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PONE-D-23-18840Enhanced Peer-Group Strategies to Support the Prevention of Mother-to-Child HIV transmission leads to increased retention in Care in Uganda: A Randomized controlled trialPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Amone, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by October 1st, 2023. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: General comments: From a statistical methods standpoint, my main question regards whether clustering needs to be accounted for in these analyses. In the discussion (lines 350-351), you note that the limitation that the study was not cluster-randomized. I agree with this, though I would argue that you are performing an individually-randomized group treatment trial (IGRT) since the intervention is delivered in groups despite the participants being individually randomized. IGRTs are important when the group-based delivery of the intervention can have an effect on outcomes. Though, this can also be true if the intervention is delivered to groups who may be correlated in some way. For some background on IGRTs, I suggest reading this article https://ajph.aphapublications.org/doi/full/10.2105/AJPH.2007.127027. Sometimes it is true the group dynamic may not induce any correlation, but I think since the peer groups were defined geographically, there is a greater chance of correlation in groups. IGRTs with a clustered intervention but non-clustered control can be challenging to analyze since statistical procedures need groups defined in both arms. In this instance, since your intervention groups were determined geographically, I think the control groups can be defined in the same way. Failure to account for clustering in analyses can result in type I errors, so I see this change as necessary to ensure proper inferences are made. That change is not possible in Fisher's exact test, but I think that approach should be changed (see specific comment #2). There are approaches to account for clustered data in Kaplan Meier but without knowing which software package was used, I cannot recommend anything. Finally, Cox models have methods which account for clustered data in most software packages. Specific comments: 1. (line 119) What were the possible block sizes? 2. (lines 218-219, 245-248) Significance testing between intervention groups is generally frowned upon because a non-significant p-value does not indicate that groups are the same. For info on the topic in relation to baseline imbalance in randomized trials see Altman, https://doi.org/10.2307/2987510 and Senn, https://doi.org/10.1002/sim.4780131703. My usual recommendation is to remove the significance testing from tables like this and use standardized mean differences (SMD) to assess imbalance (see Austin, https://doi.org/10.1080/03610910902859574). Most often, I see authors using an SMD of 0.1 or 0.2 as a threshold for assessing imbalance, though this could vary by field. 3. Please indicate the software package and version used for these analyses. 4. (lines 284-286) Variable selection methods should be included in the statistical methods section. 5. (lines 284-286) Sun et al. (http://dx.doi.org/10.1016/0895-4356(96)00025-X) found that bivariate screening can miss a variable that may be a confounder even when a p-value higher than what you have used. Bivariate screening can be considered a form of stepwise variable selection, which usually do not do a good job of finding the most appropriate model (e.g., https://doi.org/10.1002/sim.3943). Generally it's better to select based on more robust criteria. I prefer shrinkage-based models, such as lasso, for variable selection. At a minimum, I would encourage using measures which assess the fit of the model. AIC or BIC may be possible, for which you could you Burnham and Anderson (doi: 10.1177/0049124104268644) as a guide. Reviewer #2: Review Plos One This is a randomized controlled trial among women with HIV at urban and rural health facilities in Uganda. The trial recruited 540 women and women were randomized to a peer-group intervention (FLC) or standard of care (SOC). Outcomes of interest were 1. adherence to PMTCT at 6 weeks, 12 and 24 months, 2. self-reported adherence to ART at 6 weeks, 6 and 24 months, and 3. Retention in care at 24 months, 4. HIV status and HIV-free survival of infants at 18 months of age. This study reported an effect of the FLC intervention on retention in care at end of follow-up, HIV-diagnoses among infants, and HIV-free survival among infants. However, no effect as seen for adherence to PMTCT and ART. The findings of this trial are interesting and important implying that peer-group session could increase retention in care and increase survival among their infants. My major concern is that it is not clear what the prespecified primary and secondary aims were of this study. Was this a pre-registered trial? Moreover, the abstract, methods and discussion needs more elaboration on the design of the study, key findings, discuss them in context to other previous research and what the implication future research is. Major comments: Abstract - Suggest clarifying when women were recruited? Various timepoints during pregnancy? - Suggest clarifying the primary and secondary outcomes of the trial investigated in this particular study. - Provide more information on the FLC intervention, when was it introduced, how often did the participants meet, when did the intervention end. Methods - Please clarify if the trial was non-blinded - Pease clarify if the trials was preregistered, and the prespecified primary and secondary endpoints of this trial. Discussion - Lines 309-314: Suggest to provide a summary of all results. Including HIV status and HIV-free survival. - Lines 315-316, was this a randomized trial? Did this study also test a peer-group intervention? - Lines 319-321: Please clarify what authors are referring to. Currently other studies that seem to see an effect are stated. However, authors are then stating that these results are explaining the null-finding. - Lines 345-348: Why would the FLC arm have better economic security? Elaborate more. - Lines: 350-353: I would think that the non-blinding is more of an issue then the individual-based. Cluster randomized also have their weaknesses. - Lines: 353-355: Were also women in the SOC arm given transport reimbursement? - Conclusion: Also include the null findings for your primary outcome and future aspects of this. Table 5 - Please clarify if the HR for the intervention effect was adjusted or not. Minor comments: Abstract - Please add that retention in care was an outcome of interest to the methods as results for them are shown and conclusions are being made. - Please add results for HIV status of HIV-free survival of infant as this this is an outcome stated in the methods section. Introduction - Lines 79-86. Please clarify the design of these studies. - Lines 87-92. Long sentence, suggest to split up into two to make it easier for the reader to follow. Methods - Line 112: Were women scheduled back to study clinic if eligible? - 110-114: Were only women who were newly diagnosed included in the study? Please clarify. - Lines 219-222. This is not part of the primary aim, but a prespecified secondary aims? Recommend mentioning in the outcome section. - Page 9-11: please clarify the prespecified primary outcomes of the trial and secondary outcomes. - Results - Line 258 says 83% retained in care whereas lines 268-269 says 87 % retained in care by the end of follow-up. - Lines 283-286: I would suggest move this paragraph to the methods section - Line 298-299, repeating of “tested” Discussion - Line 335: It is unclear with wat authors mean by “close correlation” - Lines 338-340: Please elaborate more one what is meant by “the lack of more distinct outcome” ********** 6. 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Enhanced Peer-Group Strategies to Support the Prevention of Mother-to-Child HIV transmission leads to increased retention in Care in Uganda: A Randomized controlled trial PONE-D-23-18840R1 Dear Dr. Amone, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. 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PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #3: the paper is surely of high quality bringing solution to the hard issue of retention in care for EMTCT My few comments are listed below -ABSTRACT : line 39 : can you specify moment of randomization line 39 Line 42 : could you change the expression "validated" by plasma viral load measurements as it is not the gold standard for measurement of adherence. You can suppress validated and put ...."and " line 45 : not clear with 4 months enrollment ; question does FLC groups formed during pregnancy prior delivery or prior 6 weeks post partum METHODS Line 156 does group counseling contains infant feeding issues ; if yes specify RESULTS Figure one Trial profile Can timing of each stage be added including randomization DISCUSSION line 422 to 426 the main point to highlight and discuss is HIV free survival. the statement of authors on timing of MTCT in utero or intra partum can be supported by the fact that women were starting option B+ during pregnancy. But a known factor affecting HIV free survival is infant feeding practice. So not only assuming that FLC arm better feed and care for their babies, it should be good to have idea of infant feeding counseling in this arm as previous stated in methodology. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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