Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionFebruary 9, 2023 |
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PONE-D-23-02612Identification and Classification of Urban Employment Centers Based on Big Data: A Case Study of BeijingPLOS ONE Dear Dr. wang, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== The reviewers have recommended some revisions to your manuscript. Therefore, I invite you to respond to the reviewers' comments and revise your manuscript. I also agree that the authors need to add more discussions about the implications of this research on local planning. Besides, some relevant references are missing in this manuscript, such as Yu et al., Journal of Transport Geography (2015) which proposed a CBD delimitation method. It could be better to provide a wide review of the literature. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 28 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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I also agree that the authors need to add more discussions about the implications of this research on local planning. Besides, some relevant references are missing in this manuscript, such as Yu et al., Journal of Transport Geography (2015) which proposed a CBD delimitation method. It could be better to provide a wide review of the literature. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors have conducted a relatively complete study in which the identification and classification of Beijing urban employment centers were carried out. I think the paper is interesting but have some concerns for the authors to consider: 1. I recommend separating the study's background and current situation in the first paragraph of the introduction. And summarize the research shortcomings, leading to the research objectives. 2. The authors should summarize parts 2.1 and 2.2, respectively, summarizing the advantages and disadvantages of the research methods and data. 3. Figure 1 should have a map of China, illustrating Beijing's location in China. The legend cannot obscure the map. 4. Line 182: The reference position needs to be adjusted. Please check the entire manuscript. 5. The second paragraph of 3.2.1 is the research methodology. Please modify its position. 6. Ethics statement is not methodology. It needs to be deleted. 7. The authors had to describe the DBSCAN algorithm, XGBoost, and the K-Means clustering algorithm in detail as core methods of the study. 8. The study's results can guide Beijing's planning, so the discussion needs a separate section, especially policy recommendations. Reviewer #2: In this manuscript, the authors proposed a new research direction on urban employment space based on mobile phone location data and micro-enterprise data: the identification and classification of employment center, so as to solve the problems of previous employment center system research due to large space units and lack of commuting data. Overall, the paper is well organized and written, but it needs some improvement before acceptance for publication. My major comments are as follows: In the Methodology part, four methods were used in the manuscript: Shannon-Wiener Diversity Index, XGBoost, DBSCAN, K-means. Why are those methods chosen? How to justify their appropriateness? It is suggested to add some explanations or comparisons with other similar methods to make your method more convincing. Additionally, it is recommended to draw a large flowchart to illustrate the role of these methods in different stages of the study. This will make it easier for readers to understand the authors’ intentions. The classification of employment centers is a little confusing, it could be that I missed some important detail, I would therefore suggest the authors elaborate on the significance of the classification, or analyze the functions or influencing factors of employment centers at different levels. The index of commuting data, the authors described it in line 258 as follows: average commuting aggregation force, but actually the authors calculated the commuting time (Table 4) and in line 396, this index became average commuting distance. There are confusion and inconsistency for this index. Please clarify its definition and make it consistent throughout the text. In terms of the organization of the paper, firstly, it is better to have a paragraph outlining the rest of the article at the end of the introduction Section. Besides, in the conclusion part, presenting the contributions and innovations of the article in a detailed and organized manner through several points is more recommended. Minor comments are as follows: 1. Language of the manuscript-at-hand needs to be revisited, i.e., particularly, in terms of the sentence structure and the punctuation. 2. Line 415, “The second type of employment centers” should be “The third type” to be logical. 3. Maps in figure 1, 2, 4, 5, 6 need to be supplemented with scale bar. 4. Please supplement Figure 7 with some key to the symbols to illustrate the three types of employment centers you divide. Given the above major comments, I recommend a major revision for this manuscript before it can be considered for publication. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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Identification and Classification of Urban Employment Centers Based on Big Data: A Case Study of Beijing PONE-D-23-02612R1 Dear Dr. wang, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. 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Your research findings and insights are valuable additions to the scholarly discourse in our community, and we believe that your work will make a meaningful impact on the academic community and beyond. The rigorous review process highlighted the importance and quality of your research, and we commend your dedication and expertise in conducting this study. We anticipate that your article will stimulate further discussion, inspire future research endeavors, and contribute to advancing knowledge in your area of expertise. We are honored to have the opportunity to feature your work in our publication. Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. 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Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #3: COMMENTS: I read the manuscript titled “Identification and Classification of Urban Employment Centers Based on Big Data: A Case Study of Beijing” with keen interest; the idea is worth investigating and well fits to the scope of PLOS ONE. I am thankful to the authors for submitting an interesting manuscript to the PLOS ONE Journal. However, the manuscript has some issue that needs to be corrected before final publication. The study should be enriched with the following related studies regarding Big Data Analytics & Economic Growth: The list of missing research includes (but is not restricted to): • Big data challenges: Prioritizing by decision-making process using Analytic Network Process technique. DOI: 10.1007/s11042-017-5161-4. • A Review of Policies concerning development of Big Data Industry in Pakistan. DOI: 10.1109/ICOMET.2018.8346315. • A New Solution for City Distribution to Achieve Environmental Benefits within the Trend of Green Logistics: A Case Study in China. DOI: 10.3390/su12208312. • OVERALL EVALUATION I. Accept II. Overall, the manuscript deserves to be published in “PLOS ONE”. I would suggest the author consider the above comments and revise the manuscript accordingly. Lastly, although a potential contribution to the research knowledge, I would suggest checking the word limit with the scope of the journal. ********** 7. 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