Peer Review History
Original SubmissionJune 5, 2023 |
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PONE-D-23-16921Integrating Image and Gene-Data with a Semi-Supervised Attention Model for Prediction of KRAS Gene Mutation Status in Non-Small Cell Lung CancerPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Zhao, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 06 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Additional Editor Comments: AE Comments: Thank you for submitting your manuscript. I appreciate the efforts you have put into this research. I have received feedback from the reviewers, and I would like to share their comments and suggestions with you. 1) Clarity and Comprehension: Reviewer 1 points out a lack of clarity in the explanation of your proposed method. The reviewer found it difficult to understand, making it challenging to reproduce the experiments. Specific feedback has been given regarding figures and their captions (Fig. 1, Fig. 2, and Fig. 5), as well as the use of equations (e.g., Equations 8 and 9). 2) Novelty and Originality: Reviewer 2 has raised concerns about the originality of the work. It's essential to clarify the unique contributions of your research compared to existing literature. 3) Related Work: Both reviewers emphasize the need to improve the section on related works. The current version lists existing works without analyzing their limitations. Consider adding a more detailed analysis and perhaps summarizing existing studies in a tabular form to improve readability. 4) Methodology and Experimental Details: Both reviewers have made suggestions to provide more information on the methodology, hyperparameters, network configurations, and a thorough description of the experimental phases. 5) Source Code: Reviewer 2 suggests providing a GitHub link for the source code to enhance repeatability and verification of the study. 6) Grammar and Typos: Both reviewers have found grammatical errors and typos in the manuscript. It is advised to run the manuscript through a grammar checker and proofread it carefully. 7) Additional Feedback: Reviewer 2 has provided an extensive list of recommendations to enhance the quality and clarity of the manuscript. These include improving the introduction, elaborating on tables, addressing overfitting, revisiting results, and ensuring that the references are up-to-date. In light of the feedback, I recommend revising your manuscript, addressing the concerns raised by the reviewers. This will not only enhance the clarity and quality of your research but also strengthen its contribution to the field. I hope this feedback is constructive and assists you in enhancing your manuscript. I look forward to receiving your revised submission. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This study proposes a deep learning-based methodology for classifying the oncogenic gene KRAS, which frequently involves non-small cell lung cancer (NSCLC), using CT images and genetic information. Their main contributions are the development of the 'Semi-supervised Multimodal Multiscale Attention' mechanism and the novel 'Attention-guided Feature Aggregation' module. The proposed method appears to be novel and innovative, and the data and analysis seem to fully support their claims. However, due to the lack of clarity in the explanation of the proposed method, it is difficult to understand, making it seem impossible to reproduce the experiments. Therefore, 'minor revisions' are suggested to improve the paper. In Section 3.1, while it seems that the input of the Supervised Multilevel Fusion Segmentation Network (SMF-SN) is X_L and the output is Y_L, in Fig. 1. (a), it is not clearly introduced what the input and output of SMF-SN are, as both X_L and Y_L are shown. This requires modification. Overall, the introduction of the proposed system is difficult to comprehend. For example, in Fig. 2, there is only one ASPP block, but the caption suggests the presence of multiple ASPPs. Additionally, in Fig. 1 (b), is the input of the Student Model S_L and the input of the Teacher Model C_U? How are the predictions of the Student and Teacher integrated? In Fig. 5, an explanation is needed for 'Genes Selection'. The paper requires revisions for grammatical errors. Equations must be used in the right way (e.g. Equations 8 and 9 should have the first two letters of Recall and Precision in italics.) Reviewer #2: The experimental study is interesting information in this paper. However, the main weakness of the paper lies in its lack of originality and novelty. The following suggestions may be considered to enhance the quality and clarity of the manuscript 1- The motivation is not clear. Why did this work? Is any problem does it address that the previous methods cannot? 2- The introduction section could be improved by clarifying the similarities and differences between the related work and the proposed method are not clearly described. It is recommended to add a separate subsection and clear description in this regard. 3- Related work: The paper only lists existing works in the research community without any analysis of existing work's limitations. Therefore, I suggest that the authors mention more summary and limitation analysis so that readers can easily appreciate the contributions made by this paper. 4- In the related works, existing studies can also be summarized in a tabular form to improve readability 5- Elaborate all tables briefly. 6- How to deal with overfitting in your model? 7- Results and illustrations need to be revisited. 8- Background information of this work can be provided more systematically and comprehensively, i.e. logic of this paper should be further enhanced. 9- - Hyperparameters of the model: - The initialization method is not mentioned. 10- Similarly, the network configurations can be summarized in a table e.g. input size, # of layers, learning rate, optimizers etc. 11- Furthermore, the study's application is not explained in an intelligible manner. You should include an experimentation section to provide readers with a thorough description of all the experimental phases in a straightforward and accessible manner. 12- The theoretical and practical sections of the study are not adequately convincing, and the writing style is absolutely insufficient to highlight the subjective contribution to your research when compared to past research findings. 13- Another important aspect of scientific research is the capacity to repeat the experiment or study in a different setting and reuse or adapt the findings. This is an important point, and you could elaborate on it further in the discussion area to give additional scientific value to this critical study. 14- Please include a link in the research article that allows the complete applied side of this study to be downloaded for verification, validation, and inspection, as well as so that it may be used as a scientific reference. The code source of this work must be added as a comment to the paper and must be uploaded as a GitHub link to be visible and referenceable. 15- In addition to these specific recommendations, the authors should also run the manuscript through a grammar checker like Grammarly to address any language or grammatical errors. Finally, the authors should ensure that all references cited in the manuscript are up-to-date and relevant to the research topic. 16- Typos/Grammatical Errors: Subsection Segmentation facilitates classification Deep Convolutional Nneural Networks --> N should be removed from neural Section Conclusion: Mutation Status in Non-Small Cell Lung The model --> period (.) is missing network (S2 MF-CN). fusion. --> the extra period (.) should be removed ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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Integrating Image and Gene-Data with a Semi-Supervised Attention Model for Prediction of KRAS Gene Mutation Status in Non-Small Cell Lung Cancer PONE-D-23-16921R1 Dear Dr. Zhao, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Jeonghwan Gwak, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): AE: After careful consideration and based on the insightful feedback from our reviewers, I am delighted to announce that your paper is now deemed publishable. Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: Yes: Zahid Ullah ********** |
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