Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 9, 2023 |
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PONE-D-23-28429Intra and Inter-rater Reproducibility of the Remote Static Posture Assessment (ARPE) Protocol's Postural ChecklistPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Pilling, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 23 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please include captions for your Supporting Information files at the end of your manuscript, and update any in-text citations to match accordingly. Please see our Supporting Information guidelines for more information: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/supporting-information. Additional Editor Comments: Title: Reproducibility of the Remote Static Posture Assessment (ARPE) Abstract: The abstract provides a clear overview of the study's background, objectives, methods, and key findings. However, it lacks specific details about the results, making it difficult for readers to grasp the significance of the study at a glance. Introduction: 1. The introduction provides a comprehensive background on the importance of remote physiotherapy care during the COVID-19 pandemic. However, it could benefit from more concise language to maintain the reader's attention and focus on the research question. 2. While the introduction sets the stage well, it could be more specific about the existing gaps in the literature related to remote postural assessments and why the ARPE protocol is needed. 3. The transition from the general context to the specific research objectives could be smoother to clarify the study's purpose more effectively. Methods: 1. The methods section is detailed and well-structured, providing a clear understanding of the study design and procedures. However, there are some areas that could be improved: - The rationale for choosing specific inclusion criteria and the significance of these criteria should be explained in more detail. - The training of the raters is briefly mentioned but could be expanded to describe the specific aspects of the ARPE protocol they were trained on and how their training ensured consistency. - The method of recruitment via social media and the "snowball" methodology could benefit from a brief explanation for readers who may not be familiar with these terms. - The section on data analysis mentions using SPSS and Excel, but it lacks information on the specific statistical tests used, which should be included for transparency. Results: 1. The results section presents the key findings of the study, and while it provides important information about the reproducibility of the ARPE protocol, there are several points that require attention: - The sample size and characteristics are adequately described in Table 1, which is helpful for readers to understand the study's population. - The presentation of intra-rater reproducibility results in Table 2 is clear and detailed, showing high reliability (k values above 0.92) and excellent percentage of agreement (%C) values for all items. - However, the presentation of inter-rater reproducibility results in Table 3 is less clear. While it mentions that four postural variables exhibited k values below 0.4 and %C values below 50%, it doesn't provide a clear explanation or discussion of the implications of these findings. The reasons for these lower reproducibility values need to be addressed. - The discussion of technical challenges related to remote assessments is insightful, but it would be helpful to elaborate on how these challenges may have influenced the results, especially the lower reproducibility values for certain variables. - The limitations section briefly mentions technical challenges but could benefit from further discussion regarding their potential impact on the results. Additionally, it might be valuable to discuss any potential limitations related to the study's sample characteristics, such as age and gender distribution, and their relevance to the reproducibility findings. 2. The presentation of results is generally clear, but the discussion of lower reproducibility values in inter-rater assessments lacks depth and explanation. It's essential to provide insights into why certain variables had lower reproducibility and how these findings may affect the practical use of the ARPE protocol in clinical settings. 3. The conclusion summarizes the key findings but could be strengthened by discussing the practical implications of the results in more detail. Specifically, it should address how the recommendations to exclude certain items from the ARPE assessment impact its usability in telecare and remote clinical practice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: N/A ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This is a study that addresses an interesting issue: telerehabilitation-based assessments. In general, the manuscript is well written, although the authors should review the coherence linking some paragraphs, specially in introduction and discussion sections. Some minor comments are appendend below: - Keywords: This reviewer encourages authors to add more keywords (as long as the platform allows it), such as balance, postural assesment, etc. INTRODUCTION SECTION: - Developing clinical protocols and therapeutic guidelines for remote physiotherapy care has become indispensable. This deepens discussions regarding the criteria associated with this clinical practice. In this context, research in telerehabilitation (remote care) aids in enhancing evidence-based practices, refining distance assessment procedures, and optimizing the rehabilitation process [1,2,6].: This paragraph is a bit repetitive and confusing, especially the sentence "This deepens discussions regarding the criteria associated with this clinical practice.". It gives the feeling of a "filler paragraph". Thus, a primary challenge in implementing remote-based physiotherapy is ensuring the ability to conduct valid and reliable assessments, such as postural assessments. Validity and reproducibility are essential measurement properties that must underpin selecting and developing tools for clinical, educational, or research practices [7].: It is too short a paragraph. This reviewer suggests linking it somehow with the previous paragraph because there is no continuity in the reading. - The Remote Static Posture Assessment (ARPE) protocol has been recently developed and validated to address this gap. This protocol involves acquiring photographs through remote means that are then interpreted using a Postural Checklist [8]. Concerning the reliability of these remote postural assessments, the ARPE protocol still needs research to demonstrate the precision of the results obtained by different raters (inter-rater reproducibility) and by assessments conducted by the same rater at different times (intra-rater reproducibility) [7,9]. Given that the results of the postural assessment are crucial in determining the decisions that form the basis of the therapeutic plan for postural deviations, it is essential to understand these measurement properties before integrating this protocol into remote physiotherapy practice [7,10-12].: This reviewer recommends the authors to develop other aspects such as balance, posture, etc. - This study aims to assess the intra- and inter-rater reproducibility of the Remote Static Posture Assessment (ARPE) protocol's Postural Checklist.: Please link the objective of the study to the previous paragraph and present a hypothesis.. METHODS SECTION: - Sample size: Please move the sample size information from the beginning of the material and methods section to the statistical analysis section and inform about the participants that you need for having statistically significant differences. - Inclusion and exclusion criteria: the authors indicate that they included adults over 18 years of age, but do not specify whether an age limit was established. It should be taken into account that the older the age, the less stability and therefore the more confounding factors. On the other hand, the absence of prosthesis should be considered as an exclusion criterion, i.e., people with a prosthesis were excluded. It is strange to see that there was only one exclusion criterion. - Please add the subsection "statistical analysis". Also, significance should be estimated through p-value. RESULTS SECTION: - Fifty-one participants were involved in this study (Table 1).: Please, elaborate and describe the sample. You cannot simply give a sentence in this regard. Altough it is detailed in table 1, you must describe at least some things of your sample in a paragraph. Also, you need a flow chart of the participants. DISCUSSION SECTION: - To the best of our knowledge, the study is original, and the results demonstrate that the checklist can be used remotely, making it suitable for teleassistance.: Please elaborate a little more on this paragraph. The first paragraph of the discussion should report the results and whether or not the hypotheses and objectives of the study have been met. - While the Postural Checklist does not offer quantitative details, such as angular or linear values of body proportions, it enables a comprehensive assessment of static posture. It also gives directions and reference points to help the rater interpret postural observations, making it easier to compare and identify asymmetries in both the frontal and sagittal planes, even without any markings on the person being assessed, which is crucial for remote care. Observing anatomical points is a commonly used method, easily applicable to any ergonomic or clinical study where the qualitative assessment of static posture is the primary objective. This technique enables the mapping of postural deviations across varying degrees and levels of severity [21,22]. However, many professionals who observe anatomical points for qualitative postural assessment often neglect methodological standards that ensure the consistent replication of findings, impairing future comparisons [23].: This paragraph seems to be taken from the literature rather than a conclusion of the authors. - A search of the PubMed, Scopus, and Embase databases revealed 794 studies showcasing various tools for assessing body posture suited for remote assessment. However, only three of these studies provided the measurement properties of these tools [27].: This is not a systematic review. This information is superfluous. Reviewer #2: Dear authors, Abstract -Generally acceptable. Introduction -Generally acceptable. Can you explain in a paragraph why we are doing posture analysis in this section? You can also give brief information about other methods used for posture analysis. Materials and Methods - Can you give some more details about how the measurements were made? How were they dressed? From which directions were measurements taken (lateral, frontal or back side) How was the camera positioned? Measurements were taken from a distance of several meters. These need to be standardized. Results Discussion: - You need to discuss your results a little more in the Discussion section. You need to comment further on the 4 areas with low measurement validity. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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