Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJune 15, 2023 |
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PONE-D-23-17325Researchers’ experiences of the design and conduct challenges associated with parallel-group cluster-randomised trials and views on a novel open-cohort designPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Surr, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 15 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This is a well written manuscript which details qualitative findings from a group of trial experts on discussions of design limitations and potential of open cohort designs. While the study may have benefited from wider perspectives which would have been possible if done later, it is an interesting paper that adds important points to the literature and the consideration of trial methods. Of note the authors should proofread carefully as trial is spelled trail in their abstract Reviewer #2: This is an interesting paper which invites thinking differently the way a cluster randomized trial in nursing homes could be planned and managed. I have been really interest in reading it. I would have the following comments: - Page 4, second paragraph: authors claim that there are two options which are the closed cohort design and the repeated cross-sectional one. So they seem to ignore the design in which there exists a continuous recruitment with an individual follow-up. This may be the case when nursing homes are recruited and randomized and then residents are recruited once an event occurs, such as an infection. This was for instance the case in Boocvar et al. J Am Geriatr Soc 2020;68:2329-2335. Why did authors ignore this design? Actually, it can be viewed as an open cohort design provided the recruitment is continuous. But I suggest adding some discussion on it. - Page5, line 87: a high attrition rate is also a source of bias. This should be acknowledged. - Page 5, line 96: adapting the research question to overcome the attrition problem is a highly debatable approach. I suggest that authors assert that it is surely not the right way to manage attrition. - Figure 1. Resident D is indeed not taken into account when analyzing data in a R-CS analysis. That is true. However, do we loss many data? How numerous are residents D? This is never discussed in the paper. My question is: is it better to invest a lot (time, resources, etc) to catch residents D? Or is it better to miss them, and conduct a R-CS trial? This is of major importance, in my opinion, and this should be, at least, discussed in the last section of the paper. - Page 8: authors define what they call an “open cohort” or “dynamic cohort” design. Actually, a (repeated) cross-sectional design can also be viewed as a specific type of open cohort, in which participants B and D would not be included for the assessment, except if there was an assessment at month 6). This could be acknowledged. - Page 13 Table 2. This table, on its own, is very difficult to be understood. Personally, it is only after having read the full text that I understood it. So I suggest that authors make it more clear by completing it, or that they drop it. - Page 15 – P6: I fully agree with the participant who asserted that nursing homes are not closed cohort. And I think that this idea should be more underlined than it is presently. - Page 15 line 300: again, loss to follow-up may induce bias, not just loss of power and generalizability. - Page 16, line 336: I disagree with the idea that to manage loss to follow-up, trialists can limit the follow-up period. This is, obviously, mathematically true. However, this changes the research question, by changing the time frame of the outcome. It is not only a question of sustainability. It really depends on the date at which the primary outcome is assessed. This is of major importance, and this should be more acknowledged (cf previous comment on page 5), although authors say that participants considered it was “sub-optimal” (page 17). - Page 23, line 511: I am wondering whether all economists (I am not an economist) agree that for QALYS, death means zero. Is there any reference for that? - Page 29-30: you may decide, in the eligibility criteria, that a resident, to be included in the statistical analysis, should have spent at least 2 months, for instance, in the nursing home. Nothing is said about that. Do we have to take into account all the residents, systematically? Or are we allowed to specify some selection criteria, notably criteria related to the exposition (or lack of exposition) to the intervention, due to a small period of time in the nursing home? - Page 31, line 686: as far as I know, people join a care home depending on whether there are some available places, and they generally join a care home which is not far from their personal home. So, I do not believe at all that some resident may chose their care home depending on the group they have been allocated to. For me it is a purely theoretical risk. - Discussion: if one intends to conduct an open-cohort design, how sample size could be determined? I suspect that many parameters had to be a priori specified (such as the proportion of participants who disappear), and surely, a lot of work has to be done on that topic. This should be discussed. Minor comments - Page 2 – line 5: « trail » should be trial - Page 4 – line 62: clusters can be allocated to groups or to sequences (cross-over or stepped-wedge cluster randomized trials) ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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