it can be seen from Tables 2 and 3 that some of the significant factors examined only show small effects on parent-teacher agreement, while others show larger effects. In my opinion, adding a few sentences on the relevance of the respective significant characteristics would strengthen the discussion. References Los Reyes A de, Augenstein TM, Wang M et al. (2015) The validity of the multi-informant approach to assessing child and adolescent mental health. Psychol Bull, 141:858–900. https://doi.org/10.1037/a0038498 521 Los Reyes A de, Cook CR, Gresham FM et al. (2019) Informant discrepancies in assessments of psychosocial functioning in school-based services and research: Review and directions for future research. J Sch Psychol, 523 74:74–89. https://doi.org/10.1016/j.jsp.2019.0 ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: This is an interesting study on a relevant problem faced by clinician in the diagnosis of ADHD in children and adolescents, the pervasiveness of the symptoms. Symptoms of innatention and/or hyperactivity/impulsivity must be reported by parents and other informants, mostly by teachers that normally allocate a subtantial amount of time with children. Based on a large sample of children and adolescents and using validated questionnaires, the study focuses on the parent-teacher agreement of ADHD symptoms bringing new and important findings for discussion. The statistical methods were well conducted and reported, as well the results. The discussion effectively explores the findings, draws relevant comparisons to prior research, and identify potential explanations for discrepancies in results observed in other studies. The authors also responded to the reviewers’ suggestions appropriately. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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