Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionNovember 9, 2023 |
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PONE-D-23-37143Intensity scaling of conventional brain magnetic resonance images avoiding cerebral reference regions: A systematic reviewPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Wiltgen, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Reviewer 2 has raised significant concerns. It is recommended to incorporate additional analyses and clarifications to get the manuscript accepted. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 22 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Your article demonstrates a comprehensive understanding of the subject matter and presents valuable insights. The thorough research and clear presentation make it a strong contribution to the academic community. Reviewer #2: The goal of this study was to review approaches for intensity scaling of T1w and T2w images. The authors focused on an interesting subcategory of methods that either utilize extracerebral reference regions or take T1w/T2w ratios. Based on the manuscript, the rationale of this review is 1) to examine the efficacy of these reviewed method compared to other scaling methods, and 2) to explore potential biophysical information contained in scaled T1w and T2w images. This study has a number of strengths, including the review methodology and the thorough presentation of data. The manuscript itself is also very well written. Nonetheless, I believe the paper could benefit from further discussion of the implications of their findings, and there are a few areas in which more clarification is needed. These concerns are detailed below. 1. The inclusion of T1w/T2w ratio in this review is interesting, but it’s apparently a different approach compared to intensity scaling based on reference regions or histogram matching. I therefore think a dedicated paragraph is needed to justify this rationale and introduce commonly used terms in the literature. In particular, intensity normalization vs. intensity scaling: some people use them interchangeably, but others may have very different definitions (my impression is that scaling involves a linear transformation, such as the Ganzetti method, while intensity normalization include histogram matching and local bias correction methods). 2. Following the previous comment, taking the ratio of T1w over T2w images in my opinion serves as a bias correction (canceling out B1- field). As the authors briefly mentioned in the introduction that “An essential prerequisite is the bias field correction” and scaling is done on “conventional bias-corrected MRI”, I think more introduction is needed about bias correction and its relationship with intensity scaling in image processing. For instance, many bias correction methods exist targeting different kind of bias fields (e.g., take T1w/T2w ratio, estimate local intensity inhomogeneities, apply field maps). This will help further clarify the range of current review. 3. When referring to the Sham 2019 article, the authors present the correlation R square between R1 and “raw T1w/T2w” to be 0.8 (line 288). However, this is the results for T1w/T2w that went through additional bias correction using the group average myelin map on Conte69 mesh. The “regular” bias corrected T1w/T2w (which may be more comparable to the other T1w/T2w ratios reviewed here?) has a correlation R square of 0.74 with R1. Please clarify the definition of “raw” when describing these images. 4. A brief mention of the specificity of the quantitative measures included here would be helpful. Diffusion measures are sensitive to microstructural changes but are not specific. For myelin estimate, I think MWF should be the most robust one out of those included here. Also, I don’t think diffusion metrics and MTR are normally considered as quantitative (maybe single them out as measures related to microstructure/tissue property?). 5. In terms of the correlation with quantitative MRI or histology, I think the discussion should also point out potential biases from correlation approaches. For example, most studies used an across-region/voxel correlation (each dot in the scatter plot represents one region/voxel from one subject, number of datapoint = N(subject) * N(region)). However, some reviewed here, such as Hannoun 2022, did the correlation across subject in each region separately (number of datapoint = N(subject)). Including more datapoint increases statistical power and may have smaller r coefficient to come up as significant. Moreover, when the same subject contributes to more than one datapoint in the correlation, one may also argue that the data included are not independent, therefore violating the assumptions of Pearson’s correlation. 6. Another question not explicitly answered is whether using extracerebral reference regions really differs from or outperforms cerebral ref regions. Both may artificially affect meaningful between-subject variation, and the signal intensity can change with biological factors and pathology (this study shows T1w signal of the eyeball is also correlated with age https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/33270843). Then do the findings of this review support the use of extracerebral ref regions over cerebral ones? 7. Lastly, the discussion would also benefit from an evaluation of approaches for checking the quality of a given scaling method. Is variance reduction the ultimate criterion of a good scaling? Or strong correlation with histology/quantitative MRI, preservation of patient vs. control differences, or elimination of site/batch effect? Minor comments: 1. The phrasing in the abstract and introduction can be misleading. The authors state that they “summarize approaches for intensity scaling of conventional brain MRI that avoid reference regions within the brain”, which gave me the impression that this study only reviews methods that don’t involve reference regions. Conventional brain MRI is also non-specific: FLAIR and proton density are typically acquired for clinical scans but not examined here. The authors could clarify this by using more specific descriptions, like: “summarize approaches for intensity scaling of T1w and T2w images that utilize extracerebral reference regions”. 2. Table 4. Gilmore (2007) study on scaled T1w correlation with MD: better have the number right aligned to be consistent with other positive correlations. 3. Table 4. Gilmore (2007) on scaled T2w correlation with FA and MD: while the r coefficients are not available, it may be useful to indicate the direction of these correlations. 4. Line 398: T1-weighted -> T1w (abbreviation introduced previously) ********** 6. 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Intensity scaling of conventional brain magnetic resonance images avoiding cerebral reference regions: A systematic review PONE-D-23-37143R1 Dear Dr. Wiltgen, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Authors are encouraged to address the minor comments provided by reviewer 2. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. 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Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: The authors have suitably addressed my previous comments. Based on their changes, I have only one minor comment that I think might benefit the manuscript: Revised line 87-92: please make clear that by taking T1w/T2w ratio, only the receiver bias field (B1-) can be exactly canceled out, given that the head position is not changed. B1+ fields are different in T1w and T2w images due to pulse differences and these inhomogeneities in extreme situations (like in 7T) may even affect image contrast (e.g., in a single image, GM/WM contrast is higher in the center and lower in peripheral areas of FOV. This is also why in my opinion integrating data acquired with different protocol is probably never feasible/accurate no matter which scaling method is used, but this may be outside the scope of current discussion). Thank you to the authors for looking into this interesting topic and I look forward to citing this in the future. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Mahdi Mohammadi Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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