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PONE-D-23-39113Analysis and prediction of compressive and split-tensile strength of secondary steel fibre reinforced concrete based on RBF fuzzy neural network modelPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Lin, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 20 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The paper titled 'Analysis and prediction of compressive and split-tensile strength of secondary steel fibre reinforced concrete based on RBF fuzzy neural network model' show no novelty for the following reseaons: the data used to generate the models are very limited only 22 points. the paper is written like a report and there is no criticalty. the paper seem to have expermental work it is unclear how that was conducted and why it is unclear why the investigation focused on spliting and compressive testing the title is not reflective of the paper the conclusion is poorly written the intoduction lacks in depth review Reviewer #2: Accurate analysis of the strength of steel-fibre-reinforced concrete (SFRC) is important for ensuring construction quality and safety. The cubic compression and splitting tensile tests of steel fibers of different varieties, lengths and contents were carried out in the manuscript. On this basis, the RBF fuzzy neural network prediction model of the strength of secondary steel fiber reinforced concrete was established. The improved prediction model is more efficient and reasonable in accuracy than the previous algorithm. Generally speaking, the structure, goals and results are clear and reasonable. Therefore, I suggest the manuscript be accepted for publication after minor revisions. Some of the specific review comments are listed. (1) It is recommended to further refine and simplify the abstract. (2)In order to illustrate the process of RBF network, please mark input layer, hidden layer and output layer clearly in Fig.10. (3)The name of horizontal coordinate in Fig. 8 is not clearly described, please modify it. And verify the coordinate names in the other diagrams. (4)The RBF fuzzy neural network was established in the manuscript to predict compressive and cleavage stresses. Among the three inputs of the improved model, how does the author consider the values of steel fiber types? (5)The three types of steel fiber photos are not clear, so it is recommended to give the photo of a single fiber and the corresponding geometric diagram. (6)Steel fiber can comprehensively improve the physical and mechanical properties and durability of concrete. In general, the benchmark strength is higher, it is suggested why only C25 is used in this study. (7)The slump of concrete is small, should not be able to meet the pumping conditions. If according to the pumping concrete design, what will happen to the performance of the concrete? (8)The writing format of strength symbol is not standard, such as fcf should write fc, SF (SF can also be placed at the superscript site). (9)All variables should be written in italics, and the full text should be consistent. (10)There are some mistakes on spelling, such as Hohai and Hehai. Reviewer #3: Overall Evaluation This paper presents an approach to predicting the strength of secondary steel fiber-reinforced concrete using an RBF fuzzy neural network model. The methodology shows promise in addressing the complexity and variability inherent in concrete strength analysis. However, the paper would benefit from a more thorough clarification of its theoretical underpinnings and a more detailed explanation of the model's application in real-world scenarios to enhance its practical relevance and applicability in the field of concrete technology. 1-Language & Structure The paper's structure and language are mostly clear, but certain improvements could enhance its overall quality. A notable issue is the inconsistent use of British and American English spellings, such as "fibre” and "fiber." Standardizing the spelling throughout the paper would contribute to its professional presentation. A thorough proofreading is recommended to address these issues and refine the paper's language. Additionally, while the “Materials and Methods” section (Sections 2 & 4) is well-detailed, ensuring that it is distinctly separated from the results and discussion sections would improve clarity and flow. 2-Abstract The abstract effectively summarizes the study's primary objectives and methods, focusing on the analysis of steel fiber-reinforced concrete and the use of an RBF fuzzy neural network for prediction. However, it lacks a direct statement of the research's novelty or unique contribution to the field, which is essential for highlighting the significance and relevance of the study. Additionally, the abstract could benefit from a more explicit mention of the key findings or implications of the research, providing readers with a clearer understanding of the study's impact on practical engineering applications. 3-Introduction The introduction section of the paper presents a comprehensive and technically detailed context for the study of secondary steel fiber reinforced concrete, particularly emphasizing its application in mass hydraulic concrete and the challenges associated with crack control. The literature review is thorough, capturing the essence of current research trends and regulatory standards. However, the section would benefit from a clearer delineation of the study's unique contributions and a more gradual integration of specific technical details. The early introduction of the enhanced RBF neural network model, while innovative, calls for a more detailed justification, particularly in contrast to existing models. •Is there a specific reason for the immediate introduction of the RBF neural network model in the introduction? A more gradual approach might be more effective. •Would a more critical evaluation of the cited studies, particularly how they directly inform the current research’s methodology and objectives, enhance the introduction's depth? While the current study provides an insightful analysis of steel fiber reinforced concrete, exploring the impact of various fiber types on mechanical properties, it may be beneficial to also consider recent advancements in concrete strengthening techniques. For instance, the work by Khaleel Ibrahim & Movahedi Rad (2023) on the optimal plastic behavior of RC beams strengthened by carbon fiber polymers offers valuable insights into reliability-based design approaches (http://dx.doi.org/10.3390/polym15030569). Such perspectives could potentially enrich the discussion on alternative strengthening methods and materials in future studies. In addition, the current paper's focus on predicting concrete strength using the RBF fuzzy neural network model is commendable. However, it could be interesting to explore comparisons with other advanced predictive algorithms. For instance, the study by Ghodousian et al. (2021) utilizes a modified PSO algorithm for predicting the compressive strength of pozzolanic concrete. Another research, the investigation by Oveys Ghodousian et al. (2023), which employs a fuzzy model for predicting the outcomes of shear-splitting tests in facade stone bonding, aligns well with the fuzzy approach used in the current study (https://doi.org/10.3390/buildings13051229). Incorporating a comparative analysis with such algorithms might offer a broader perspective on the efficacy of different predictive methods in concrete technology. •How does the study address the apparent scarcity of consistent data on the compressive and splitting tensile strengths of secondary steel fiber reinforced concrete? •Is it possible to include a preliminary discussion on why traditional models may be insufficient compared to the RBF neural network approach? •Recommendation: Consider reorganizing the introduction to provide a more seamless transition from general context to specific research focus, enhancing coherence and readability. •Recommendation: A clearer statement of the research objectives in the context of the identified gaps would set a more focused direction for the study. 4-Test Overview (Materials & Methods) This section provides a foundational overview of the experimental setup for evaluating the properties of secondary steel fiber reinforced concrete. While the description of materials and the general preparation process is comprehensive, the section falls short in detailing the specific mix designs and fiber ratios for each test specimen. This lack of specificity may hinder the ability to fully understand the experimental conditions and to replicate the study. Enhancing the clarity and detail of the mix designs and incorporating more explicit procedural steps would substantially improve the section's usefulness and scientific rigor. •Why are specific mix design IDs and corresponding fiber ratios for each specimen not included? How does this omission affect the clarity and replicability of the research? •Could the authors provide a more detailed explanation of the decision-making process behind the chosen mix ratios and fiber types, including their impact on concrete properties? •Is there an explanation for the observed fiber clumping at higher content levels, and how was this issue addressed during the experiment? •How do the chosen specimen preparation and testing methods align with the study's objectives, and are these methods adequately detailed for replication purposes? •Recommendation: Consider adding a detailed breakdown of each mix design with specific IDs and fiber ratios to enhance clarity and enable replication of the study. •Recommendation: Expand the procedural steps in specimen preparation and testing, including mixing times, curing conditions, and specific testing protocols, to provide a comprehensive understanding of the experimental setup. 5-Conclusion The conclusion effectively summarizes the key findings of the study, highlighting the influence of different steel fiber types on the mechanical properties of concrete and the development of an enhanced RBF fuzzy neural network model. However, it would benefit from streamlining to eliminate repetitive content, particularly in points (1) and (2). Additionally, incorporating a discussion about the limitations of the current study and suggesting potential directions for future research would provide a more comprehensive and balanced view. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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