Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJune 8, 2023 |
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PONE-D-23-17620Patient knowledge in anaesthesia: psychometric development of the RAKQ – the Rotterdam Anaesthesia Knowledge QuestionnairePLOS ONE Dear Dr. van den Heuvel, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 17 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Dear authors, Overall, I find the manuscript may benefit from rearrangement and reanalysis. I included and pointed out specific parts for the comments in the included annotated PDF. In general, please consider the following points: - The study can be better described by Phase 1 - Scale development and Phase 2 - Scale evaluation/validation. Scale and item development must be developed together, not separately. - EFA was used in this study to determine suitable latent dimensions from the data. In my opinion, for knowledge scale, this is redundant. If the items were developed while keeping in mind the scale / concepts they are supposed to represent, unidimensionaly will be quite obvious and any items that do not fit in IRT model can be removed from the scale during IRT. - For the IRT analysis, the sub-questionnaires should be decided based on qualitative and theoretical standpoint, not by EFA findings. - I find the decision to test out and mix different IRT models difficult to justify in this study. The decision must be based on why you want to use such model (ie to determine difficulty only assuming same discrimination etc), not because the model fit the data. - The manuscript will be more representable if it is re-written and reanalyzed. Please consult checklists, for example from Equator network. - S1 & S4, in my opinion, should be in the main manuscript. Reviewer #2: The authors discuss the development of a comprehensive questionnaire covering six distinct knowledge domains in anesthesia. The article is well written. The method applied is clear, well defined, and appropriate for creating and validating an instrument of this nature. The amount of effort that was undertaken to develop this instrument is apparent. I would like to thank the authors for their effort. Having reviewed this manuscript in its entirety, I offer the following comments, questions, and points of clarification: • Suggest adding references for the following: o Line 55 – “Miller et al.” [3] o Line 74 – “Dutch Law on Medical Research” (for readers that are not familiar with Dutch regulatory requirements) o Line 78 – “This study was conducted in compliance with the principles of the Declaration of Helsinki.” • The number of items selected based on factor loading have been described as both 50 (line 30) and 51 (line 94). Please clarify. • Lines 115 to 120 – The authors mention to use 10 participants per item as a rule of thumb when performing an IRT modeling, stating “…which was met by including 577 patients visiting the preoperative outpatient clinic.” While the authors state 510 patients need to be included, it appears from Table 4 that 40 questions were included in the final IRT-model (requiring 400 participants). Additionally, there is some discrepancy in the number participating and those that actually returned survey data. In line 117, the authors mention 577 participants are included. In line 250, the authors indicate that 577 participants completed the questionnaire. In line 251, the response rate is listed at 55% and 28% across the two sites. Line 74 indicates that written informed consent was obtained from all subjects. It is unclear if 577 participants consented to receive the questionnaire, or 577 participants returned the questionnaire, given the response rates listed. o Please clarify how many participants were approached, how many participants were consented to receive surveys, and how many participants completed surveys at each site. o If 577 participants received the questionnaire and there were response rates of 55% at Erasmus MC (~ 176 participants [0.55*319]) and 28% at ASZ (~73 participants [0.28*258]), please discuss the limitation of not reaching 400 participants needed for the IRT-model. o Given the comments above, please adjust the language in lines 250 to 251 to reflect the number of participants that returned surveys; if applicable. • Lines 122 to 125 – The authors indicate that the questionnaire was adjusted after administration to Erasmus MC participants and prior to administration in ASZ participants. Please provide information on the exact changes that were made (minimally in the supplement). It is unclear to the reader if these changes are significant enough to disrupt the homogeneity of the sample across two groups. Additionally, were any of the changes made presented to the original group (Erasmus MC) in a test-retest method to ensure reliability of the instrument? If not, this should be discussed as a limitation. • Line 371 – The statement “This questionnaire, the RAKQ, contains a set of seven questionnaires covering five different anesthesia techniques and one generic domain…”, is confusing. Is this one questionnaire with seven components/sections, or seven individual questionnaires? Based on previous language I would assume it is 6 sections in which general anesthesia has been divided into 2 components. Please clarify. • Lines 397 to 403 – The challenges and importance of scalability are discussed. In line 399, the authors write, “Improvements in scalability could result in more items concerning less broad subjects. This would lead to lengthier questionnaires that are less user-friendly…”. This is implying potentially adding more items in the future to improve scalability. This is actually contradictory to the methods described in this manuscript where the authors removed items to increase scalability (lines 294 to 333). • Line 418 – The authors describe the potential next steps using computerized-adaptive testing (CAT). While the methods used in this manuscript have been appropriate for developing and validating an instrument, no reliability testing has been performed on the current instrument. Additionally, no description of previous reliability testing on individual items/components that comprise the instrument from the original question sources have been mentioned. Please discuss the need to test reliability prior to developing CAT. • Lines 128 to 129 – The relationship between the education of anesthetic technique and the administration of the developed instrument lacks clarification: o Where clinicians instructed to educate participants in any systematic way? o Were all participants educated on all topics that would be collected, including techniques they would not receive? o Were participants instructed to answer all questions, or was the questionnaire tailored in which participants were instructed to answer only those sections that applied to their anesthetic technique? If the questions were tailored, was an initial question asking the patient what type of anesthetic technique they would be receiving, asked? Doing so would enhance future CAT development, and should be discussed. • Please provide information on completeness of returned surveys at each site (ideally by anesthetic technique). • Careful proof-reading and editing of text is needed (ex: “tot” in abstract line 18; typesetting in table 1 for Factor 3 in Generic items). ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Patient knowledge in anaesthesia: psychometric development of the RAKQ – the Rotterdam Anaesthesia Knowledge Questionnaire PONE-D-23-17620R1 Dear Dr. van den Heuvel, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. 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In my opinion the authors answered correctly all asked questions (all of them, coming both from reviewer 1 and 2), improving the quality of their paper. For this reason and given elapsed time, I decided to accept this work for publication. As suggested by reviewer 2, I think that an original dutch version of the RAKQ could be added to supplementary material. Best Regards, Stefano Turi Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: I appreciate the authors’ careful and thorough reply and consideration to all comments and recommendations. The revisions have significantly improved the quality of this manuscript. I have no additional recommendations beyond one minor suggestion: -On line 263-265, the authors write: “The full list of 60 items, as a non-validated English translation of the Dutch original,…”. If allowed by the journal, consider including the final questions in Dutch in addition to the current English version in the supplement for completeness, as the questions presented are reported as a non-validated English translation. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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