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Original SubmissionAugust 13, 2023
Decision Letter - Vijay Kumar, Editor

PONE-D-23-25867Tissue Culture and Agrobacterium-mediated Genetic Transformation of the Oil Crop SunflowerPLOS ONE

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

Reviewer #3: No

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

Reviewer #3: No

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

Reviewer #3: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: No

Reviewer #3: No

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Reviewer #1: Gene transformation is a pivotal procedure for gene editing breeding. This paper use a dominate cultivar to establish the approach, which is usually a very challenging process. This work make the cultivar amenable to gene editing. This is very good.

There is no big problems in this paper. I would prefer an sound explanation why the blue color is evenly appeared on the whole tissue after GUS staining.

There also some minor writing formats errors. Please see below:

Some sentence are incomplete: "Next, were transferred to resistance screening“

Some braces lack space between the previous words: "medium(MS"

Some spaces also missed between two word.

Please make efforts on these writing errors.

Reviewer #2: The manuscript entitled “Tissue Culture and Agrobacterium-mediated Genetic Transformation of the Oil Crop Sunflower” studied regeneration and genetic transformation optimization in sunflower. The manuscript can be accepted after major revisions.

In the abstract section, “In this study, we selected different explants to establish a regeneration system and obtained that direct induction of adventitious buds and rooting by cotyledon nodes was in MS more suitable for the combination of 0.05 mg/L IAA 2.0 mg/L KT, and add 0.9 mg/L IBA.” This sentence needs to be rephrased for better understanding.

In the abstract section, “The rate of resistant seedlings as the highest transformation efficiency reached 8.0 % under the condition of 45 mg/L kanamycin, a bacterial density of OD600 0.8, infection time of 30 min and 3 days of co-cultivation” this sentence needs to change authors should mention optimization parameters in first then need to conclude the transformation efficiency.

The authors mentioned they used 150.0 mg/L Acetosyringone in transformation studies, which is very high; it should be in μM.

In Figure 4. Flow diagram of the tissue culture and regeneration for the ZADT. In the place of the Germination of sterile seeds image, the authors need to include the seedling image.

Figure 6. Expression of a GUS reporter gene from the 35S promoter in resistant seedlings of ZADT. GUS staining and PCR amplification images are poor; they must be replaced with good images.

Figure 8. Detection of the GUS gene of ZADT-positive plants grown for 2 months gel image is very poor, and a ladder needs to be added.

The author must clearly mention the selectable marker gene (nptII) name in the Genetic Transformation of Cotyledonary Nodes section.

Check the spelling of ‘convinient’ throughout the manuscript.

Check the spelling of ‘these system’ in the conclusion section.

Check the spelling of ‘flflower soil’ in the Regeneration optimization section.

The English language of the manuscript is very poor, and there are many grammatical mistakes that need to be corrected.

The authors calculated the transformation efficiency by GUS staining or PCR amplification.? please clarify.

Authors need to mention keywords in the manuscript, and it should be in alphabetical order.

Authors need to cite the latest articles instead of citing old articles.

Reviewer #3: Observation: Please split it into two parts for a better understanding of the sentence. “Plant regeneration protocol is usually a prerequisite to the genetic transformation,

the regeneration conditions are determined by optimising factors such as genotype,

explant type and concentration of the inducing hormones.”

Observation: Too lengthy sentence. Please split it. “Usually, genotype

specificity influences the regeneration of most plants, such as cotton[7], sunflower[6],

etc., so it is essential to develop a reliable and reproducible regeneration protocol for

different genotypes or varieties; mullein(Casuarina equisetifolia) stem segments can

induce of callus, adventitious buds and adventitious roots through different hormone

combinations[8], as do garland chrysanthemum[9].

Observation: Delete this part. It is not required. “plant growth regulators (PGRs) are synthetic chemicals that can replace its functions in vitro and are essential for the plant tissue culture process.”

Observation: Delete or rewrite this paragraph. “Among them, Agrobacterium-mediated method is the most practical and inexpensive technique for the most plants. The GUS encoding

β-glucuronidase[27] is often as a reporter gene to detect transformation efficiency by

histochemical staining and sensitive fluorescence quantification of enzyme activity.”

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Reviewer #1: Yes: Fuqiang Cui

Reviewer #2: No

Reviewer #3: No

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Revision 1

Dear academic editor Vijay Kumar ,

Thank you very much for your careful reading of this thesis and for your valuable comments. I have revised the content of the thesis in the light of the following issues.

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 " This work was financially supported by the Natural Science Foundation of Xinjiang Uygur Autonomous Region (2020D01C020), Project 4 of Xinjiang Autonomous Region Major Special Project (2022A03004-4) and the Outstanding Doctoral Researchers Student Research Innovation Project in Xinjiang University (XJU2022BS050). They provided adequate funding for this study."

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This work was financially supported by the Natural Science Foundation of Xinjiang Uygur Autonomous Region (2020D01C020), Project 4 of Xinjiang Autonomous Region Major Special Project (2022A03004-4) and the Outstanding Doctoral Researchers Student Research Innovation Project in Xinjiang University (XJU2022BS050). The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript.

The funder role statement changes have been added to the cover letter.

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My ethics statement has been moved to the methods section and removed from any other section.

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I have added a separate caption for each figure in my manuscript.

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I have added the support information at the end of the article. The additional data for this section is stored in the online site Figshare.

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I have submitted the original uncropped and unadjusted images of the gel to the online site figshare as required by the journal and mentioned in the cocverletter.

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Reviewer #1: Gene transformation is a pivotal procedure for gene editing breeding. This paper use a dominate cultivar to establish the approach, which is usually a very challenging process. This work make the cultivar amenable to gene editing. This is very good.

There is no big problems in this paper. I would prefer an sound explanation why the blue color is evenly appeared on the whole tissue after GUS staining.

Thank you for your question. This is because the vector pBI121 used on our transgene contains a 35S strong constitutive promoter. Changing the promoter enables the GUS gene to initiate expression in all tissues.

There also some minor writing formats errors. Please see below:

Some sentence are incomplete: "Next, were transferred to resistance screening“

Some braces lack space between the previous words: "medium(MS"

Some spaces also missed between two word.

Please make efforts on these writing errors.

These errors were created due to our negligence and we have corrected them accordingly.

Reviewer #2: The manuscript entitled “Tissue Culture and Agrobacterium-mediated Genetic Transformation of the Oil Crop Sunflower” studied regeneration and genetic transformation optimization in sunflower. The manuscript can be accepted after major revisions.

In the abstract section, “In this study, we selected different explants to establish a regeneration system and obtained that direct induction of adventitious buds and rooting by cotyledon nodes was in MS more suitable for the combination of 0.05 mg/L IAA 2.0 mg/L KT, and add 0.9 mg/L IBA.” This sentence needs to be rephrased for better understanding.

In the abstract section, “The rate of resistant seedlings as the highest transformation efficiency reached 8.0 % under the condition of 45 mg/L kanamycin, a bacterial density of OD600 0.8, infection time of 30 min and 3 days of co-cultivation” this sentence needs to change authors should mention optimization parameters in first then need to conclude the transformation efficiency.

Thank you for your detailed questions that have made this article better. We have revised them one by one.

The authors mentioned they used 150.0 mg/L Acetosyringone in transformation studies, which is very high; it should be in μM.

These errors were created due to our negligence and we have corrected them accordingly.

In Figure 4. Flow diagram of the tissue culture and regeneration for the ZADT. In the place of the Germination of sterile seeds image, the authors need to include the seedling image.

This image has been modified as per the suggestions you have given.

Figure 6. Expression of a GUS reporter gene from the 35S promoter in resistant seedlings of ZADT. GUS staining and PCR amplification images are poor; they must be replaced with good images.

We were fortunate to find genomes of plant material extracted from previous experiments. The images have been re-replaced.

Figure 8. Detection of the GUS gene of ZADT-positive plants grown for 2 months gel image is very poor, and a ladder needs to be added.

We were fortunate to find genomes of plant material extracted from previous experiments. The images have been re-replaced.

The author must clearly mention the selectable marker gene (nptII) name in the Genetic Transformation of Cotyledonary Nodes section.

Based on your suggestions, we have made changes in the corresponding places.

Check the spelling of ‘convinient’ throughout the manuscript.

Check the spelling of ‘these system’ in the conclusion section.

Check the spelling of ‘flflower soil’ in the Regeneration optimization section.

The English language of the manuscript is very poor, and there are many grammatical mistakes that need to be corrected.

Thanks to your suggestion, we have re-corrected all of this article for word and sentence grammar.

The authors calculated the transformation efficiency by GUS staining or PCR amplification.? please clarify.

We calculated the transformation efficiency by PCR amplification. This part we have revised and mentioned at the right place in the article.

Authors need to mention keywords in the manuscript, and it should be in alphabetical order.

Thanks for the reminder that the keywords have been added at the bottom of the abstract.

Authors need to cite the latest articles instead of citing old articles.

Regarding citations, we have attention to new and relevant literature reports. It is estimated that it is still incomplete, and we have added the latest reported literature in this revision. However, regarding sunflower-related reports, there are fewer recent studies, mainly some earlier reports.

Reviewer #3: Observation: Please split it into two parts for a better understanding of the sentence. “Plant regeneration protocol is usually a prerequisite to the genetic transformation, the regeneration conditions are determined by optimising factors such as genotype, explant type and concentration of the inducing hormones.”

Observation: Too lengthy sentence. Please split it. “Usually, genotype

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Decision Letter - Jianhong Zhou, Editor

PONE-D-23-25867R1Tissue culture and Agrobacterium-mediated genetic transformation of the oil crop sunflowerPLOS ONE

Dear Dr. Chen,

Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process.

Please submit your revised manuscript by May 05 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.

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We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript.

Kind regards,

Jianhong Zhou

Staff Editor

PLOS ONE

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Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice.

Additional Editor Comments:

Specifically, please address reviewer 1's comments about the uneven staining.

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Reviewers' comments:

Reviewer's Responses to Questions

Comments to the Author

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Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed

Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed

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2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions?

The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented.

Reviewer #1: Partly

Reviewer #2: Yes

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3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously?

Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available?

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Dear Chen et al.,

I am sorry for my typos, while I have to ask you again for the question: why the

blue color is NOT evenly appeared on the whole tissue after GUS staining.

Otherwise, it's a good paper and revision.

Reviewer #2: (No Response)

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Reviewer #1: No

Reviewer #2: No

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Revision 2

Dear Dr Zhou Jianhong, Editorial Board Member, PLoS One and Peer reviewers:

I am youling Zeng, as a correponding author for this manuscript. We greatly appreciate the comments from you and the reviewers on our paper. We have revised our manuscript carefully as possibly again.

Enclosed please find our revised manuscript (ID:PONE-D-23-25867R1), entitled “Tissue culture and Agrobacterium-mediated genetic transformation of the oil crop sunflower”. In the revised manuscript, we have addressed the comments from you and the reviewer. We are looking forward to hearing good news on publishing this paper in the PLoS One journal.

Sincerely yours,

Corresponding author: Dr. Zeng Youling

e-mail: zeng_ylxju@126.com

Xinjiang Key Laboratory of Biological Resources and Genetic Engineering, College of Life Science and Technology, Xinjiang University, 777 Huarui Street, Urumqi 830091, China

On the comments from Reviewer:

Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice.

Thanks. We have checked the cited literature one by one. The main modifications are the invalid citation deletion, symbols standardization, page number formatting modification and article information checking, and currently, our manuscript has met the requirements of this journal by our proofreads. These modifications can be viewed in the version of the modification mode.

Invalid literature removed included:

2. Zhang HM, ZhaoY, Zhu JK. Thriving under stress: how plants balance growth and the stress response. Cell. 2020; 55:529–43. https://doi.org/10.1016/j.devcel.2020.10.012 PMID: 33290694

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5. Mohamed S, Boehm R, Schnabl H. Stable genetic transformation of high oleic Helianthus annuus L. genotypes with high efficiency. Plant Sci, Oxford. 2006; 171(5):546–54.

21. Wang ZK, Wang YZ, Shang P, Yang C, Yang MM, Huang JX, et al. Overexpression of soybean GmWRI1a stably increases the seed oil content in soybean. Int. J. Mol. Sci. 2022; 23(9):5084–100. https://doi.org/10.3390/ijms23095084 PMID:35563472

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41. Jefferson RA, Kavanagh TA, Bevan MW. GUS fusions: β-glucuronidase as a sensitive and versatile gene fusion marker in higher plants. Embo J. 1987; 6(13):3901–7. https://doi.org/10.1002/j.1460–2075.1987.tb02730.x PMID: 3327686

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On the comments from Editor:

Specifically, please address reviewer 1's comments about the uneven staining.

Reviewer #1: Dear Chen et al.,

I am sorry for my typos, while I have to ask you again for the question: why the

blue color is NOT evenly appeared on the whole tissue after GUS staining.

Otherwise, it's a good paper and revision.

Thank you very much for your question. In this experiment, although the constitutive promoter CaMV 35S was used to control the express of the GUS gene, we observed the uneven staining in transformed sunflower tissues indeed. In some literatures[1, 2], the same appearance for GUS staining was also observed. We can speculate inconsistency staining of different parts maybe due to the fact that the metabolic environments of the cells in different parts are not the same, which leads to certain differences in gene expression and then the staining of different sites was inconsistent.

Reference

[1] Udayabhanu J, Huang TD, Xin SC, Cheng J, Hua YW, Huang HS. Optimization of the transformation protocol for increased efficiency of genetic transformation in Hevea brasiliensis. Plants, 2022, 11, 1067. https://doi.org/10.3390/ plants11081067

[2] Ganguly S, Ghosh G, Ghosh S, Purohit A, Chaudhuri RK, Das S, Chakraborti D. Plumular meristem transformation system for chickpea: an efficient method to overcome recalcitrant tissue culture responses. PCTOC, 2020, 142:493-504. https://doi.org/10.1007/s11240-020-01873-8

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